Wafa aur mohabbat

[vijay]

Nice and right to the point post, Neelam !

Ye dhaga to wafa aur mohabbat ka hi hai
Bas likhne ka har shabd badalta rahega
Har uss shabd mein kahin na kahin mohabbat hogi
Aur ye yun hi prem dhaga aage badhta rahega
Koi laakh kare koshish kisi ki galat pehchan banane ki
Lakin uski sacchai har insaan khud pehchanta rahega
Log baaten juthi karke idhar se udhar karte hain
Aise logon ko bhi ye zamana har kadam pe samajhta rahega

Na jaane kyon duniyan bus dusron ko dhekhti hai
Apne ander bhi to koi jhank kar to dekhee kabhi
Jo karte hain barbaad 'apno' ko es duniyan mein
Kya unhone apne aap par bhi woh soch parkhi kabhi

 

[vijay]

Mohabbat kya hai kisi ki maang mein sindoor bharkar dekho
Yun likh ke tum bhi apne aap ko shayar na samjho
Shayari kya hoti hai ise dhang se samajhne ke liye
Taane maarne se pahle kisi ke dil pe beeti har baat ko samjho

Woh kya taane denge mohabbat ke deewano ko
Jinki fitrat mein wafa ka naam tak nahin dhikhtaa
Kisi ko mil gaya hoga koi kuchh waqt ke liye yahan
Yakeen to tab ayegaa jab pyar asliyat nahin dhkhtaa

 

[fool4love]

so Vijay bhai... aap bolte thee na ki.. i sud try some serious vali shayari..??
this is y.. i never liked it... ppl tend to take it personally. I've always respected.. n appreciated urs n every one elses shayari here. u said laila majno thing.. kitabi. i felt it was wrong..!
n like.. Neelam ji said... agar aapko meri baat tana lagi vijay bhai.. then that wasn't my intention.. i tot u'd understand.. u know me for long enough now.

sher likha thaa.. par mita diya
socha shayar ka khitaab to mil hi gaya hai

 

[choudharyneelam]

so Vijay bhai... aap bolte thee na ki.. i sud try some serious vali shayari..??
this is y.. i never liked it... ppl tend to take it personally. I've always respected.. n appreciated urs n every one elses shayari here. u said laila majno thing.. kitabi. i felt it was wrong..!
n like.. Neelam ji said... agar aapko meri baat tana lagi vijay bhai.. then that wasn't my intention.. i tot u'd understand.. u know me for long enough now.

sher likha thaa.. par mita diya
socha shayar ka khitaab to mil hi gaya hai

ok kamal if it was like that then it's ok...but what you wrote will be only understood like that by everyone the way i then replied to you....and if you really like to write some serious shayari then atleast care about the words you use and the way of using those words in your poetries..no doubt you too write very good but just care about the thing i said now....and write something matching with the personality of that person to whom you are replying to....and then nobody will put the points like i did...but if you felt hurt by it then i'm really sorry but i also care about the wrong words written for anyone in any manner.

Regards
Neelam

 

[vijay]

so Vijay bhai... aap bolte thee na ki.. i sud try some serious vali shayari..??
this is y.. i never liked it... ppl tend to take it personally. I've always respected.. n appreciated urs n every one elses shayari here. u said laila majno thing.. kitabi. i felt it was wrong..!
n like.. Neelam ji said... agar aapko meri baat tana lagi vijay bhai.. then that wasn't my intention.. i tot u'd understand.. u know me for long enough now.

sher likha thaa.. par mita diya
socha shayar ka khitaab to mil hi gaya hai

Hey kamlooo.................. My Bro

Don't feel that bad yaar............... it's just shaayari nothing else.......... but ya who mentioned that Laila Majnoo in that shaayari i know that parson's nature and that's why i commented
i know how fun loving person u are and u know me too buddy............. so take it easy yaar ..............

ab koi bhadhiya sa sher paste kar kamlooooo

 

[fool4love]

Hey kamlooo.................. My Bro

Don't feel that bad yaar............... it's just shaayari nothing else.......... but ya who mentioned that Laila Majnoo in that shaayari i know that parson's nature and that's why i commented
i know how fun loving person u are and u know me too buddy............. so take it easy yaar ..............

ab koi bhadhiya sa sher paste kar kamlooooo

lol.. did u just say paste ??? like copy paste ???
bhai.. pahlyaa.. soch lyo... manao so ak.. tanya tale daabo ge aaj ?

