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After a long time I am visiting this thread. Have something to share with you.
Written recently.

Ae raat aaj kuchh dheeme gujar mera mahboob rutha hai
Aawaj to nahi aai koi magar kahin kuchh jarur toota hai
Jab tak wo saath the waqt pata nahi kaise gujar gaya
har pal lagta hai sadiyon sa jab se saath chhoota hai
Har shaam khwab unse milne ka palkon me saja leta hun
Jaise hi palak jhapke, malum hota hai khwab to jhootha hai
Aaj ki shaam kuchh jyada hi surkh dikhai deti hai “sahil”
Lagta hai kudrat ke nagar bhi ghamon ka sailab utha hai,
 
raat jo judai ki hogi to lambi hi hogi
har pal har lamha apne gujrne ka ehsas dega
saath vo jab the to kadr lamho ki kisko thi
ab jo saath vo nahi to lamha lamha yuhi thamega
tute dil jo awaj karte to asoovo ka kya hota
jab vo pass hi hote to onki kimat ka ehsas kaise hota
jakhar77 said:
Hi guys,
After a long time I am visiting this thread. Have something to share with you.
Written recently.

Ae raat aaj kuchh dheeme gujar mera mahboob rutha hai
Aawaj to nahi aai koi magar kahin kuchh jarur toota hai
Jab tak wo saath the waqt pata nahi kaise gujar gaya
har pal lagta hai sadiyon sa jab se saath chhoota hai
Har shaam khwab unse milne ka palkon me saja leta hun
Jaise hi palak jhapke, malum hota hai khwab to jhootha hai
Aaj ki shaam kuchh jyada hi surkh dikhai deti hai “sahil”
Lagta hai kudrat ke nagar bhi ghamon ka sailab utha hai,
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hey you guys going well...keep writing....

Saath jab chhutte kisi ka tab hi uski jaroorat ka pata chalta hai
Aur ye to aam baat hai paas rahne wala kahan kisi ko accha lagta hai
Sirf laakhon kamiyaan usmein dusra insaan dhoondta hai
Kami dekhi to bhi koi burai nahin lekin kisi ki ek achchhai ko kyun bhulta hai
 
hi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Dosto

:) Jaan hai mujhko zindagi se pyaari,
Jaan ke liye kar doon kurbaan yaari,
Jaan ke liye todd doon dosti tumhaari,
Ab tumse kya chhupaana,
Tum hi toh ho jaan hamaari !

Tumse doori ka ehsaas sataane lagaa,
Tere saath guzaraa har lamha yaad aane laga,
Jab bhi tujhe bhoolne ki koshish ki aye dost,
Tu dil ke aur bhi kareeb aane laga !

Zindagi nahin humein doston se pyaari,
Doston pe haazir hai jaan hamaari,
Aankhon mein hamaari aansoon hai toh kya,
Jaan se bhi pyaari hai muskaan tumhaari !

Jasbaate ishq naakaam naa hone denge,
Dil ki duniya mein kabhi shaam naa hone denge,
Dosti ka har ilzaam apne sar par le lenge,
Par dost hum tumhe badnaam na hone denge !

Dosti toh sirf ek ittefaaq hai,
Yeh toh dilon ki mulaakaat hai,
Dosti nahi dekhti yeh din hai ki raat hai,
Isme toh sirf wafaadaari aur jasbaat hai !
 
wah-wah !!!

its really nice sir. we want to enjoy more with this type of heart-touching poetry.......

waiting for more..................................................................................
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Ek aur

unki raahon me chirag roshan rahen sada
meri aankhon ke ujale unhe baksh de tu
dil me yun basa rahe wo dhadkan ki tarah
har pal in aankhon me unhi ka aks de tu
jisse kah sakoon baat dil ki bina lagawat ke
zindagi ke safar me ek to aisa sakhs de tu
insaan ko bahut dekh lia aajmakar mane
ab to bas "sahil" ko apna hi ek ansh de tu.
 
kon hai wahan ab mera jisse baat karun
aaj kissse me apna izhar-e-khayalat karun
kab se baitha hun na jane kiske intezar me
malum nahi kisse ye chand sawalaat karun
ab na tum koi mujhse ummid rakhna "sahil"
pata nahi kab maut ke safar ki shuruat karun
 
kaash!

Ram ram sabko.
Ek aur composition pesh kar raha hun. Isme ek sher mere bahut azeez dost ka bhi hai. Usi sher par ye poori ghazal likhi hai.
Ummid hai aapko pasand aayegi.

bahut din gujre chain ki neend na soya me,
kaash ek baar god me mujhe bhi sulata koi।
kab se bhatakta phirta hun is biayabaan me,
kaash aawaj dekar mujhe bhi bulata koi।
kab tak garon ke sang yun gujarun me zindagi,
kaash seene se laga ke mujhe bhi dulraata koi।
kab se tanha akela baitha hun yahan,
kaash apnapan yahan mujhse bhi jatlata koi।
 
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Sir bahut khoob....dil se nikli lagti hai......ek aadhi phuljahdi or chhood do to maja aajaaye....Sahil....bahane likhta hoon....gajab hai sir
 
jakhar77 said:
Yaadon ke jharokhe me jab dekhenge tumhen, dil me ek toofan sa uthega
Jab ashqon ke saath bahenge armaan, dil me ek toofan sa uthega
Agar mil gaye zindagi ke kisi mod par, waqt bas wahin thahar jayega
agar milega kahi jahan me sahil se ‘sahil’, Dil me ek toofan sa uthega.
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Sir bahut hi acha hai.....

