Arzoo..

[yashbeniwal]

Nice..............

Hi Akanksha,

I apperciate ur simplicity and ur creation...........
agar aap humein itni acchi kavitaein sunaati rahegee to encouragement ka toh der laga denge hum Akki ji...............Akanksha thoda bada hai iseliye "Akki" bol raha hoon chalega naa.............jai kilki Taull !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hey yash..thank you so much!!
kilkii taull's membership?? hmm... great!!!!!!

i liked the word u have used 'rachna'...
thanks for your encouragement.. surely needed that..esp. it was first time i ever wrote anything in hindi.. thanks!

 

[vijay]

subha ki khulti palken, ek nai din ki shuruwat​

ek nai din ke saath jeete hai hum leke ek aas..​

jo reh na sake gum mai saath eh dost, wo tha nahi kabhi bhi pyaar
gum ki ehmiyat ko jaane na do ek aise insaan ke paas..​

jisne dekha nahi doobara un arzoo bhari neegahon ko..​

jise dhoondti hain neegahain, kya tum wahi ho..​

ek raste par kabhi bhi rakhna nahi neegahain eh dost​

raste to hote hi hain, aage badhne ke liye​

nai log, nai ehsaason ko apnane ke liye..
jisne samjha nahi eh dost bhawnaon ki sacchai ko,
nahi tha wo pyaar kabhi in jeewan ki gehrayon mai
beete huye un lamhon ko bhulana nahi eh dost, ​

wahi to jeene ki sacchai se waakif karati hain..​

jise dhoondti hai negahain, kya tum wahi ho.. ​

akanksha..​

Ek aur nai subah ke saath ek aur nai umeed
Suraj ki pahli kiran jaga gai dil mein aas
Gum ki kaali raat shaayad beet gai aab to
Ek nai zindagi bula rahi hai mujhe apne pass

jise dhoondti hain neegahain, kya tum wahi ho..

Samajh gaye hain ab zindagi ki sachaai ko
Ki koi rasta kabhi bhi manzil nahin ho sakta
Jo saath chhod kar chale gaye bure waqt mein
Woh kuchh bhi ho lekin sacha pyar nahi ho sakta

jise dhoondti hain neegahain, kya tum wahi ho..

Beete hute lamhe kaun bhool sakta hai kabhi
Unhi lamhon ne to zindagi jeena sikhaya hai
Sabhi rang dikha diye humen is zindagi ke
Har haal mein apne gum ko peena sikhaya hai

jise dhoondti hain neegahain, kya tum wahi ho..

Woh aur they jo himmat haar kar baith gaye
Har subah zindagi mein ek nai shuruawat lati hai
Aaj phir eek nai umeeed se zindagi muskurai hai
Dekhen "Vijay" ki kismat ab kya gul khilaati hai

jise dhoondti hain neegahain, kya tum wahi ho..

 

[akanksha]

sarahaa tha jise sapnon mai hamesha​

socha nahi tha wo banega kabhi bhi apna
allah ke aabroo me aa hi gaya wo hansi qaasid
uske tasawwur se har lamha mehek utha..​

jise dhoondti hai neeghain, kya tum wahi ho ..​

akanksha.. ​

Ek aur nai subah ke saath ek aur nai umeed

Suraj ki pahli kiran jaga gai dil mein aas​

Gum ki kaali raat shaayad beet gai aab to

Ek nai zindagi bula rahi hai mujhe apne pass


​

jise dhoondti hain neegahain, kya tum wahi ho..​

Samajh gaye hain ab zindagi ki sachaai ko​

Ki koi rasta kabhi bhi manzil nahin ho sakta​

Jo saath chhod kar chale gaye bure waqt mein

Woh kuchh bhi ho lekin sacha pyar nahi ho sakta


​

jise dhoondti hain neegahain, kya tum wahi ho..​

Beete hute lamhe kaun bhool sakta hai kabhi​

Unhi lamhon ne to zindagi jeena sikhaya hai​

Sabhi rang dikha diye humen is zindagi ke

Har haal mein apne gum ko peena sikhaya hai


​

jise dhoondti hain neegahain, kya tum wahi ho..​

Woh aur they jo himmat haar kar baith gaye​

Har subah zindagi mein ek nai shuruawat lati hai​

Aaj phir eek nai umeeed se zindagi muskurai hai​

Dekhen "Vijay" ki kismat ab kya gul khilaati hai


​

jise dhoondti hain neegahain, kya tum wahi ho..


