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vivekdh
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रणवीर भाई क्यों बहस कर रहे हो,
अपको नही अच्छा लग रहा तो मत लिखो इस धागे मे
बहुत आसान है बहस ना करना कोशिश करके देखो
अपको नही अच्छा लग रहा तो मत लिखो इस धागे मे
बहुत आसान है बहस ना करना कोशिश करके देखो
Zakhm-e-dil
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ranvirsingh
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Does not the same apply to you?
Why are you hurt if I gave the link?
You go on copy pasting! why you bother if someone gives the link?
Before giving suggestion to other people, be practicle and apply the same in your own life first. JYADA MUSHKIL NAHIN HAI KOSHISH KAR KE DEKHO
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vivekdh
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i m not hurt bahi saab per lagta hai apko meri boli hui baat samaj nahi aayi. muje koi shok nahi hai faltu ki bahas kerne kaa appka jaisa bhi mann ho aap likho.
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ranvirsingh
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Bhaijaan baat wahi samajhi jaati hai jo samjhne layak ho
Anyway take it easy and have fun!
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With due apologies… Shayari is OK in TimePass forum. But is it necessary for any member to pour posts after an interval of a few minutes only? See posts No. 49, 50 and 51 by Vivek, posted one after other, within a gap of few minutes. Each post contains two-line stanzas. It would have been better to write all these six lines in one post, rather than in 3 successive ones. This way, one can take credit of increasing one’s ‘post-count’. But remember, a good, presentable, original post is better than a hundred superfluous posts. Write good poetry in leisure time and save it on your PC and post it when the stuff is ready. Picking stuff from somewhere and posting it or engaging in personal talk like chat-rooms or something like “Antakshari” in Jatland forums neither brings you repute nor does it attract readers. If a thread is like a personal conversation between a few members, it becomes a waste for other readers.
Baaki aap logon ki marzi !
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With due apologies… Shayari is OK in TimePass forum. But is it necessary for any member to pour posts after an interval of a few minutes only? See posts No. 49, 50 and 51 by Vivek, posted one after other, within a gap of few minutes. Each post contains two-line stanzas. It would have been better to write all these six lines in one post, rather than in 3 successive ones. This way, one can take credit of increasing one’s ‘post-count’. But remember, a good, presentable, original post is better than a hundred superfluous posts. Write good poetry in leisure time and save it on your PC and post it when the stuff is ready. Picking stuff from somewhere and posting it or engaging in personal talk like chat-rooms or something like “Antakshari” in Jatland forums neither brings you repute nor does it attract readers. If a thread is like a personal conversation between a few members, it becomes a waste for other readers.
Baaki aap logon ki marzi !
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Ranvir ji,
Jst go thru that click wahan bi forums mein hi hai kisi ne copy paste hi kii hogi n aap jaisa wahan bi koi ..ye link daal dega Arguments ke liye...
http://www.jatland.com/forums/showthread.php?t=21160&page=3
Some peoples really like to argu without any reason...
Jst go thru that click wahan bi forums mein hi hai kisi ne copy paste hi kii hogi n aap jaisa wahan bi koi ..ye link daal dega Arguments ke liye...
http://www.jatland.com/forums/showthread.php?t=21160&page=3
Some peoples really like to argu without any reason...
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vivekdh
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DND ji main maffi chata hu agar kuch galat baat post ker di ho maine,per maine ye nahi socha tha ki meri post count badne kaa koi matlab hai 3no sher main issliye alag alag dalle kyonki teno kaa apas me koi matlab nahi hai yahan sare likhe hue sher copy paste nahi hain ,
maine sirf timepass ke irade se hi yahan likha tha i m sorry again
ranvir ji aap se bhi maffi mangta hu main agar maine koi galat baat kahi ho to
regards
vivek
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ranvirsingh
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Ranvir ji,
Jst go thru that click wahan bi forums mein hi hai kisi ne copy paste hi kii hogi n aap jaisa wahan bi koi ..ye link daal dega Arguments ke liye...
http://www.jatland.com/forums/showthread.php?t=21160&page=3
Some peoples really like to argu without any reason...
I did not argue, I just gave a link and you sent me a pager saying that why I did that to hurt you ? When you have sent pager then why you put the post # 54?
Go on copy paste spree and donot worry, in future, I will not put any link to your copy paste. now please stop this useless argument to prove your copy paste legitimate and donot expect any reply from me to any of your future quarries.
I think moderators can help you better.
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Ranvir ji,
I din't felt bad for whtever u had pasted ur motive was not for hurting me as u told me n m not hurted by these small things... This things r 4 time pass ....
i have not expected that time also n not even in future its ur wish if u wanna do more R & D on my shaayries u r welcome to post ur LINKS ...
Sorry for my behaviour if m anywhere or i hurted u with my posts.
n rahi baat moderators kii they r having full rghts to comment...