 

[fool4love]

ok kamal if it was like that then it's ok...but what you wrote will be only understood like that by everyone the way i then replied to you....and if you really like to write some serious shayari then atleast care about the words you use and the way of using those words in your poetries..no doubt you too write very good but just care about the thing i said now....and write something matching with the personality of that person to whom you are replying to....and then nobody will put the points like i did...but if you felt hurt by it then i'm really sorry but i also care about the wrong words written for anyone in any manner.

Regards
Neelam

har ek muskurahat... muskan nahi hoti
nafrat ho ya mohabbat aasan nahin hoti
aansu gham ke or khushi ke hain ek se hote
par uski pehchan aasan nahin hoti

 

[vijay]

lol.. did u just say paste ??? like copy paste ???
bhai.. pahlyaa.. soch lyo... manao so ak.. tanya tale daabo ge aaj ?

Naa bhai Kamal.... chhote bhai ke liye jaan bhi haazir hai baawle.......... Nu shak na karya kar kasaai.............. kuch suthra sa likh de na bhai..... ki mera jee bhin khush ho jaye

Tanne sharam na aati bade bahi pe shak karke ???????

 

[vijay]

Es mohabbat ne bhi kyaa din dhikhaayen hain yahan
Bewafaai mein lut gaye kaise kare abaad humen koi
Hazzaron umeeden jaagti hai har ek pyari nigaah par
Es kadar pyaar se bhi ab na dekhaa kare humen koi

 

[ritu]

vj it was me who mentioned the laila majnu .can u please tell here what u know about my nature?

Hey kamlooo.................. My Bro

Don't feel that bad yaar............... it's just shaayari nothing else.......... but ya who mentioned that Laila Majnoo in that shaayari i know that parson's nature and that's why i commented
i know how fun loving person u are and u know me too buddy............. so take it easy yaar ..............

ab koi bhadhiya sa sher paste kar kamlooooo

 

[ritu]

kaml tu itna purana panchhi ho liya er isi isi bata ne gole se.vaise kamal tu t hasata hi accha laga se ye shyari shuri jisi serious bata n to rahan hi de vaise man teri chinta ho rahi thi tu os kimveer ne shooting kari thi os college me to nahi padta na.

so Vijay bhai... aap bolte thee na ki.. i sud try some serious vali shayari..??
this is y.. i never liked it... ppl tend to take it personally. I've always respected.. n appreciated urs n every one elses shayari here. u said laila majno thing.. kitabi. i felt it was wrong..!
n like.. Neelam ji said... agar aapko meri baat tana lagi vijay bhai.. then that wasn't my intention.. i tot u'd understand.. u know me for long enough now.

sher likha thaa.. par mita diya
socha shayar ka khitaab to mil hi gaya hai

 

[ritu]

laila majnu ka jikar to sadio se hota aya h
sacche ashiq to bus ek aap hi hue h
auro ko to aap sadak chap jaante h
itni hi pachan thi na jo logo ki aapko
tu kyu ye bewafi aur berukhi ke parche jatland pe chapte h.

Jisne Laila Majnoo ka jikar kiya unko pehchaante hain
Kisne jaan di thi mohabbat mein hum ye sab jaante hain
Char line dil se likhna yahan aapko koi khel lagta hoga
Kiski shaayari mein kitni sachhai hai ye sab jaante hai

 

[vijay]

laila majnu ka jikar to sadio se hota aya h
sacche ashiq to bus ek aap hi hue h
auro ko to aap sadak chap jaante h
itni hi pachan thi na jo logo ki aapko
tu kyu ye bewafi aur berukhi ke parche jatland pe chapte h.

