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wah wah Dev sir. aapne to mere man ki baat likh di.
Sach me aisa hi mahsoos hota hai.
aapki kalam se koi bhi subject achhhoota nahi hai.
Thanks for posting.
 
ek aur pesh hai.....

Kaash ke hum tum pahle mile hote
na darmiyan dunia ke ye faasle hote
Zulfen tumhari aashiyana mera hoti
aangan me teri aankhon ke chand khile hote
tumhari jheel si aankhon me doob jata main
mulaqaton ke hamari kai silsilay hote
kabhi tum shikwe karti ruthkar humse
kabhi hamare bhi dil me gile hote
kaash aisa bhi kabhi hua hota
kabhi to sahil aur "sahil" mile hote.
 
jakhar2005 said:
ek aur pesh hai.....

Kaash ke hum tum pahle mile hote
na darmiyan dunia ke ye faasle hote
Zulfen tumhari aashiyana mera hoti
aangan me teri aankhon ke chand khile hote
tumhari jheel si aankhon me doob jata main
mulaqaton ke hamari kai silsilay hote
kabhi tum shikwe karti ruthkar humse
kabhi hamare bhi dil me gile hote
kaash aisa bhi kabhi hua hota
kabhi to sahil aur "sahil" mile hote.



Pehle milne ki baat kar ke kyun manggte ho jhooti mohallat
Jab se mille hein tab se konssa pyar karte ho
Baithhe ho anjaan dharti par,kamane bhar ko 2 paise
Humnei dekhe hein Sangdill tum se bahoot kamm aisse.

Agar karte ho muhobbat hamse to chale aao abhi hamare pass
Najrein bichhi rehti hein tumhari rahon mei, dil mei hei ek dard khas.
 
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Dard ho begana ya ke apna, bas dil ko jalata hai,
ye aur baat hai ki kuchh log ye tapan mahsoos nahi karte.
 
jakhar2005 said:
Dard ho begana ya ke apna, bas dil ko jalata hai,
ye aur baat hai ki kuchh log ye tapan mahsoos nahi karte.



Foe Dev sir and Jakhar Bhai,


Bade ajeeb hai ye dard ke rishte bhi
Ki jisko bhi dehkiye apna dikhai deta hai.
 
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Jakhar bhaisaab,
kya baat hai...aajkal arab ke sand-dunes par beth kar badi shayri kar rehe ho....btw ur shauris or gajals whatever badi heart touching hai, indeed!

keep on writin....



rock on
Jit
 
Bhai Jit kya bataun yahan kaam kam hai aur tanhai bahut jyada.
Bas yun hi time pass kar leta hoon.

kuchh romantic lines pesh hain........

Jab se tumhen dekha hai, raat ko khwabon me tum aati ho
kabhi sitaron me dikhti ho, kabhi chand ban jati ho.
dil dhadkata hai tumhe dekhkar, ek nasha-sa dil pe chhaya hai
jab bhi jaata hoon gulshan me, har phool me tum najar aati ho.
tum ho behad hansi, shokhiyan tumhari har phool se badhkar
jab bhi dekhta hoon tasveer tumhari, deewana mujhe kar jati ho.
 
jakhar77 said:
Bhai Jit kya bataun yahan kaam kam hai aur tanhai bahut jyada.
Bas yun hi time pass kar leta hoon.

kuchh romantic lines pesh hain........

Jab se tumhen dekha hai, raat ko khwabon me tum aati ho
kabhi sitaron me dikhti ho, kabhi chand ban jati ho.
dil dhadkata hai tumhe dekhkar, ek nasha-sa dil pe chhaya hai
jab bhi jaata hoon gulshan me, har phool me tum najar aati ho.
tum ho behad hansi, shokhiyan tumhari har phool se badhkar
jab bhi dekhta hoon tasveer tumhari, deewana mujhe kar jati ho.




Inko banaya khuda nei kuchh aissa ke dil kabbu mei nahi rehta
Aggar gehrai se mehsoos nahin kiya hota to mei ye baat kabhi nahi kehta
Unki har adda bhi nirali hei aur hei nirala unka baankpan
Unke barre mei sochne bhar se behosh hotta huun.
 
