Dil ke kissi konne se

[downtoearth]

Haal ishq ke kya jano,ye aag ka aissa darya hei
Na marne de na jeene de,ye bina pankh ki chidiya hei.

agar haal nahi hai dono ka barabar ishq mein
to bhej kyu diya usne wahi khatt jawab mein

 

[devdahiya]

agar haal nahi hai dono ka barabar ishq mein
to bhej kyu diya usne wahi khatt jawab mein

Ho sakta hei pegaam milne se khussi na mili ho mere yaar ko
Tabhi to khat ka majmoon nahin bhanp paye aur kar diya wapis najrana pyar ka

 

[downtoearth]

Ho sakta hei pegaam milne se khussi na mili ho mere yaar ko
Tabhi to khat ka majmoon nahin bhanp paye aur kar diya wapis najrana pyar ka

good one.......


likh raha hu mein un khatoo ke jawab,jo key tumney kabhi likhey nahi
un jawaboo mein inko rakh dena ,jo key tumney kabhi paddey nahi

 

[vijay]

Badi muddat se likh raha tha ek haseen gazal
Aaj dekha jo gaur se har lafz bikhar gaya

 

[cooljat]

bhai rupi tera to shayri ka be taste acha hai, kai baat se....tu bhi kya jakhmi sher ho gaya se....jo laag riya se sher baachne mein

baant le tera dookh bhaiyon me kam ho jaayega

rock on
Jit

good one.......


likh raha hu mein un khatoo ke jawab,jo key tumney kabhi likhey nahi
un jawaboo mein inko rakh dena ,jo key tumney kabhi paddey nahi

 

[downtoearth]

Badi muddat se likh raha tha ek haseen gazal
Aaj dekha jo gaur se har lafz bikhar gaya

vijay .....katl kar diya bhai.....kabil e tariff

bhai rupi tera to shayri ka be taste acha hai, kai baat se....tu bhi kya jakhmi sher ho gaya se....jo laag riya se sher baachne mein

baant le tera dookh bhaiyon me kam ho jaayega

rock on
Jit

hehe jit.....katti bahi....baaki iss subject khatter tanney pm karunga....

 

[betaal]

barbaad honee hum chale sare kaam chod kar
bekaar baan kar gazal likhte gayeee
jatland ke mukaam par
khana pina sub chut gayaa
iss dagar par.

 

[devdahiya]

barbaad honee hum chale sare kaam chod kar
bekaar baan kar gazal likhte gayeee
jatland ke mukaam par
khana pina sub chut gayaa
iss dagar par.

Ghazzal likhne walon ko chinta khane ki nahin hoti kabhi
Jatland Koi bahana nahin..yahan to aisse hi aate hein sabhi
Kya khane ki chinta karte ho humdum
Pehle sunno mere jigar ka dhadhakta gumm.

Bekaar na kaho tum iss gamme jigar ko
Tohin karne ki bhi hadd hoti hei.

 

[jitendershooda]

Badi muddat se likh raha tha ek haseen gazal
Aaj dekha jo gaur se har lafz bikhar gaya

Bhai Vijay ...chala paad diya janu sab kime jod ke ...khinda diya tene te ... Bahut aache bhai ... Chees see aai is baat mein te ...

Baat purani hei lekin,wo din hum kabhi na bhool sakke
Wo chehra abb bhi roshan hei, Kabhi uthhe aur kabhi jhukke
Deedaar kabhi na ho paya phir, Kaissa dekho silla diya
Najjar...........................................

Dev Ji, really good stuff.

Par kime madi si detail mein aan dyo ne yaa baat ..... kunse saal ki hai er kit dab ge ye kagaj ...

kisi ney kaha majnu ko teri laila dikhti kaali rey
majnu ne jawab diya ,teri aankh na dekhaan waali rey
ved bhi safead ,puraan bhi safead ,
bich mein shayhi raakh di kaali rey

Good one Rupender bhai ..

