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Dear Jatlanders,
Sometimes when I feel alone here in Saudi Arabia I try to write something in form of Poem, Nazm,Ghazal or anything you can say.
I am starting this thread to post your own poems and shayari.Please share your experience while staying alone away from your loved ones.
Please please post your own words here only.

for opening I am posting one of mine.
Please give your comments.
Arz kiya hai.....

Kaghaj pe aksar tumhari yaadon ke fasane likhta hoon
teri mohabbat se bhare khushion ke jamane likhta hoon
tumhari pyar bhari baaten wo kasme mohabbat ki
dil me bhare tumhari yaadon ke khajane likhta hoon
kabhi berukhi tumhari kabhi tumhari hansi ke saath
gam se bhare dil ke ye tarane likhta hoon
har waqt teri yaad me dooba rahta hoon sanam
phir bhi teri yaad ke 'sahil' so bahane likhta hoon.

Regards.
 
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Mr jakhar ye tukbandi nahin bahut achhi shayari hai.......carry on
 
jakhar2005 said:
Dear Jatlanders,
Sometimes when I feel alone here in Saudi Arabia I try to write something in form of Poem, Nazm,Ghazal or anything you can say.
I am starting this thread to post your own poems and shayari.Please share your experience while staying alone away from your loved ones.
Please please post your own words here only.

for opening I am posting one of mine.
Please give your comments.
Arz kiya hai.....

Kaghaj pe aksar tumhari yaadon ke fasane likhta hoon
teri mohabbat se bhare khushion ke jamane likhta hoon
tumhari pyar bhari baaten wo kasme mohabbat ki
dil me bhare tumhari yaadon ke khajane likhta hoon
kabhi berukhi tumhari kabhi tumhari hansi ke saath
gam se bhare dil ke ye tarane likhta hoon
har waqt teri yaad me dooba rahta hoon sanam
phir bhi teri yaad ke 'sahil' so bahane likhta hoon.

Regards.
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Jakhar Bhai bahut achcha likha
 
Agar ye hei tukbanddi mere bhai, to assliyat kya hogi
Jo bichhadd jata hei apni janne tammanna se, wo ho jata hei dil ka rogi
Par yaad rakho Sitaram bhai, Har raat ke baad suraj nikalta hei
Tumhara pyar salamat rahega, baraff nahin hei jo pinghaltta hei?

Tum jahan bhi raho,tumhare pyar ka saya rahe har dum tumhare saath
Kyunki pyar ke hotte hein kai lakh kilometer lambbe haath.


May God keep you blessed and happy in all circumstances!
 
too good

Sitaram JI:
This was very good indeed; i think i should try to pen some lines too after the inspiration...phir kabhi. Agar kuch kisse likhen to accha lagega. aap dev dahiya ji to competition de sakte ho.
Very best wishes.
Anmol.
 
Dev sir, thanks a lot.
when I don't have anybody to talk with than I try to speak with paper and pen.Its not all personal but a sense of lonliness ignites my feelings and I try to canvas it on the paper.

Regards.

devdahiya said:
Agar ye hei tukbanddi mere bhai, to assliyat kya hogi
Jo bichhadd jata hei apni janne tammanna se, wo ho jata hei dil ka rogi
Par yaad rakho Sitaram bhai, Har raat ke baad suraj nikalta hei
Tumhara pyar salamat rahega, baraff nahin hei jo pinghaltta hei?

Tum jahan bhi raho,tumhare pyar ka saya rahe har dum tumhare saath
Kyunki pyar ke hotte hein kai lakh kilometer lambbe haath.


May God keep you blessed and happy in all circumstances!
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Thanks very much all for your kind appreciation.

Kuchh lines pesh hain jo maine bahut pahle likhi thi.
Ummid hai aap pasand karenge.


Mujhe chhodkar ja raeh ho,jao apna koi wasta hi nahi hai,
Tumhari manjil hai bahut kareeb,aur hamen maloom koi raasta hi nahi hai.

Door jakar kahin tum jahan apna aabad kar lena,
Mile kabhi fursat tumhe to hamen bhi jara yaad kar lena

Dost ko mere har khushi de ya rab
Mujhe chaeh milen dushwariyan jahan ki


Begano me wafa ki talash na kar ‘sahil’
Tere to apne bhi aksar bewafa nikalte hain

Khafa hokar yun dil se na kheliye sanam
Bina jurm bataye kisi ko saja dena bhi theek nahi.
 
jakhar2005 said:
Thanks very much all for your kind appreciation.

Kuchh lines pesh hain jo maine bahut pahle likhi thi.
Ummid hai aap pasand karenge.


Mujhe chhodkar ja raeh ho,jao apna koi wasta hi nahi hai,
Tumhari manjil hai bahut kareeb,aur hamen maloom koi raasta hi nahi hai.

