Arzoo..

[akanksha]

Aarzoo..​

Sapnon ke aakash tale, kalpana ki hawaon se door
Palkon ke saaye tale, nazar ki parchaiyon se door..
Ehsaas ke kadmon tale, aahaton ki dhakan se door
Aawazon ke daayre tale, raat ki arzoo se door..​

Jise dhoondti hai neegahain , kya wahi ho tum..​

girti baarish ki boondon tale, badalon ki chadar se door
behti hawaon ki narmiyon tale, jagti huyi kamna se door..
jaagte huye armanon ke tale, soti huyi jannat se door
saath nibhane ki chaah tale, har subha ki arzoo se door.​

Jise dhoondti hai neegahain, kya wahi ho tum.. ​

Bhawna ki bheeni khushbu tale, umang ki us raah se door
Jeewan ki mannaton tale, dooriyon ki deewaron se door
Chahaton ki muskaan ke tale, sundar se us ghar se door
Khushi ke har sagar tale, khamoshi ki arzoo se door..​

Jise dhhondti hai neegahain, kya wahi ho tum.. ​

Thamti saason ke tale, geeli un neegahon se door
Jise dhoondti hai neegahain , kya wahi ho tum..​

Jeene ki sabhi aashaon tale, muskurahat ki kiran se door
Jise dhoondti hai neegahain, kya wahi ho tum.. ​

Komal chandni ke tale, nisha ki mand mehek se door
Jise dhoondti hai neegahain, kya wahi ho tum..​

Arzoo ki is chaah tale, Arzoo ki in sabhi arzuon se door
Jise dhoondti hai neegahain, kya wahi ho tum… ​

Akanksha .. ​

Ps: This is my first attempt to write something in hindi.
I know I suck at it, nevertheless..
I tried..to give word to my feelings.. ​

Jai kilkii taull.. ​

 

[prashantacmet]

eeee AKANSHA........ terre pai to Hindi bhi aawe......... haam to nu sochhu baithhe the.........ek tu eibblok convent tai baahar likdi kona.............................eibb majhe dictionary na thaanni padde...................aachha pandaa chhut gya ...................hehhehehheh........................ROOKKA@ CONVENT..........................

anyway......Nice attempt..............

 

[aman]

really good attempt

 

[manu14]

superb collection of very nice words
meaningful too
great poetry
thanks for sharing
regards

 

[yashbeniwal]

weldone.........

Hi akansha..........

Tussi chaa gaye o ji.....................

welcome to kilki Taull !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hum aapki is rachna se khushho kar aapko "Kilki Taull" ki membership dete hain.........
mubarak ho aapko.........
n keep posting........

thanks for such a lovely poem........

Aarzoo..​

Sapnon ke aakash tale, kalpana ki hawaon se door
Palkon ke saaye tale, nazar ki parchaiyon se door..
Ehsaas ke kadmon tale, aahaton ki dhakan se door
Aawazon ke daayre tale, raat ki arzoo se door..​

Jise dhoondti hai neegahain , kya wahi ho tum..​

girti baarish ki boondon tale, badalon ki chadar se door
behti hawaon ki narmiyon tale, jagti huyi kamna se door..
jaagte huye armanon ke tale, soti huyi jannat se door
saath nibhane ki chaah tale, har subha ki arzoo se door.​

Jise dhoondti hai neegahain, kya wahi ho tum.. ​

Bhawna ki bheeni khushbu tale, umang ki us raah se door
Jeewan ki mannaton tale, dooriyon ki deewaron se door
Chahaton ki muskaan ke tale, sundar se us ghar se door
Khushi ke har sagar tale, khamoshi ki arzoo se door..​

Jise dhhondti hai neegahain, kya wahi ho tum.. ​

Thamti saason ke tale, geeli un neegahon se door
Jise dhoondti hai neegahain , kya wahi ho tum..​

Jeene ki sabhi aashaon tale, muskurahat ki kiran se door
Jise dhoondti hai neegahain, kya wahi ho tum.. ​

Komal chandni ke tale, nisha ki mand mehek se door
Jise dhoondti hai neegahain, kya wahi ho tum..​

Arzoo ki is chaah tale, Arzoo ki in sabhi arzuon se door
Jise dhoondti hai neegahain, kya wahi ho tum… ​

Akanksha .. ​

Ps: This is my first attempt to write something in hindi.
I know I suck at it, nevertheless..
I tried..to give word to my feelings.. ​

Jai kilkii taull.. ​

 

[devdahiya]

Nice words Akanksha bebey.Keep it up!