Hum nadan kya jane kaun sadak chap hai aur kaun izzatdaar
Bus kuchh sher likh dete hain jo hamaara ye dil kahta hai
Wafa, mohabbat, kismat har rang hai 'Wafa aur Mohabbat' mein
Ye aur baat hai ki koi insaan ise kya samajh kar padhta hai

 

[shamshermalik]

Hey Neelam donot take that seriously...you knwo my nature...kabhi kabhi thodi see kheechai karne ki adat..Neelam Jab aapko dekha hi nahin to aaple baare me kaise likhoonga...just joking...plz donot mind

hmmm....shamsher i know that you are a decent guy and i know you don't think like that but friend i just didn't wanted to see it like that from other person so written something from my side....hahaha...i think you got it now

 

[shamshermalik]

Husan wale aab apne husan ko kahan choopaayen
Aankhen band karne se chandni to kam nahin hoti
Har khoobsurat chehre par thahar jaati sabki nazaren
Kissi ki adaa se uski wafa to kam nahin hoti

Wafa kisi ke saath karne waale apne husn ke jalwe dikahte nahin
Jo ye jalwe dikhake juthe waade karte the peeche chupe us fareb ko samjho
Apnon ke liye apnon se jyada koi iss duniya mein sochta nahin
Jo dikhawa karen baaton se apni tum unki tarah har ek ko mat samjho

 

[ritu]

hua jo samna to ab kyo katra rahe ho
aise sacche shyar h to baat kyu chupa rahae ho
pechanane ka khula aam kar te ho dava to
poochne pe haqeeqt baya karne se kyu katra rahe ho

Hum nadan kya jane kaun sadak chap hai aur kaun izzatdaar
Bus kuchh sher likh dete hain jo hamaara ye dil kahta hai
Wafa, mohabbat, kismat har rang hai 'Wafa aur Mohabbat' mein
Ye aur baat hai ki koi insaan ise kya samajh kar padhta hai

 

[vijay]

Husan wale aab apne husan ko kahan choopaayen
Aankhen band karne se chandni to kam nahin hoti
Har khoobsurat chehre par thahar jaati sabki nazaren
Kissi ki adaa se uski wafa to kabhi kam nahin hoti

Husn waale kahan parda rakh paayenge husn par
Woh lakh chhupaayen chahe aashiqon ki nigah se
Dikh hi jaata hai unka haseen chand sa chehra
Aur ye zindagi dua maangti hai kisi begunaah se

 

[vijay]

hua jo samna to ab kyo katra rahe ho
aise sacche shyar h to baat kyu chupa rahae ho
pechanane ka khula aam kar te ho dava to
poochne pe haqeeqt baya karne se kyu katra rahe ho

Woh aur insaan honge jo peeth pe waar karte honge
Kya rakha hai ab kuchh chhupaane aur bataane mein
'Pyar baantate chalo' hi to bus falsafa hai hamaara
Char din zindagi ke na beet jaaye roothne manaane mein

 

[shamshermalik]

Ritu Kya baat hai...

yahan husnwale hi husan ki baaton se katraate hain
enko kya pata parvaane to aate hain shamma ki aur
dekhi hai shayad aapne bhi us chand ki mohak chandni
Jiski chaahat me mar jaate hain jaane kitne chakor

vj where r you ur thread needs you.ake sambhal le.
na to ye wafa aur mohbbat se ada aur husan me convert hon ala h

 

[shamshermalik]

Husn waale kahan parda rakh paayenge husn par
Woh lakh chhupaayen chahe aashiqon ki nigah se
Dikh hi jaata hai unka haseen chand sa chehra
Aur ye zindagi dua maangti hai kisi begunaah se

Yoon adaa se chalkar saamne aayaa hai koi
aankhon me bharkar chahat ka samandar
ahista ahista jhook gayee uski vo nazaren
Naa jaane kaisa ahsaas jagayaa usne mere andar