Regards,
Maniisha....
prashantacmet
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sir ji........ aapne bahut mehnat ki hai..........!!!.........aap ek lagansheel jaat ke sachhe udharan ho...............
copy paste to main bhi kar raha huin.merre waale dhoond ke dhikhao..............
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Ranvir ji,
I din't felt bad for whtever u had pasted ur motive was not for hurting me as u told me n m not hurted by these small things... This things r 4 time pass ....
i have not expected that time also n not even in future its ur wish if u wanna do more R & D on my shaayries u r welcome to post ur LINKS ...
Sorry for my behaviour if m anywhere or i hurted u with my posts.
n rahi baat moderators kii they r having full rghts to comment...
Regards,
Maniisha....
Ranvir ji or manisha ji lado maat ghana bhunda bhi feel mat karo. copy karo yah apne or se likho sabka matlab se maje karo. esa matna karo yaar. me to manisha ji ki poems ka fan sun or tuition bhi lagna chaun sun.
god bless all of u
prashantacmet
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zakhme dil pe bhi is zalim dunia ne
copy paste ka ilzam laga dala
ab zakhm aapne ho ya churaye hue
dard to dard hi hota hai
daad ke hakdar hai ye shyar to
jinhone dusro ke gum ko bhi apna bana daala
bobbo........har lane ke paache yeh baandaar se kyon chipta diye tai
........prashantacmet
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jab bhi mohabbat ka naam sunta huin,
jaane kyoun malal sa hotta hai...........
arsaa pehle chhot lagi thi,
dard kyoun baar-baar hota hai....................
jaane kyoun malal sa hotta hai...........
arsaa pehle chhot lagi thi,
dard kyoun baar-baar hota hai....................
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prashantacmet
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ooo............kubaddi baalak.......... maan jya kerek.......... haade dil ke zakham naasur ban liye..tanne maje soojh re sai............majje ka naam na le iss taagge main........ na to jakhmi diloein ki bad duyaaien tujhe kahi ka nahi chhoddengi...................
Ree Daaat ja dharte Dahkel
Reee chore
Me balak kona raha, kabaadi bhi kona bhai ji just i was waying do not take it serious and donot fight pls. tane te kasuta naas pad diya lolllll
hahahahah anyway i like ur way of writting me in jatu boli. keep it up
tu bhi daaat ja dharte dhakel. hahahhaa
Reee chore
Me balak kona raha, kabaadi bhi kona bhai ji just i was waying do not take it serious and donot fight pls. tane te kasuta naas pad diya lolllll
hahahahah anyway i like ur way of writting me in jatu boli. keep it up
tu bhi daaat ja dharte dhakel. hahahhaa
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Mashaallah,
Kabile tariff hai, aap dono ki Shaayrii.
Sare purane Jakham hare ho gaye, ab Mallahum kon Lagave.
Khaire hamara to dekha jagga, ye jo aandhi tha rakhi se na, esne challu rakho. Copy ki koi bat na ye to sada hi hoti aayee hai. Lagta hai ab Lakhnau jane ki jarurat nahi padegi, Shaayrii sunne ko.
Orr Apna apna Khayal rakhana.
Both of you got Great talent.
All the best
to both of you.
Kabile tariff hai, aap dono ki Shaayrii.
Sare purane Jakham hare ho gaye, ab Mallahum kon Lagave.
Khaire hamara to dekha jagga, ye jo aandhi tha rakhi se na, esne challu rakho. Copy ki koi bat na ye to sada hi hoti aayee hai. Lagta hai ab Lakhnau jane ki jarurat nahi padegi, Shaayrii sunne ko.
Orr Apna apna Khayal rakhana.
Both of you got Great talent.
All the best
to both of you.
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prashantacmet
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bhai Grewal.......U are true with ur words......One should ignore such futile argumenting..... i don't understand why ppl try to degrade the efforts of other person........ Whatever is posted here that might be a copy-paste stuff.......but due to our efforts..one can get such a gr8..shayri accumulated in a single thread.........and it is extremely beneficial for the persons who do'nt have too much spare time to search out the www.google.com ...
divyakadyan
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teri aankhoon ke aasun ye batate hain
hum bhi tujhe aksar yaad aate hain
rahein kahin bhi is duniya mein hum
guzare lamnhe umar bhar satate hain
hum bhi tujhe aksar yaad aate hain
rahein kahin bhi is duniya mein hum
guzare lamnhe umar bhar satate hain
prashantacmet
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wo sitamgar jo bholi surat banaye baithe hai
merre dil ko wo zakhmi banaye baithe hai..........
has rahe hai iss kadar julfoien ko sawartee huien
na jaane abb kisko nishana banaye baithe hai...............
merre dil ko wo zakhmi banaye baithe hai..........
has rahe hai iss kadar julfoien ko sawartee huien
na jaane abb kisko nishana banaye baithe hai...............
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