ladkiyaan !!

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maa -baap ney jissey likha lahoo sey
woo bin naam patey ki chiithiyan hai ladkiyaan

kissi din ud jayengi kisi dusrey key paroon sey
ghar ki mundair pey baithi chirdiyan hai ladkiyaan

kabhi maa, kabhi saas,kabhi bhai, kabhi pati sey
ta-uamr nibhati nahi thakti hai ladkiyaan

khelti thee aankh michooli baandh chunni sey
usi chunni mein latakti milti hai ladkiyaan

bata dey mera jawaab ,pucha hai sirf tujhi sey
kaun sa hai wo ghar jahan murad se jamti hai ladkiyaan:)
 
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bhai....
hats off for this....

haan mera ghar hai jahan murad se paida hoti hai ladkiyaan..jab mere bhatiji hoyi thi to mane laadooo baante the....meri dadi ne batwaye the.. mere babu ne mangwai thi mithai...

but the thing u have written is 110% true...in 99.999999% cases..


downtoearth said:
maa -baap ney jissey likha lahoo sey
woo bin naam patey ki chiithiyan hai ladkiyaan

kissi din ud jayengi kisi dusrey key paroon sey
ghar ki mundair pey baithi chirdiyan hai ladkiyaan

kabhi maa, kabhi saas,kabhi bhai, kabhi pati sey
ta-uamr nibhati nahi thakti hai ladkiyaan

khelti thee aankh michooli baandh chunni sey
usi chunni mein latakti milti hai ladkiyaan

bata dey mera jawaab ,pucha hai sifr tujhi sey
kaun sa hai wo ghar jahan murad se jamti hai ladkiyaan:)
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really Nice stuff Rupendra.....

If you people don't mind........

I wanna share two of my lines......

Behene chidiya dhoop ki.. door gagan se aayein...
harr angan mehmaan si... pakdon to ud jaayein...

Aangan aangan betiyan.. chanti banti jaayein...
jaise baalein gehun ki... pakein to kaati jaayein...

Am sorry if I interepted....

Hail Sythian Culture!!

Rity
 
Rupender bhai really nice stuff.

ye sach hai ki 99% cases mein aaj bhi bina murad hi aati hai ladkiyan.
samajh mein nahi aata kyun hamari generation bhi in dakiyanusi vicharon ka virodh nahi kar paa rahi haiya ya yun keh lijiye kahin antarman mein hamare bhi ye baat hai ki ladkiyan bina murad aati hai, aur agar nahi to
hamare andar itni himmat kyun nahi ki hum muradon se beti maang saken.

aajkal ghar mein 1 bache wala trend hai barshte ki wo ladka ho, hum logon mein se kitne hain jo bol sakte hain ki hamari ek hi beti hai
 
ohh man.......

downtoearth said:
maa -baap ney jissey likha lahoo sey
woo bin naam patey ki chiithiyan hai ladkiyaan

kissi din ud jayengi kisi dusrey key paroon sey
ghar ki mundair pey baithi chirdiyan hai ladkiyaan

kabhi maa, kabhi saas,kabhi bhai, kabhi pati sey
ta-uamr nibhati nahi thakti hai ladkiyaan

khelti thee aankh michooli baandh chunni sey
usi chunni mein latakti milti hai ladkiyaan

bata dey mera jawaab ,pucha hai sirf tujhi sey
kaun sa hai wo ghar jahan murad se jamti hai ladkiyaan:)
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hey rups tht was really good and close to every body`s life n heart........nice lines

pyar karna jinhoney sikhaya insaan ko
wo ye hi to thi ladkiyaan

kabhi maa ban kar kabhi behan ban kar
to kabhi patni ka roop thi ye ladkiyaan

yudh main apney bhai betey aur hubby ko bheja
wo honslaa aur himmat thi ladkiyaan

aaj bhi jab fauji shaheed hota hai sarhad par
fauji ke ghar main bi shaheed hoti hain ladkiyaan

par hum ye sab likhney waaley shayad khud hi sachey nahi
tabhi to aankhon key saamney rozz marti hain ladkiyaan

thode din pehley hi bhiwani main jinn parr tezzaab dala
thodey hi din pehley ek jat ladki ko pyaar karney ki saja sunaai :mad:
itni aazaadi aur itna pyaar de rahen hain hum unko
jinko kabhi mata kabhi behn kaha, wo hi to hain ye ladkiyaan

vakeel banney sey pehley hi dekh chuka hun
kaise kort main tilmilla rahi hain ye ladkiyaan

ee mere raam mujhe itni shakti dena
ke kuch kar sakun un courts main jaa kar unke liye
aur fir shaanti sey chala aaun teri baahon main ye soch kar
ke ab to dharti par khush hain we ladkiyaan.........
 
