Kuch Qalaam Mohobbat Ke Naam

[kanu01]

Thanks Neelam

Thanks Neelam for yr presence everywhere.

 

[choudharyneelam]

knock!! knock!! saare shayar chhutti pe hain kya??????.....sabki kalam araam kar kar ke thak chuki hogi ab to....ye mohabbat waali thread pe breaks ke options nahin hone chahiyen......chalne do isse bina breaks ke

 

[sejwaldeepak]

hahhaa

Thik keh hai neelam sare chhutti mana rein sein.. koi na main tei aa liya bakki bhiaa lenge.. Here is the new phool for you...........

Tere intezaar ki tadap mein na soya raat bhar,
Kashish tere hoton ki khawabon mein chhai rahi.

So jane de in reshmi zulfon ke saye mein pal bhar.
Sakoon kuch to nasib ho bechain rooh ko meri.

 

[rgsverma]

Just a response....

Khawab ko tum vaasna to naa banao,
Rangon ke khel ko afsana naa banao,
Aur bhi gam hain muhabbat ke sivay,
Ise kam-se-kam itna sasta naa banao!

Meri julfain nahin hain manzil koi,
Pal bhar ke safar ka nahi khilona koi,
Sakoon unko kaise ho naseeb kabhi,
Pal-pal main baantne jo zindagi kahin!

 

[sejwaldeepak]

hahhaa

verma ji assi koi baat nahi ,, reply to kasutta diya hai aapne.. magar yahan asi koi ghatna nahi ghati hai thoda gehrai sei padhiye meri lines sab kuch saaf saaf nazar aayega.. ismein koi vasna nahi hai.. hahaha aur ek ashiq ke liye to uski mehbooba ki zulfein bhi maa ki god ka ahsaas diladeti hain fir kon apni maa ki god ko chhodd ke idhar udhar bhatkega

 

[choudharyneelam]

Thik keh hai neelam sare chhutti mana rein sein.. koi na main tei aa liya bakki bhiaa lenge.. Here is the new phool for you...........

Tere intezaar ki tadap mein na soya raat bhar,
Kashish tere hoton ki khawabon mein chhai rahi.

So jane de in reshmi zulfon ke saye mein pal bhar.
Sakoon kuch to nasib ho bechain rooh ko meri.

hmmm sabse active shayar hai ye Deepak

shukra hai koi 'fool' nahin bheja.. ...aur hamesha ki tarah ye phool bhi accha hai...ab iss thread ki phoolon ki mala kaafi acchi ban jaayegi....bahaut saare phool ikkatthe ho gaye....phir jab puri ban jaayegi naa tab main....tab main bhagwan ke mandir mein Parvati mata ki murti ko pahna aaungi

iss thread ki rukawat phir se door hui
aur neelam padh ke phir se khush hui

 

[choudharyneelam]

Khawab ko tum vaasna to naa banao,
Rangon ke khel ko afsana naa banao,
Aur bhi gam hain muhabbat ke sivay,
Ise kam-se-kam itna sasta naa banao!

Meri julfain nahin hain manzil koi,
Pal bhar ke safar ka nahi khilona koi,
Sakoon unko kaise ho naseeb kabhi,
Pal-pal main baantne jo zindagi kahin!

Jo baant baant ke de sabko zindagi nayi
Uske saath hi chalti hain khushiyan kai
Mohabbat ko yahan gum bataya kisne
Ye to wahi jaanta hai jisne paya pyaar koi

 

[ranbirsheoran]

kya majburi thi unhone batai to hoti,judai ke kahani hume sunai to hoti,apni kabar ke mitti de dare unko,mrei moot ke khawahish jatai to hoti.9813043366

 

[rgsverma]

Oh, it was just a reply dear Deepak

Deepak,
your poetic expressions was better than me.
I just tried to give a response,
may be in a different perspective.
(You can see things in many perspectives).
Lovely, nice and well-intended, keep it up,
I did'nt mean anything else....