Door jakar kahin tum jahan apna aabad kar lena,
Mile kabhi fursat tumhe to hamen bhi jara yaad kar lena

Dost ko mere har khushi de ya rab
Mujhe chaeh milen dushwariyan jahan ki


Begano me wafa ki talash na kar ‘sahil’
Tere to apne bhi aksar bewafa nikalte hain

Khafa hokar yun dil se na kheliye sanam
Bina jurm bataye kisi ko saja dena bhi theek nahi.
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Bohot Badhhiya.......dil ko chhoo gai baat.





Gaflat ke dino ko na kar yaad ei deewane dil
Bhatke huwe bhi mil jaya karte hein achanak gafflat mei hi mil

Ye sansaar tera hei, Ye kudrat ka pyar bhi judda nahi mere yaar
Agar Dil khol kar dekhoge to har ansh mei dikhega pyar hi pyar.
 
Thanks Dev sir.

kuchh to baat hai aapki baaton me hujoor
yun hi koi kisi ki tareef nahi karta
kahte hain har dil hai ek jaisa yahan
khuda ise banane me kabhi bhed nahi karta
 
jakhar2005 said:
Thanks Dev sir.

kuchh to baat hai aapki baaton me hujoor
yun hi koi kisi ki tareef nahi karta
kahte hain har dil hai ek jaisa yahan
khuda ise banane me kabhi bhed nahi karta
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Hamare liye to praye bhi praye nahi
Kya kabhi koi praya milta hei kabhi
Prayee to preet hoti hei
Pyar karne wallon ki hamesha jeet hoti hei.
 
very nice

very-very nice Jakhar ji...really very touchy lines...bahut hi badhiya...aur bhi kuch sunayiye.....


jakhar2005 said:
Thanks very much all for your kind appreciation.

Kuchh lines pesh hain jo maine bahut pahle likhi thi.
Ummid hai aap pasand karenge.


Mujhe chhodkar ja raeh ho,jao apna koi wasta hi nahi hai,
Tumhari manjil hai bahut kareeb,aur hamen maloom koi raasta hi nahi hai.

Door jakar kahin tum jahan apna aabad kar lena,
Mile kabhi fursat tumhe to hamen bhi jara yaad kar lena

Dost ko mere har khushi de ya rab
Mujhe chaeh milen dushwariyan jahan ki


Begano me wafa ki talash na kar ‘sahil’
Tere to apne bhi aksar bewafa nikalte hain

Khafa hokar yun dil se na kheliye sanam
Bina jurm bataye kisi ko saja dena bhi theek nahi.
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Thanks a lot all but this thread is for all. Please do share your creation here.
Ek aur pesh hai....

jab yaad uski aati hai dil me kasak-si uthati hai
Khyal aate hi uska ek bijli-si chamak uthati hai.
Yaadon me basa hai uska wo masoom chehara
Jaate hi jiske ye gulshan ho gaya sehara
Jiski tasveer aankhon me ab bhi jee uthati hai
Khyal aate hi……..
Mohabbat me uski dewane ho gaye the hum
Aanhkon me uski kho ke parwane ho gaye the hum
Dushman jamane me aaj bhi dhoondhta hoon usko
Jo yaadon me aaj bhi sagar ki lahar-si uthati hai.
Khyal aate hi……..
Khuda ki nigah-e-meharban thi jo paya use
Kis jalim ki najar lagi jo pakar bhi ganwaya use
Nafrat ki is duniya me pyar se dhoondhta hoon usko
Jiske bina ’sahil’ ye jindagi saja-si ho uthati hai.
 
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jakhar2005 said:
Thanks a lot all but this thread is for all. Please do share your creation here.
Ek aur pesh hai....

jab yaad uski aati hai dil me kasak-si uthati hai
Khyal aate hi uska ek bijli-si chamak uthati hai.
Yaadon me basa hai uska wo masoom chehara
Jaate hi jiske ye gulshan ho gaya sehara
Jiski tasveer aankhon me ab bhi jee uthati hai
Khyal aate hi……..
Mohabbat me uski dewane ho gaye the hum
Aanhkon me uski kho ke parwane ho gaye the hum
Dushman jamane me aaj bhi dhoondhta hoon usko
Jo yaadon me aaj bhi sagar ki lahar-si uthati hai.
Khyal aate hi……..
Khuda ki nigah-e-meharban thi jo paya use
Kis jalim ki najar lagi jo pakar bhi ganwaya use
Nafrat ki is duniya me pyar se dhoondhta hoon usko
Jiske bina ’sahil’ ye jindagi saja-si ho uthati hai.
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Good stuff bhai:



Nafrat ki kya bissat ke pyar ko neecha dikha de
Pyar to wo cheejj hei jo pathar ko bhi momm bana de.
 
Pardesh mei reh kar lagta hei patta,apna ghar kya hota hei
Aadami ka mann[mind] vicharta rehta hei jab ye shareer thakk kar sotta hei.
Dil karta hei bann ke panchhi udd jaun abhi ka abhi
Aur aaun na wapiss kabhi--2--2---2--2-2--2.
 
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