Kuch Qalaam Mohobbat Ke Naam

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Kisi ki julfon mein khookar duniyan ko bhool jaayen
En ghanghor ghataaon mein doobne ko jee chaahta hai

Ye pyasi nighahen jo dhoondhti hai dil ka sahara koi
Kisi ke aanchal mein aaj sar chhupaane ko jee chaahta hai

Jiski surat ko kabse dil mein basaaye baithe hain hum
Aaj unke dil par apna haq jataane ko jee chaahta hai

Intezaar to duniyan karti aai hai apni mohabbat paane ko
Kisi naznee ko 'Vijay' ki zindagi bataane ka jee kartaa hai
 
jee chahta hai cont..

choudharyneelam said:
baat to sahi bolte ho..thora majak bhi hona hi chahiye....and thanks for your sweet wishes..aur agar wo sach mein fool hua ;) to use phool main bana dungi....:D ...to ab ye lo tumhari uss shayari ka jawab....

Khuli hain meri zulfen kabse uske liye
Aae to ek baar wo, inn zulfon tale chupane ko jee chahta hai

Har aur jaati hai meri nazar usko dhundti hui, kab aayega wo
Apni gaud mein sar rakhwa halke haathon se sahlaane ko jee chahta hai

Mere bhi mann mein basi hai uski surat har pal
Mujhpe har haq ab usko dene ko jee chahta hai

Intezaar to maine kiya hai uska, aur kitna karwayega
Ab to har pal uss sang zindagi beetane ko jee chahta hai
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one more!!!! phool for a beautifool....:D


Talashta har shaksh hai mere wajood ko,
Main yunhi dooba rahun jaam mein tere ishk ke ye jee chahta hai,

Mitakar khood apni hasti ko tujh per,
Teri sanson mein pahaan pa lun ye jee chahta hai.
 
bobo jib tu kahe at likhna to padei hai !!!!!!1111111:D
ke karun control ni hotta
;)
 
vijay said:
Kisi ki julfon mein khookar duniyan ko bhool jaayen
En ghanghor ghataaon mein doobne ko jee chaahta hai
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Intezaar to duniyan karti aai hai apni mohabbat paane ko
Kisi naznee ko 'Vijay' ki zindagi bataane ka jee kartaa hai
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You also started very nicely....:)

Kahte hain sab duniya badi rangeen hai
Aaj khushi ke har rang mein rangne ko jee chahta hai

Meri ye aankhen kabse sapne dekh rahi hain
Aake har sapna sajaaye wo mera ye jee chahta hai

Har kisi ke dil mein basti hai kisi na kisi ki surat
Mere mann mein jo chhipi hai sabko dikhane ko jee chahta hai

Intezaar ki ghadi to ek din rukegi mere liye bhi jaake kahin
Haath pakad ke uska zindagi ka safar pura karne ko jee chahta hai
 
sejwaldeepak said:
one more!!!! phool for a beautifool....:D


Talashta har shaksh hai mere wajood ko,
Main yunhi dooba rahun jaam mein tere ishk ke ye jee chahta hai,

Mitakar khood apni hasti ko tujh per,
Teri sanson mein pahaan pa lun ye jee chahta hai.
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oye kya bole tum...kabhi kisi fool ki beauty dekhi hai ya kabhi kisi beauty ko fool suna hai..ab apni galtiko theek karo:D ...haan tumhare phool kaafi sunder aur mahakate hue hain....:)

Dhunda na iss dil ne kisi ko kabhi, magar wo jab aaya saamne
Tabse dekh ke usko usme sama jaaun ab to mera ye jee chahta hai

Ek pal jo ho wo saath mere ye dil kisi soch mein doob jata hai
Bas uski baahon ke sahare baith har sunder pal dekhne ko jee chahta hai

Khelun main lehron se uske saath kisi samander ke kinaare
Aur phir jaayen hum long drive pe kahin aisa kuch mera jee chahta hai:D :D :D :D :D
 
My exit from mehfil

Jiske haathon ki lakeeron mein thi main hi basi
Ab papa ke kahne pe main uske sang chali jaaungi


Ab tak main tum sabke saath hansi boli
Ab usko apni wo sadi shayari sunaungi:D


Kisi din rakhna tum sab phir se jaat meet
Aur main uss sang sabse milne chali aaungi


Jo mili mujhe phursat kabhi apni duniya se
To tumse bhi do chaar baat kar jaaungi :)


Dear friends,


Now this is my last shayari.....aur nahin jhelni padengi ab meri taraf se kisi ko bhi;) :D ......ab bas...sirf enjoy karungi sabki great poetries ko aur praises aate rahenge meri taraf se......now you all continue ahead so that i can read and enjoy:)


And thanks a lot to all those who always praised me and encouraged me to write something...i really liked the company of every person here...all are nice and good in one or the other sense.....GOD BLESS YOU ALL!!...:) .....now pls no ques. and no reply to this post as i just wanna stop my poetries here only....wanna just enjoy others posts:) :) .


Takecare
with love and regards
Neelam:)
 
hhha

Neelam ek kahawat to tane suni hogi , khubsurat ladkiyon mein dimag nahi hota...
all girls sorry pls don't mind..:)

to phool for beautifool kehna kuch galat to nahi tha :D :D

anyway , magar aapki ye baat pasand nahi aayi, is terah mehfil se chale jana to baki sabki tohin hogi..janab. mujhe nahi lagta aapki ye baat kisi ko pasand aayegi..khair koi kar hi kya sakta hai siwai iske ke yahan phir sei.. rone dhone wali shayari shuru karenge sab...:o
 
le bobo tu keh ri at teri liya 2-4 line likh hi doon..............
DIKO LIKHA TO MAINEI HAI YO PAR CHEPKE LIKHA...:D

JO RAHE SABKE LABON PAR US HANSI KO DHUNDHIYE...
BANT SAKE SABKE GHARON MEIN US KHUSHI KO DHUNDHIYE....