 

[vijay]

Good !

Good Akanksha !

At last u did it in hindi ! I like that.

Really nice poem.

Waiting for the next poem !!!!!!

 

[vijay]

As my nature, i can't resist myself to continue..........


Khawabo ke asmaan par, haqeekat ke dharatl se door
Raat ke andheron mein, din ke safed ujaalo se door
Dil ki gahraiyon mein, magar dimag ki soch se door
Ek tamanna ki tarah pale, par abhi tak sachaai se door

Jise dhoondti hai neegahain , kya wahi ho tum..

Rangeen sapno mein tum, lekin asal zindagi se door
Baarish ki bundo mein tum, waqt ki dhoop se door
Meri har kalpana mein tum, par mere vicharon se door
Jis pe jaan lootaane ka dil kare, maut ki parwaah se door

Jise dhoondti hai neegahain , kya wahi ho tum..

 

[ratheetheraist]

ohh........

so akanksha ... hindi kar di sai tanney bhi ibbkey to badhiyaa aalii...... achi kavita likhi hai.... ibb ek do hindi main ee aan dey.... those words were really nicley used nd really an extra effort ws made........ good one

keep up the pace .........

 

[akanksha]

cont.

vijay.. even i cudnt resist.. here it goes...

sitraon ke aakash tale, duniyan ki nazron door
duaon ke daaman tale, sabhi uljhanon se door
pehli wo hansti subha ke tale, din ke thamte ujalon se door
yaadon ke likhe pannon ke tale,satate hue un shabdon se door

jise doondhti hai neegahain, kya wahi ho tum..

mere vicharon ke dil ke tale, par shayad jaan se door
raat ke hansi saaye tale, suraj ki kirnon se door
pass rehne ki chaah tale, dukh ki har Aarzoo se door
rangon ki har holi tale, berang si har preet se door..

jise dhoondti hai neegahain, kya wahi ho tum..
akanksha.. ​

As my nature, i can't resist myself to continue..........


Khawabo ke asmaan par, haqeekat ke dharatl se door
Raat ke andheron mein, din ke safed ujaalo se door
Dil ki gahraiyon mein, magar dimag ki soch se door
Ek tamanna ki tarah pale, par abhi tak sachaai se door

Jise dhoondti hai neegahain , kya wahi ho tum..

Rangeen sapno mein tum, lekin asal zindagi se door
Baarish ki bundo mein tum, waqt ki dhoop se door
Meri har kalpana mein tum, par mere vicharon se door
Jis pe jaan lootaane ka dil kare, maut ki parwaah se door

Jise dhoondti hai neegahain , kya wahi ho tum..

 

[akanksha]

yes vikas.. i just tried.. am really glad you liked it..

extra effort? nahi re, just randomly wrote it in sum minutes... bus just felt like.. was thinking of someone... so just wrote... no extra efforts in this one...

akanksha..

so akanksha ... hindi kar di sai tanney bhi ibbkey to badhiyaa aalii...... achi kavita likhi hai.... ibb ek do hindi main ee aan dey.... those words were really nicley used nd really an extra effort ws made........ good one

keep up the pace .........

 

[akanksha]

hey yash..thank you so much!!
kilkii taull's membership?? hmm... great!!!!!!

i liked the word u have used 'rachna'...
thanks for your encouragement.. surely needed that..esp. it was first time i ever wrote anything in hindi.. thanks!

Hi akansha..........

Tussi chaa gaye o ji.....................

welcome to kilki Taull !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hum aapki is rachna se khushho kar aapko "Kilki Taull" ki membership dete hain.........
mubarak ho aapko.........
n keep posting........

thanks for such a lovely poem........

