brahmtewatia
Active member
Moreover, if we look at the paragraph below, every sentence contains 'learner' or 'learning'. It sounds so repetitive that the paragraph loses its rythm and charm. We should use synonyms if same word has to used repetitiously. Words similar in meaning to 'learner' viz. scholar, assimilator, apprentice etc. and similar in meaning to 'learning' viz. acquiring, ascertaining, conning etc. prove to be very effective.
vry rightly said sanjeev, it's like inculcating a self induced discipline which should take care of such repetitions and just need a bit of patience and care on part of an individual, while drafting a sentence.
p.s. : pls. correct me on the usage of need ? or should it be needs ?