 

[devdahiya]

Iss kaddar hammein yu luut liya na pyar mila na ruswai
Na mila sukkun dil mere ko,na kassti meri tarr pai.

 

[downtoearth]

Iss kaddar hammein yu luut liya na pyar mila na ruswai
Na mila sukkun dil mere ko,na kassti meri tarr pai.

kashti -ey -mohobat kahan kinara mangti hai
tairney ki baat nahin dubney ko bhi sahara mangti hai..

 

[devdahiya]

kashti -ey -mohobat kahan kinara mangti hai
tairney ki baat nahin dubney ko bhi sahara mangti hai..

Bohot khoob bhai.


Shayadd mohobatton ko kinara hota nasheeb nahin
Ye to majhhdhar mei siskti hei,kyunki jamanne ko preet nahin

 

[downtoearth]

Bohot khoob bhai.


Shayadd mohobatton ko kinara hota nasheeb nahin
Ye to majhhdhar mei siskti hei,kyunki jamanne ko preet nahin

kyu mashroof hain iss kadar key laila majnu ko koi yaad nahi karta
yahi hai daur -e mohabat ka hashr,yahan chotta badey ko aadab nahi karta

 

[sjakhars]

Bohot khoob bhai.


Shayadd mohobatton ko kinara hota nasheeb nahin
Ye to majhhdhar mei siskti hei,kyunki jamanne ko preet nahin

Bahut badhia Dev sir.

yun na ho mayuoss nakaam-e-mohabbat par 'sahil'
ye to wo kashti hai jo kabhi-kabhi hi kinare lagti hai.

 

[devdahiya]

kyu mashroof hain iss kadar key laila majnu ko koi yaad nahi karta
yahi hai daur -e mohabat ka hashr,yahan chotta badey ko aadab nahi karta

Na wo Laila rahi aur na rahe Majnoo jaisse dil
Today people Go for a straight kill.

Bahut badhia Dev sir.

yun na ho mayuoss nakaam-e-mohabbat par 'sahil'
ye to wo kashti hai jo kabhi-kabhi hi kinare lagti hai.

Sunder-atti sunder...bahi. Keep it up !

Bahut badhia Dev sir.

yun na ho mayuoss nakaam-e-mohabbat par 'sahil'
ye to wo kashti hai jo kabhi-kabhi hi kinare lagti hai.

Jiski kassti lage paar wo kehlaye Dulha
Jiski dubbe wo kehlaye.....Rasta bhulla.

 

[downtoearth]

Jiski kassti lage paar wo kehlaye Dulha
Jiski dubbe wo kehlaye.....Rasta bhulla.

teay kar liya samander allah ke saharey
badla mera mukaddar allah ke saharey

 

[devdahiya]

teay kar liya samander allah ke saharey
badla mera mukaddar allah ke saharey

Allah ki rehmat banni rahe ye dua hei meri mere yaar
Aaakhir wahi to hei jo lagata hei harr kasti ko paar.

 

[betaal]

Likhye jayee woh gazale ek ke baad ek
samay unke paas itna humee hareenee hote hae
laila nee unheee kyoon chodaaa
yeeh baaat laila ke mayanee seee socheee
thoo aab hameee pareshaneee naheen hotee hae.

 

[devdahiya]

Likhye jayee woh gazale ek ke baad ek
samay unke paas itna humee hareenee hote hae
laila nee unheee kyoon chodaaa
yeeh baaat laila ke mayanee seee socheee
thoo aab hameee pareshaneee naheen hotee hae.

Ha..ha..ha. Theppaddi paathh di Bheirrav................Thodda romantic aan de ND.

 

[downtoearth]

Allah ki rehmat banni rahe ye dua hei meri mere yaar
Aaakhir wahi to hei jo lagata hei harr kasti ko paar.

ya khuda mat rook merey safar ko kashti paar lagakey
dekhna baki hai abhi mera aasman samander ko milakey