Rupender and Vikas, both of you written very nice lines for girls.....exactly true.....Well done!!....hamare ghar main bhi muraad maangi thi ladkiyon ki aur aaj hain bhi....only one paternal aunt's wish was not fulfilled but she loved me like her own daughter and my cousin brothers pampered me a lot...really.....pura bigad dete hain, itna pyaar dete hain sab.....really these girls are different from everyone.....God bless them, even boys should be blessed who all take care about them:) :)
 
Koi makan ghar nahin bann sakta, jab tak ussmei bassti na hon laddkiyan
Ye aur baat hei ke humari magroori ka sikkar hoti hein hamesha ye laddkiyan
Janam dene wala bann jata kabhi iska hatyara,tou kuchh janam se pehle maar di jaati hein ye laddkiyan
Ghar ki char deewarri mei pissti din-raat bahhot saari,tou kuchh kothhe pe nachti ye laddkiyan
Nochnne wallon ki kammi nahin andhhere mei bhi,tou bolo kahan chhuppein haiwanno se ye laddkiyan
Raat ke 10 bajje ke baad sabhya sehron ki saddkkon pe nikkallne ki gustakhi nahin karr sakti ye laddkiyan
Kahhan baithha hei koi narr peesaach,nahin janti ye bholi laddkiyan
Auratt ek sampurran rista hei,jannani hei,palnne walli hei...phir bhi surakshit nahin hein laddkiyan
Paap karta koi aur lekin uski sajja bhi bhugat-ti hein ye laddkiyan
Harr ek konne mei neelamm ho rhi hein aadammi ke haathon laddkiyan
Abhi bhi padhh likh janne ke baadd bhi GUNGGI hein ye laddkiyan
Atyachar ki inteha ho chali hei....lekin dekho phir bhi hanss kar ji rahi hein ye laddkiyan


Good thread Rupi!......And good composition as well...keep it up!
 
devdahiya said:
Koi makan ghar nahin bann sakta, jab tak ussmei bassti na hon laddkiyan
Ye aur baat hei ke humari magroori ka sikkar hoti hein hamesha ye laddkiyan
Janam dene wala bann jata kabhi iska hatyara,tou kuchh janam se pehle maar di jaati hein ye laddkiyan
Ghar ki char deewarri mei pissti din-raat bahhot saari,tou kuchh kothhe pe nachti ye laddkiyan
Nochnne wallon ki kammi nahin andhhere mei bhi,tou bolo kahan chhuppein haiwanno se ye laddkiyan
Raat ke 10 bajje ke baad sabhya sehron ki saddkkon pe nikkallne ki gustakhi nahin karr sakti ye laddkiyan
Kahhan baithha hei koi narr peesaach,nahin janti ye bholi laddkiyan
Auratt ek sampurran rista hei,jannani hei,palnne walli hei...phir bhi surakshit nahin hein laddkiyan
Paap karta koi aur lekin uski sajja bhi bhugat-ti hein ye laddkiyan
Harr ek konne mei neelamm ho rhi hein aadammi ke haathon laddkiyan
Abhi bhi padhh likh janne ke baadd bhi GUNGGI hein ye laddkiyan
Atyachar ki inteha ho chali hei....lekin dekho phir bhi hanss kar ji rahi hein ye laddkiyan


Good thread Rupi!......And good composition as well...keep it up!
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Once again excellent reply from your side sir.....you put very nice thoughts and truth in your compositions.....i really like your kind personalities:) :)
 
Hats off to Rupendra, Vikas and Dev Dahiya Uncle ji!

Sahi mein bahoot badhiya likha.. aur mein padh ke bhav vibhor ho gya.
Meri bhi ek Bhatijee sei..aur woh menne sabb tein pyaari laage sei !!! Har ek line mein menne waa yaad aayee....
 
really nice compositions by rupender,vikas and dev sir
hats off to u:) :)
:)
 
wat an excellent way to express hard truths ......its really worth reading
 
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