Jab Har roz likhta hoon tera naam,kaagze dil par !
To kayoon karta hoon koosish tujhe bhoolane ke liye !!
Ki Tere yaadoon ka silsila yaad aaye koi zaroori to nahi !
Ki Ek bahana hi kaafi hai aansoon bahane ke liye !!
 
Bahut badhia!

Bahut acha likha Arvind Ji.
"ek bahana hi kafi hai........ " Kya baat kahi hai.

hai
arvindsinghrot said:
Jab Har roz likhta hoon tera naam,kaagze dil par !
To kayoon karta hoon koosish tujhe bhoolane ke liye !!
Ki Tere yaadoon ka silsila yaad aaye koi zaroori to nahi !
Ki Ek bahana hi kaafi hai aansoon bahane ke liye !!
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Chand panktiyan!

Kuchh panktiyan aur pesh hain.

kaise doston se yun ghamon ke saaye milte hain
yaadon ke unki har waqt dil me deeye jalte hain
zindagi kuchh yun basar ho rahi bekasi me “sahil”
unse mulaqat hogi kabhi bas ye khwab palte hain.


aaj bekhudi me unse baat kar baithe
khwabon me unse mulaqat kar baithe
kab tak yun rahenge door door hum
unse aise hi chand sawalaat kar baithe.
 
jakhar77 said:
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aaj bekhudi me unse baat kar baithe
khwabon me unse mulaqat kar baithe
kab tak yun rahenge door door hum
unse aise hi chand sawalaat kar baithe.[/FONT][/SIZE][/COLOR]
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Wo aapke sawalon ka jabab ne den,
Huzoor! aisa kabhi ho hi nahi sakta
isq ki shama iss qadar jal rahee ho
parwana bhi door rah nahi sakta
milte rahiyega unse khawabon me yunhi
khwabon me milne se koi mana nahi karta

RK^2
 
Umda Shayari !

rkumar said:
Wo aapke sawalon ka jabab ne den,
Huzoor! aisa kabhi ho hi nahi sakta
isq ki shama iss qadar jal rahee ho
parwana bhi door rah nahi sakta
milte rahiyega unse khawabon me yunhi
khwabon me milne se koi mana nahi karta

RK^2
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वाह जी वाह !

बेरुखी का आलम तो है ही ऐसा जनाब
कोई जवाब ना मिले तो क्या किया जाये ?
इश्क की शमा का रुख किया तो फिर -
परवाने की चिता का क्या किया जाये?
ख्वाबों में मिलने से ही है उसका फायदा
मिलन भी रहे और दुनिया में जिया भी जाये ।
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dndeswal said:
वाह जी वाह !

बेरुखी का आलम तो है ही ऐसा जनाब
कोई जवाब ना मिले तो क्या किया जाये ?
इश्क की शमा का रुख किया तो फिर -
परवाने की चिता का क्या किया जाये?
ख्वाबों में मिलने से ही है उसका फायदा
मिलन भी रहे और दुनिया में जिया भी जाये ।
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rkumar said:
Wo aapke sawalon ka jabab ne den,
Huzoor! aisa kabhi ho hi nahi sakta
isq ki shama iss qadar jal rahee ho
parwana bhi door rah nahi sakta
milte rahiyega unse khawabon me yunhi
khwabon me milne se koi mana nahi karta

RK^2
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Wah wah.. kya baat hai. aaj to bahar aa gai hai sooni tukbandi me.:)
 
aadat!

Bahar ke aalam me kuchh aur panktiyan mulahija farmaiye janab....

teri judai me zindagi ko adawat bana lia hamne
tere intezar ko hi bas aadat bana lia hamne
kab taqdeer par jor chala hai kisika yahan
saanson ke chalne ko shikayat bana lia hamne
kab khushi ki aarzu ki hai hamne jamane se
bas tere hi gamon ko inayat bana lia hamne
aur kya kahoon waqt-e-purkat me ab "sahil"
ashq bahane ko ek rawayat bana lia hamne.
 
kamal hai bhaiya!!

Jab dil se sabdo ka aagaz hota hai to yahi inzam hota hai!!

Kya khoob kaha hai aapne.

Par iska title Tukbandi ke bajay kuchh aur badiya hona chahiye bcz its not tukbandi.

Yeh to kamal hai Bhaiya.
 
jakhar77 said:
Bahar ke aalam me kuchh aur panktiyan mulahija farmaiye janab....

teri judai me zindagi ko adawat bana lia hamne
tere intezar ko hi bas aadat bana lia hamne
kab taqdeer par jor chala hai kisika yahan
saanson ke chalne ko shikayat bana lia hamne
kab khushi ki aarzu ki hai hamne jamane se
bas tere hi gamon ko inayat bana lia hamne
aur kya kahoon waqt-e-purkat me ab "sahil"
ashq bahane ko ek rawayat bana lia hamne.
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Teri judai ne, zindgi jeena sikha diya humko
upne aur gairon ka, farak dikha diya humko
zindgi itnee haseen kabhi nahi thee pehle
ne jaane saaki ne kab jaam pila diya humko

RK^2
 
Bade dino me rukh kiya hai janab ne
Dekhiye ab andaz e bayan kya hoga?
Aur upse chand sa mukhda hijab me
Dekhiye ab sham ka sama kya hoga?
kamsin shokh hanseen aaye jinab me
dekhiye ab manzil e karvan kya hoga?
khwab dekhte rehna achhi baat hai, lekin....
Dekhiye ab neend ka aashiyan kya hoga?

Cheers!

Shobhit Deshwal





rkumar said:
Teri judai ne, zindgi jeena sikha diya humko
upne aur gairon ka, farak dikha diya humko
zindgi itnee haseen kabhi nahi thee pehle
ne jaane saaki ne kab jaam pila diya humko

RK^2
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