​

 

[akanksha]

thanks yash..
hmm.. i am used to people calling me that..
so anyways, its okay. ​

akanksha..

jai kilkii taull..

Hi Akanksha,

I apperciate ur simplicity and ur creation...........
agar aap humein itni acchi kavitaein sunaati rahegee to encouragement ka toh der laga denge hum Akki ji...............Akanksha thoda bada hai iseliye "Akki" bol raha hoon chalega naa.............jai kilki Taull !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[chhikaragreat]

serious one!

some real serious stuff akanksha! brilliant....though too serious for me!! here is one for you :

Life means missing expected things and Facing unexpected things. When u r right, no one remembers. But when u r wrong no one forgets! thats life

cheers
Chhikara

 

[akanksha]

thanks a tonne!! surely shall keep up this arzoo forever..

Aarzoo..​

Sapnon ke aakash tale, kalpana ki hawaon se door
Palkon ke saaye tale, nazar ki parchaiyon se door..
Ehsaas ke kadmon tale, aahaton ki dhakan se door
Aawazon ke daayre tale, raat ki arzoo se door..​

Jise dhoondti hai neegahain , kya wahi ho tum..​

girti baarish ki boondon tale, badalon ki chadar se door
behti hawaon ki narmiyon tale, jagti huyi kamna se door..
jaagte huye armanon ke tale, soti huyi jannat se door
saath nibhane ki chaah tale, har subha ki arzoo se door.​

Jise dhoondti hai neegahain, kya wahi ho tum.. ​

Bhawna ki bheeni khushbu tale, umang ki us raah se door
Jeewan ki mannaton tale, dooriyon ki deewaron se door
Chahaton ki muskaan ke tale, sundar se us ghar se door
Khushi ke har sagar tale, khamoshi ki arzoo se door..​

Jise dhhondti hai neegahain, kya wahi ho tum.. ​

Thamti saason ke tale, geeli un neegahon se door
Jise dhoondti hai neegahain , kya wahi ho tum..​

Jeene ki sabhi aashaon tale, muskurahat ki kiran se door
Jise dhoondti hai neegahain, kya wahi ho tum.. ​

Komal chandni ke tale, nisha ki mand mehek se door
Jise dhoondti hai neegahain, kya wahi ho tum..​

Arzoo ki is chaah tale, Arzoo ki in sabhi arzuon se door
Jise dhoondti hai neegahain, kya wahi ho tum… ​

Akanksha .. ​

Ps: This is my first attempt to write something in hindi.
I know I suck at it, nevertheless..
I tried..to give word to my feelings.. ​

Jaikilkii taull..

Rap chik girllllll..sweet poem...really good.........kahan se churaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.....sorry......majak kar raha tha...good love with arazoo.......keep it up​

 

[akanksha]

hey this isn't really serious.. we tend to think that way.. and happen to generalize everything and form notions for our own self.. once we try to get outta stereotypes formed by self na.. world is difffernt as is our mien..

anyhow, thanks for your quote..


akanksha


jai kilkii taull..

some real serious stuff akanksha! brilliant....though too serious for me!! here is one for you :

Life means missing expected things and Facing unexpected things. When u r right, no one remembers. But when u r wrong no one forgets! thats life

cheers
Chhikara

 

[choudharyneelam]

hmmmm....good going akanksha....likhti jao aur bhi

 

[vijay]

sarahaa tha jise sapnon mai hamesha​

socha nahi tha wo banega kabhi bhi apna
allah ke aabroo me aa hi gaya wo hansi qaasid
uske tasawwur se har lamha mehek utha..​

jise dhoondti hai neeghain, kya tum wahi ho ..​

akanksha.. ​

Uske tasawwur mein guzari har raat
Na jaane kab for hamari subah hogi
Woh nahin aaye kabhi sapno mein bhi
Na jane kab zindagi se sulah hogi


jise dhoondti hai neeghain, kya tum wahi ho ..

Ek haseen khawaab dekha tha kabhi
Ki ye zindagi muskurayegi kisi ek din
Har subah ye tamanna karta hoon
Ki aaj shaayad woh din aa gaya

jise dhoondti hai neeghain, kya tum wahi ho ..

