shamshermalik
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Koi bhooton se naa daraye yahan Jatland walon ko
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Bhoot nazar bhi aa jaye, Kar payega kuchh bhi nahin,
Usne abhii dekhaa nahin, Dekhaa hai to jaanaa nahin!
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Bhooton ki mahfil me yoon pariyon ka dera,
Ye kissi ki hai kahani yaa kissa hai tera
Arre re
Tumne ye apna kya haal kar dala
Ek hi sher ko bar bar likh dala
Aur ye kya, likh ke mita bhi dala
Phir bhi humne chor pakad hi dala....![]()
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(I know I know this one sucks er meri capacity bhi bas itni–ae hai shayari ki, chalo baaki shayaro ko sun liya jaaye, taking backseat now..![]()
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Mere saamne vaali khidki me eik chaand ka tukda rehta hai...( and yeh sach hai!!)
Afsos yeh hai voh humse kuch ukadaa ukhadaa rehta hai!!
Cheers!!
Shobhit Deshwal
wah..wah...wah.... kaun kahta hai ki jat sirf ladne me mahir hain....dekhiye dekhiye...gaur se dekhiye...galib se badhkar hain hum log...
hamari maang.... jatland ka naam badal kar kardo Galibland....hihihih...
rimjhim sawan baras raha hai, aur jhule pad gaye hain
aaj to wo bhi ghar se sanwar ke bahar nikal gaye hain
wo geet gaa rahe hain, hum masti me gunguna rahe hain
wo haamri jaban pe aur hum unki jaban pe baith gaye hain..
RK^2
lol... true!... we really have some talented folks in here!!... how beautiful it is... that we can express somuch.. in so little words!! ... wounder who invented this shero shayari thingy... n how feelings were expressed before that...wah..wah...wah.... kaun kahta hai ki jat sirf ladne me mahir hain....dekhiye dekhiye...gaur se dekhiye...galib se badhkar hain hum log...
hamari maang.... jatland ka naam badal kar kardo Galibland....hihihih...
rimjhim sawan baras raha hai, aur jhule pad gaye hain
aaj to wo bhi ghar se sanwar ke bahar nikal gaye hain
wo geet gaa rahe hain, hum masti me gunguna rahe hain
wo haamri jaban pe aur hum unki jaban pe baith gaye hain..
RK^2
Kya baat hei Bhai jaan...........Jeebh pei kyun baithh ge ek doosrre ki..aur bhaterri jaghan thi...ha..ha..ha...Bohot khoob.
Mei usski jabban parr baithha wo merri jabban parr baithhe
27 july ko hum ho jayengge Faridabaad mei ikkathhe
Firr mei bathhaun ga ussko appne sirr parr aur wo baithhayengge mujhe apne sirr parr
Tabiyat ho jayegi nihaal arr dil khushi se tarr-battar.
hahhaa... arrey mina,
aapki jagan hamare glaas me aur haamri aapke glass me
fir dekhna kiya dubki lagti hai, peete hi ek saans me
dekhne wale dekhnge, gaane wale gayenge
hum tum naachenge milkar, ghar ke saamne ghaas me....
wah wah wah... aur ghar ke saamne wali sadak ka naam bhi Mirza Ghalib Road hai bhai jaan.....
RK^2
Wo nadiya nahi thi aansu the mere,
jis par wo kashti chalate rahe,
manzil mile unhe ye dua thi
meri isliye hum aansu bahate rahe
Khuda kare, hindustan ke sab aasiq aap jaise hon
sukha jab gire, wo sab asqon ke dayaya bahayen
kasti wale duayen denge aapko manzil pe jaane ki
aur huma dua denge, janab kheto me bahar aane ki
hihihih....
RK^2
Sir he is writing such a good shayari with emotions and you are making fun of it....hahahahaha.....lakin aapne bhi interesting kavita likhi hai![]()
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hahhaa... enn asiqon ki taang kheenchne ka alag hi maja hai Neelam ji...warna pata nahi yen ke likh den...hahaha..kabhi chand ki bat karen lagge to kabhi asqon ki nadiyon ki...hum enhe yun kahan ke bhai, ke saare tum mallah ki choree te hi isq karo ho jo uski kashti ki itnee fikar hai...arrey bhai thora sa isq kisaan ki betti te bhi karlo...bechare ke khet me paani aa jaya karegaa....wo bhi dua dega tum aasiqon ne....hihiihh.. ..just kidding..
RK^2
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