 

[akanksha]

thanks a lot!

regards

Akanksha..

superb collection of very nice words
meaningful too
great poetry
thanks for sharing
regards

 

[akanksha]

prashant, didnt get your joke..

although its nice to know that u dont have to use the dictionary.. am glad!

akanksha..

eeee AKANSHA........ terre pai to Hindi bhi aawe......... haam to nu sochhu baithhe the.........ek tu eibblok convent tai baahar likdi kona.............................eibb majhe dictionary na thaanni padde...................aachha pandaa chhut gya ...................hehhehehheh........................ROOKKA@ CONVENT..........................

anyway......Nice attempt..............

 

[vijay]

Mere jeevan ki saans mein basi, waqt ki hawavon se door
Zindagi jiske naam kar di maine, woh meri wafaaon se door
Mahak sakta tha gulistan bhi, lekin woh in fizaaon se door
Ek khawab dekha tha abhi, shaayad unki tamanna se door

Jise dhoondti hai neegahain , kya wahi ho tum.....

Ye waqt aur kya dikhayega, hum aaj unki zindagi se door
Unki neeyat hum pehchaan gaye, woh hai bandagi se door
Aab aa gaya hai zindagi ka sabak, jhuth hai sach se door
"Vijay" ne zindagi gujaari hai, is matlab ki duniyaa se door

Jise dhoondti hai neegahain , kya wahi ho tum.....

 

[akanksha]

ek manzil nahi ek raah hai, yahi is pyaar ki chaah hai​

waqt dikhata hai gum bhi, bus tabhi to jeena seekhte hai hum tum aur sabhi..
waqt ke panne hote nahi khush hamesha, karte hai na jaane kitni baar wo khafa..
jo jaagi hai nai umang , jo gaata hai mann yeh meethi tarang​

jise dhhondti hain neeghahain, kya tum wahi ho..​

kiya jaata nahi sabhi ko bhawnaon ke pass​

dil ke kareeb hote hain bus kuch khaas..
mann ki dagar par dost chalten hain saath
thaame har lamhe mai humahra haath..​

jeewan ki is Aarzoo se milen hai hum aaj...​

jise dhoondti hai neegahain, kya wahi ho tum.. ​

akanksha..​

Mere jeevan ki saans mein basi, waqt ki hawavon se door

Zindagi jiske naam kar di maine, woh meri wafaaon se door​

Mahak sakta tha gulistan bhi, lekin woh in fizaaon se door​

Ek khawab dekha tha abhi, shaayad unki tamanna se door​

Jise dhoondti hai neegahain , kya wahi ho tum.....​

Ye waqt aur kya dikhayega, hum aaj unki zindagi se door​

Unki neeyat hum pehchaan gaye, woh hai bandagi se door​

Aab aa gaya hai zindagi ka sabak, jhuth hai sach se door​

"Vijay" ne zindagi gujaari hai, is matlab ki duniyaa se door​

Jise dhoondti hai neegahain , kya wahi ho tum.....​

 

[vijay]

ek manzil nahi ek raah hai, yahi is pyaar ki chaah hai​

waqt dikhata hai gum bhi, bus tabhi to jeena seekhte hai hum tum aur sabhi..
waqt ke panne hote nahi khush hamesha, karte hai na jaane kitni baar wo khafa..
jo jaagi hai nai umang , jo gaata hai mann yeh meethi tarang​

jise dhhondti hain neeghahain, kya tum wahi ho..​

kiya jaata nahi sabhi ko bhawnaon ke pass​

dil ke kareeb hote hain bus kuch khaas..
mann ki dagar par dost chalten hain saath
thaame har lamhe mai humahra haath..​

jeewan ki is Aarzoo se milen hai hum aaj...​

jise dhoondti hai neegahain, kya wahi ho tum.. ​

akanksha..​

Manzil ki talaash mein hain hum, koi wada to kare
Zindagi tammanaaon ka safar hai, koi iraada to kare
Waqt kab kahan kisi ke liye rookta hai, koi socha to kare
Is dil ke armaano ka kya karoon jo ek bewafa ki eechha kare

jise dhhondti hain neeghahain, kya tum wahi ho..

Dil chahta hai bhoola doon aaj sab kuch jo socha tha
Kitna waqt gujar gaya kisi bewafaa ke intezaar mein
Ye zindagi kya bar bar milegi jo uski yaad mein gujaar doon
Aaj phir nai tamanna jaagi hai shyaad kisi ke pyar mein

jise dhhondti hain neeghahain, kya tum wahi ho..