KAAM MUSHKIL HAI PAR KEH RAHI HOON AAPSE..
HO SAKE TO BHEED MEIN SE KOI AADMI DHUNDHIYE.............:)
 
phool lekar ham gaye phool kar usne kaha
phool ki kya jarurat thi tum to khud hi ek "FOOL" HO:D :D
 
sejwaldeepak said:
Neelam ek kahawat to tane suni hogi , khubsurat ladkiyon mein dimag nahi hota...
all girls sorry pls don't mind..:)

to phool for beautifool kehna kuch galat to nahi tha :D :D

anyway , magar aapki ye baat pasand nahi aayi, is terah mehfil se chale jana to baki sabki tohin hogi..janab. mujhe nahi lagta aapki ye baat kisi ko pasand aayegi..khair koi kar hi kya sakta hai siwai iske ke yahan phir sei.. rone dhone wali shayari shuru karenge sab...:o
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Deepak i know ki ladki kaisi bhi ho deemag kam hota hai..and in my case it is totally gone...kya karun:( ..jab bat raha tha tab late ho gayi pahaunchne mein...and no problem you can call me the way you like:D ..i'll never mind it :) ....actually what happens with me i take immediate steps...yahi galti baar baar karti hun...aur haan pls aap sab koi bhi rone dhone wali shayari nahin likhoge....i feel happy to see smile on everyone's face...baaki kuch bhi bolo tum sab mujhe....aur haan ye idiotic post karke ek galti to ki but ab nahin karungi...i'll be here with you all forever:) ...hope my mood get changed soon and i'll also come out with my happy feelings again...till then you all pls continue with your great poetries:)

with love and regards
Neelam is Back :)
 
swati said:
le bobo tu keh ri at teri liya 2-4 line likh hi doon..............
DIKO LIKHA TO MAINEI HAI YO PAR CHEPKE LIKHA...:D

JO RAHE SABKE LABON PAR US HANSI KO DHUNDHIYE...
BANT SAKE SABKE GHARON MEIN US KHUSHI KO DHUNDHIYE....


KAAM MUSHKIL HAI PAR KEH RAHI HOON AAPSE..
HO SAKE TO BHEED MEIN SE KOI AADMI DHUNDHIYE.............:)
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Very sweet dear...love you :)
 
cool...

choudharyneelam said:
Deepak i know ki ladki kaisi bhi ho deemag kam hota hai..and in my case it is totally gone...kya karun:( ..jab bat raha tha tab late ho gayi pahaunchne mein...and no problem you can call me the way you like:D ..i'll never mind it :) ....actually what happens with me i take immediate steps...yahi galti baar baar karti hun...aur haan pls aap sab koi bhi rone dhone wali shayari nahin likhoge....i feel happy to see smile on everyone's face...baaki kuch bhi bolo tum sab mujhe....aur haan ye idiotic post karke ek galti to ki but ab nahin karungi...i'll be here with you all forever:) ...hope my mood get changed soon and i'll also come out with my happy feelings again...till then you all pls continue with your great poetries:)

with love and regards
Neelam is Back :)
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Ibb aagi akal thikane..:D :D

That's like a sweet friend. May God bless you on this Diwali with all his hapiness and lots of Mithais, Patakhe, Dresses and ofcourse lots of paise.:) hahhaa

Keep Writing Dear:)

Chalo isi bat pe ek aur phoolllllllllllllllllll........

Gehra hai bahut ahsaas meri chahat ka,
Tu jo chu de to ek umar mile pyar ko mere.

Ye dua rehti hai har pal khuda sei meri,
Mile Khushiyan jahaan bhar ki mehboob ko mere.
 
sejwaldeepak said:
Ibb aagi akal thikane..:D :D

That's like a sweet friend. May God bless you on this Diwali with all his hapiness and lots of Mithais, Patakhe, Dresses and ofcourse lots of paise.:) hahhaa

Keep Writing Dear:)

Chalo isi bat pe ek aur phoolllllllllllllllllll........

Gehra hai bahut ahsaas meri chahat ka,
Tu jo chu de to ek umar mile pyar ko mere.

Ye dua rehti hai har pal khuda sei meri,
Mile Khushiyan jahaan bhar ki mehboob ko mere.
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Thanks a ton Deepak for all your sweet wishes...God bless you the same :) :) ...aur haan ye phool bhi accha hai...beautifool ise bhi padh ke khush hui:D :D ;)
 
vijay bhai badut badiya

her sabd mein zindagi daal di dost....excellant



Jiski surat ko kabse dil mein basaaye baithe hain hum
Aaj unke dil par apna haq jataane ko jee chaahta hai

Intezaar to duniyan karti aai hai apni mohabbat paane ko
Kisi naznee ko 'Vijay' ki zindagi bataane ka jee kartaa hai[/QUOTE]
 
antil-sunpatiya said:
Vijay,

Ek thakloos (pseudonym) ki kami hai bus...
Varna shayar ho tum bade kaam kay. :)


Deepak
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Thnaks Deepak Bhai for the suggestion.

My personal thinking is that if a person have something in himself he can make his way without any pseudonym. Talent doesn't need any imaginary name but it speaks by itself.

It's just my passion to write poetry and i don't do that for any recognition. :)

Ye zindagi isi tarah pyar mein beet jaaye to aachhaa
Warna naamwalon ko to ye duniyan badnaam karti hai
:) :) :)
 
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