Attempts at Poetry :)

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Hope

Hope is a small ship
in the distant horizon
with white sails
It has been wounded
by the tempers of the sea
But when the dawns of age break
and when the waters are still
Its there
Waiting for the giant yellow star
to mirror a modest hello.
 
My Childhood

On a saturday morning
we woke up and
cleaned the dirt off our eyes
we rushed outside
with mummy screamig behind us
We looked for pretty wild flowers
which grew close to the footpaths
in the dry land
we chased the butterflies
and when i think of my little sister's face
that day
when i gave her a flower
when i saw the most beautiful little flower blossom
my heart cant help but cry
 
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A Farmer's throne

In a heart
there is a country
with acres of gold and bronze fields
where when the raindrops fall
One can smell the happy sadness

The trees whisper a body's name

Where the peacocks dance
with a shy grace and inherent beauty
..is the place of a home.
 
Mona lisa!

[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif][SIZE=+1]Introduction[/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]Generations of people have wondered why Mona Lisa smiles the way she does. [/FONT]

[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]Well, wonder no longer...... [/FONT]

[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif][SIZE=+1]Mona Lisa[/SIZE][/FONT]

[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]Leonarda he teasa[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]The young Mona Lisa[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]"Why you smila like so?[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]"This is odd way of smiling[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]"And is very beguiling,[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]"You gotta dark secret, I know."[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]Mona she place a[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]Hand to her face a,[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]And she make a shy reply:[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]"Papa, I thmila like thith[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]"Becauth I gotta no tith."[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]Then she break a down and cry.[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]Now Papa de Vinci[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]Say: "Shush shush my Chichi,[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]"I tell you for what I do,[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]"I painta your picture,[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]"A beauuuutiful picture,[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]"And we hang it in the Louvre."[/FONT]

(this one was from the net)
 
Very beautiful words.... wonderful composition.......... thanx a lot for sharing it with us Piyush :)


piyush83 said:
[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif][SIZE=+1]Introduction[/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]Generations of people have wondered why Mona Lisa smiles the way she does. [/FONT]

[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]Well, wonder no longer...... [/FONT]

[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif][SIZE=+1]Mona Lisa[/SIZE][/FONT]

[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]Leonarda he teasa[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]The young Mona Lisa[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]"Why you smila like so?[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]"This is odd way of smiling[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]"And is very beguiling,[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]"You gotta dark secret, I know."[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]Mona she place a[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]Hand to her face a,[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]And she make a shy reply:[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]"Papa, I thmila like thith[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]"Becauth I gotta no tith."[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]Then she break a down and cry.[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]Now Papa de Vinci[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]Say: "Shush shush my Chichi,[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]"I tell you for what I do,[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]"I painta your picture,[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]"A beauuuutiful picture,[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]"And we hang it in the Louvre."[/FONT]

(this one was from the net)
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Very inspiring and sensitive composition Piyush, enough to bring tears in the eyes....... :). Thnx a lot for sharing it with us. :)



piyush83 said:
In a heart
there is a country
with acres of gold and bronze fields
where when the raindrops fall
One can smell the happy sadness

The trees whisper a body's name

Where the peacocks dance
with a shy grace and inherent beauty
..is the place of a home.
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Jat

JAT

The thoughts of pouring water
echo the distant memory of a past
From the dense forest of sadness and emptiness
emerge the gusty red and proud flames of a warrior!


Hahahahaha.
 
My first legendary poem

Welcome
My poem shall attempt to rhyme
but it does not claim to be perfect
Seas of thoughts
shall run down in the river of ummmmmmmmm i dunno

somebody attempt to complete the poem

I was hoping u guys would attempt some poetry on my thread! but seems noone cares!

ummmmmmmmmmm
The river
is a beast.

hahahahaha! cmon u guys, attempt some poetry! lets see how good you can be!
 
Hi Piyush :) :)
Both are rare and good piece of work. Nice posting and thanks a lot for sharing :) :)



piyush83 said:
JAT

The thoughts of pouring water
echo the distant memory of a past
From the dense forest of sadness and emptiness
emerge the gusty red and proud flames of a warrior!


Hahahahaha.
Click to expand...

piyush83 said:
Welcome
My poem shall attempt to rhyme
but it does not claim to be perfect
Seas of thoughts
shall run down in the river of ummmmmmmmm i dunno

somebody attempt to complete the poem

I was hoping u guys would attempt some poetry on my thread! but seems noone cares!

ummmmmmmmmmm
The river
is a beast.

hahahahaha! cmon u guys, attempt some poetry! lets see how good you can be!
Click to expand...
 
I am afraid to love

I am afraid to love, and yet I love you.
My fear is like a wall I walk right through.
The wall is there, and yet it doesn't stop me.
I need it still, and yet I still need you.

I know someday we will be in a field
Surrounded by the blessing of the sky.
I'll dance with all the freedom of pure joy,
Needing you without a reason why.

But now I'm still afraid that I might lose you,
That you might not accept my desperate need.
You make me laugh and cry and be complete.
You are the flower, I the slender reed.

-Anonymous
:) :)​
 
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