ashiq shayri

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wow ankur....bahut achha....wah wah wah........so it ur own collection or somebodys else. well jo bhi hai u definately have a good taste...carry on
 
gahri chot khaye lagte ho miya???? par hamesha yaad rakho....

simatta nahin kabhi zindagi ka felaaw
kahin bhi khatam game aashqi nahin hote
nikal hi aate hai koi na koi gunjaiysh
kabhi kisi ki koi mohabbat aakhri nahin hote
 
kya baat hai...subaan allah, apki shayri to bahut inspiring hai!
aur aane do! Jats like this kinda stuff ;)

rock on
Jit

nikitadhaiya said:
gahri chot khaye lagte ho miya???? par hamesha yaad rakho....

simatta nahin kabhi zindagi ka felaaw
kahin bhi khatam game aashqi nahin hote
nikal hi aate hai koi na koi gunjaiysh
kabhi kisi ki koi mohabbat aakhri nahin hote
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cooljat said:
kya baat hai...subaan allah, apki shayri to bahut inspiring hai!
aur aane do! Jats like this kinda stuff ;)

rock on
Jit
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if that was inspiring then ye suno......

mana gair hain sapne khushiyaan bhi adhoore hain
kya karen?zinda rehne ke liye kuch galat famiyaan bhi zaroore hain:)
 
hidhayal said:
phool khilte nahi
khusboo unhe khilati hai
ladke bigadte nahi
ladkiya bigadti hai
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this is not fair sara ka sara blame ladkiyoon pe..................ye galat baat hai.....ladke he ladkiyoon ke peeche peeche aate hain........
girls(especially jat girls) r very sincere,honest and do not ditch
 
kudos to u dear,
ur inspiring shayris wll surely take some gumgin shayaars outta gardis!
aur aane do, u've great talent, u rock :)

rock on
Jit

nikitadhaiya said:
if that was inspiring then ye suno......

mana gair hain sapne khushiyaan bhi adhoore hain
kya karen?zinda rehne ke liye kuch galat famiyaan bhi zaroore hain:)
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cooljat said:
kudos to u dear,
ur inspiring shayris wll surely take some gumgin shayaars outta gardis!
aur aane do, u've great talent, u rock :)

rock on
Jit
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dont get that much inspired ......nahin to ye haal na ho jaaye...

is dil ka kadardaan na mila saare jamane mein
ye sheesha youn he toot gaya dekhne dikhane mein

so jara bachke....
 
aint got words to express my feeling
u have great talent no doubt about that
I'm not a shayaar so can't reply in shayri manner
all I can say, U rock maa'm!
thats it ;)

rock on
Jit

nikitadhaiya said:
dont get that much inspired ......nahin to ye haal na ho jaaye...

is dil ka kadardaan na mila saare jamane mein
ye sheesha youn he toot gaya dekhne dikhane mein

so jara bachke....
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cooljat said:
aint got words to express my feeling
u have great talent no doubt about that
I'm not a shayaar so can't reply in shayri manner
all I can say, U rock maa'm!
thats it ;)

rock on
Jit
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Bhai, JIT ji, aur sab to theek hai, Lekin mein ek baat notice ker raha huin bahut dino se, ki agar koi chhori koi bhi post karti hai...... kisi bhi thread mein. to aap reply jaroor karte hain. Kya yeh chhore kuch acchha nahi likte?
Sahi hai na...........................
 
cooljat said:
aint got words to express my feeling
u have great talent no doubt about that
I'm not a shayaar so can't reply in shayri manner
all I can say, U rock maa'm!
thats it ;)

rock on
Jit
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thnk u thnk u
 
Good observation Prashant.:D :D
Keep on.:) :)

prashantacmet said:
Bhai, JIT ji, aur sab to theek hai, Lekin mein ek baat notice ker raha huin bahut dino se, ki agar koi chhori koi bhi post karti hai...... kisi bhi thread mein. to aap reply jaroor karte hain. Kya yeh chhore kuch acchha nahi likte?
Sahi hai na...........................
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Bhai aisi ki baat naa hai, vastav mein...I prefer quality, if koi Jatni achi post dalti hai to mein kya kar sakta hoon....I don't have any biased approach...even I think men n women all r same all that diffrentiates is attitude...waise bhai mere tu saari post pad le meri...u'll find if anyone deservers to be praised...I always. As for Shayri....I really don't like these cloud-9 talks....but in the Nikita's case....she poured some refeshing inspiring stuff...thus couldn't stop myself to praise her....as for guys....they always write dukh bhari shayris....so yaaron! mujse woh naa jheli jaati, that's the real truth ;)
aur koi baat ho to baatana...clear kar doonga woh bhi :D

take care n ram ram

rock on
Jit

prashantacmet said:
Bhai, JIT ji, aur sab to theek hai, Lekin mein ek baat notice ker raha huin bahut dino se, ki agar koi chhori koi bhi post karti hai...... kisi bhi thread mein. to aap reply jaroor karte hain. Kya yeh chhore kuch acchha nahi likte?
Sahi hai na...........................
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khushbu khatm ho chuki hai, har chaman se
kasak bhi mit chuki hai, har kisi chilman se
ne jaane tum kahan kho gaye ho ei sanam
karke dar-b-dar, hume mitti aur watan se

RK^2
 
very nice sher

rkumar said:
khushbu khatm ho chuki hai, har chaman se
kasak bhi mit chuki hai, har kisi chilman se
ne jaane tum kahan kho gaye ho ei sanam
karke dar-b-dar, hume mitti aur watan se

RK^2
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A mauze samunder, gairat kar, toofan me kishti phir le chal;
vo dekh teri nakami ko kambakht kinare hanste hain!
 
wah, wah, indeed rocking!
bhai aisi inspiring shayri sun sun ke mera jat blood ublne lagta hai!
I really appriciate this sort of inspiring stuff!
aur aane do...luv it

rock on
Jit


sktewatia said:
A mauze samunder, gairat kar, toofan me kishti phir le chal;
vo dekh teri nakami ko kambakht kinare hanste hain!
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kuch dil se.....

Kabhi roke muskuraye, kabhi muskurake roye
Teri yaad jab bhi aayee, tujhe bhula bhula ke roye
Ek tera hi naam tha jise hazaar baar tha likha
Jise khush hue the likhkar use mita mita ke roye...

Hope you all would like it.......
Nikita, I just share what I like none of these are mine !!!:)
 
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