 

[akanksha]

subha ki khulti palken, ek nai din ki shuruwat​

ek nai din ke saath jeete hai hum leke ek aas..​

jo reh na sake gum mai saath eh dost, wo tha nahi kabhi bhi pyaar
gum ki ehmiyat ko jaane na do ek aise insaan ke paas..​

jisne dekha nahi doobara un arzoo bhari neegahon ko..​

jise dhoondti hain neegahain, kya tum wahi ho..​

ek raste par kabhi bhi rakhna nahi neegahain eh dost​

raste to hote hi hain, aage badhne ke liye​

nai log, nai ehsaason ko apnane ke liye..
jisne samjha nahi eh dost bhawnaon ki sacchai ko,
nahi tha wo pyaar kabhi in jeewan ki gehrayon mai
beete huye un lamhon ko bhulana nahi eh dost, ​

wahi to jeene ki sacchai se waakif karati hain..​

jise dhoondti hai negahain, kya tum wahi ho.. ​

akanksha..​

Manzil ki talaash mein hain hum, koi wada to kare

Zindagi tammanaaon ka safar hai, koi iraada to kare​

Waqt kab kahan kisi ke liye rookta hai, koi socha to kare​

Is dil ke armaano ka kya karoon jo ek bewafa ki eechha kare​

jise dhhondti hain neeghahain, kya tum wahi ho..​

Dil chahta hai bhoola doon aaj sab kuch jo socha tha​

Kitna waqt gujar gaya kisi bewafaa ke intezaar mein​

Ye zindagi kya bar bar milegi jo uski yaad mein gujaar doon​

Aaj phir nai tamanna jaagi hai shyaad kisi ke pyar mein​

jise dhhondti hain neeghahain, kya tum wahi ho..​

 

[sunitahooda]

Achi cheejon ki taarif me aap kam shabdon ka upyog kyu kartey hain? waise to dil se nikale do shabd hi kaafi hotey hain....smiley bhi kam use kiye....aapki tabiyat to theek sai na

so akanksha ... hindi kar di sai tanney bhi ibbkey to badhiyaa aalii...... achi kavita likhi hai.... ibb ek do hindi main ee aan dey.... those words were really nicley used nd really an extra effort ws made........ good one

keep up the pace .........

 

[rbenyol]

Aarzoo..​

Sapnon ke aakash tale, kalpana ki hawaon se door
Palkon ke saaye tale, nazar ki parchaiyon se door..
Ehsaas ke kadmon tale, aahaton ki dhakan se door
Aawazon ke daayre tale, raat ki arzoo se door..​

Jise dhoondti hai neegahain , kya wahi ho tum..​

girti baarish ki boondon tale, badalon ki chadar se door
behti hawaon ki narmiyon tale, jagti huyi kamna se door..
jaagte huye armanon ke tale, soti huyi jannat se door
saath nibhane ki chaah tale, har subha ki arzoo se door.​

Jise dhoondti hai neegahain, kya wahi ho tum.. ​

Bhawna ki bheeni khushbu tale, umang ki us raah se door
Jeewan ki mannaton tale, dooriyon ki deewaron se door
Chahaton ki muskaan ke tale, sundar se us ghar se door
Khushi ke har sagar tale, khamoshi ki arzoo se door..​

Jise dhhondti hai neegahain, kya wahi ho tum.. ​

Thamti saason ke tale, geeli un neegahon se door
Jise dhoondti hai neegahain , kya wahi ho tum..​

Jeene ki sabhi aashaon tale, muskurahat ki kiran se door
Jise dhoondti hai neegahain, kya wahi ho tum.. ​

Komal chandni ke tale, nisha ki mand mehek se door
Jise dhoondti hai neegahain, kya wahi ho tum..​

Arzoo ki is chaah tale, Arzoo ki in sabhi arzuon se door
Jise dhoondti hai neegahain, kya wahi ho tum… ​

Akanksha .. ​

Ps: This is my first attempt to write something in hindi.
I know I suck at it, nevertheless..
I tried..to give word to my feelings.. ​

Jaikilkii taull..
Rap chik girllllll..sweet poem...really good.........kahan se churaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.....sorry......majak kar raha tha...good love with arazoo.......keep it up​