 

[ssiwach]

if this is your try , it better then the best,
if this is not your try - still the best

 

[ritu]

meri arzoo ka sabab na poocho
asman ko chune ko atur h
mere khawbo me lage h pankh
asman ko nap ke ane ko h
arzoo itni masoom h meri
ko asman ko muthi m samane ko h
arzoo sab kuch maange aur kabhi kuch bhi nahi
arzoo asi asamnjs me ghiri hui si kyo h

 

[ritu]

very nice akanksha

 

[ritu]

jo tujhe aaj mil gaya h yu hi kisi ki trah
oski arzoo me kabhi hum jiye bhi aur mare bhi

 

[akanksha]

har ek qaasid mai hoti hai ek quvvat ​

sehlati hui pawan ki tarah wo chu leti hai wo har ek arzoo
har samah khil saa jata hai muskurahat se​

ek parataar ko milti hai jab uski manzil..​

jise dhoondti hai neeghain, kya tum wahi ho.. ​

sehmi si rehti hai arzoo jab ehaas iltimaas ban jaata hai
raah thakhti rehti hai arzoo jab milne se hoti hai aarii​

pyaar ki daastan se navaaz hai arzoo
dooriyon ke badalon ko shanaasa nahi kabhi uski arzoo nai.. ​

jise dhoondti hain neeghain , kya wahi ho tum.. ​

akanksha.. ​

parataar is a worshipper
n shanaasa is to recognise.. ​

jai kilkii taull..​

Uske tasawwur mein guzari har raat

Na jaane kab for hamari subah hogi​

Woh nahin aaye kabhi sapno mein bhi​

Na jane kab zindagi se sulah hogi​

jise dhoondti hai neeghain, kya tum wahi ho ..​

Ek haseen khawaab dekha tha kabhi

Ki ye zindagi muskurayegi kisi ek din
Har subah ye tamanna karta hoon
Ki aaj shaayad woh din aa gaya​

jise dhoondti hai neeghain, kya tum wahi ho ..​

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[akanksha]

thanks a lot bebe..
love

akanksha..

very nice akanksha

 

[akanksha]

thanks a lot Sir.

yes, it was a try.. but its not letting me stop..
hopefully things shall always move on life..

regards


akanksha..

if this is your try , it better then the best,
if this is not your try - still the best

 

[akanksha]

jo mujhe aaj mil gaya hai, wo to ek manzil hai ..
jeena sikha gaya jo kuch hi palon mai, wo to ek hansi qaasid hai..


akanksha..

jo tujhe aaj mil gaya h yu hi kisi ki trah
oski arzoo me kabhi hum jiye bhi aur mare bhi

 

[sunitahooda]

Meri ARZOO muskaai, kumhlai/murjhai si
hai ye ARZOO ya pankhudi ek gulab si

parvaan na chadi ye to man bhujh gaya
ek sheetal sameer jhonka jo choo gaya

pankh faile uss alsaai si ARZOO ke
indradhanushi rang pattey ki shiraon me

ARZOO jo har pal uthti hai muskati hai
poori bhale na ho par ARZOO kehlati hai

 

[vijay]

Meri ARZOO muskaai, kumhlai/murjhai si
hai ye ARZOO ya pankhudi ek gulab si

parvaan na chadi ye to man bhujh gaya
ek sheetal sameer jhonka jo choo gaya

pankh faile uss alsaai si ARZOO ke
indradhanushi rang pattey ki shiraon me

ARZOO jo har pal uthti hai muskati hai
poori bhale na ho par ARZOO kehlati hai

Nice poem, Sunita !


Har pal ek sapna har pal ek nai umeed
Zindagi ek arzoo hai hans kar jeene ki

Kya hua agar jo chaha woh nahin mila to
Aadat daal lo apne har gum ko peene ki

Kisi ko apna banaakar dekho zindagi mein
Warna kisko dikhaoge chot apne seene ki

Tamannao ke dum se hi mahakati hai zindagi
Sada khush rahen bus ye arzoo ho jeene ki

 

[sunitahooda]

Thanks Vijay....i'll reply to yours soon

Nice poem, Sunita !


Har pal ek sapna har pal ek nai umeed
Zindagi ek arzoo hai hans kar jeene ki

Kya hua agar jo chaha woh nahin mila to
Aadat daal lo apne har gum ko peene ki

Kisi ko apna banaakar dekho zindagi mein
Warna kisko dikhaoge chot apne seene ki

Tamannao ke dum se hi mahakati hai zindagi
Sada khush rahen bus ye arzoo ho jeene ki