Bahut achchhe Dev sir. kya bbat hai....

kuchh na poochh uski chahat ka kya asar hua hai,
behoshi me bhi bas uska hi naam juban pe rahta hai.
kai baar yun bhi hua hai bekhudi ki haalat me 'sahil',
apne saaye se poochhta hoon kya yahan koi rahta hai.
 
jakhar77 said:
Bahut achchhe Dev sir. kya bbat hai....

kuchh na poochh uski chahat ka kya asar hua hai,
behoshi me bhi bas uska hi naam juban pe rahta hai.
kai baar yun bhi hua hai bekhudi ki haalat me 'sahil',
apne saaye se poochhta hoon kya yahan koi rahta hai.



Manna ke pyar mei aksar bhatak jate hein log
Par pya ke bina jindaggi ke koi mayne bhi nahin.
 
jakhar77 said:
Dear Jatlanders,
Sometimes when I feel alone here in Saudi Arabia I try to write something in form of Poem, Nazm,Ghazal or anything you can say.
I am starting this thread to post your own poems and shayari.Please share your experience while staying alone away from your loved ones.
Please please post your own words here only.

for opening I am posting one of mine.
Please give your comments.
Arz kiya hai.....

Kaghaj pe aksar tumhari yaadon ke fasane likhta hoon
teri mohabbat se bhare khushion ke jamane likhta hoon
tumhari pyar bhari baaten wo kasme mohabbat ki
dil me bhare tumhari yaadon ke khajane likhta hoon
kabhi berukhi tumhari kabhi tumhari hansi ke saath
gam se bhare dil ke ye tarane likhta hoon
har waqt teri yaad me dooba rahta hoon sanam
phir bhi teri yaad ke 'sahil' so bahane likhta hoon.


Regards.
bhut achhe bhai shab.aapki tuk bandi padkar mujhe yakin ho gaya hai ki JAKHAR bhi achha likh sakte hain,well done and keep it up
 
Ha..ha..ha..ha...
Ravi bhai aapne to lath-sa gad ekdum.:D

ab to ghalib ek sher likhna padega..;)

Wo aaye hamre thread me ye unki inayat hai
kabhi hum apne sher ko kabhi unko dekhte hain.:D :D ;)
 
devdahiya said:
Manna ke pyar mei aksar bhatak jate hein log
Par pya ke bina jindaggi ke koi mayne bhi nahin.

pyar me bhatkate nahi pyar khud hi ek bhatkav hai dosto
jo iske dhokhe me aa gaya use bhatkane ka hosh kahan.
 
chand dost jo mile kismat se, aaj wo bhi jaane ki baat karte hain
unhen kya malum unke bina ek ek din saalon ki tarah gujarte hain.
rah jati hain unki yaaden bas, wo phir mudke nahi dekha karte
dil ke daag jo wo de jate hain, phir ansoo ki shaql me barsate hain.
dosti har kisi se nahi hoti na hi ye ek ittefaq hai mere dost
bahut kam is duniya me 'sahil' sachche dost kisi ko milte hain.
 
Dost agar sachhe ho to kya kahane
Sachhe doston se hi ye zindagi bahar hai
Kya duniyan mein abhi sacche dost milte hain
Mere khayal se ye umeed karna bekaar hai
 
vijay said:
Dost agar sachhe ho to kya kahane
Sachhe doston se hi ye zindagi bahar hai
Kya duniyan mein abhi sacche dost milte hain
Mere khayal se ye umeed karna bekaar hai




Sachchai marri nahi hei ab bhi gunjaish
Sachche dost mil sakte hein gar karo dil se fariyaad
Duniya khatam ho jayegi,jab ho milne bandh sachche insaan
Badde-sayane keh gaye ...tu dost ko le pehchan
 
devdahiya said:
Sachchai marri nahi hei ab bhi gunjaish
Sachche dost mil sakte hein gar karo dil se fariyaad
Duniya khatam ho jayegi,jab ho milne bandh sachche insaan
Badde-sayane keh gaye ...tu dost ko le pehchan



Mana ke sachhe dost milte honge aaj bhi
Insaaniyat ki izzat yahan aaj bhi karte hain
Magar ye kambakht waqt bari buri shey hai
Jab sab apne paraye swarth per marte hain
 
देसवाल साब की सहायता से हिंदी मे लिखने का प्रयास कर रहा हूँ ।
आशा है आप पसंद करेंगे ।

तुम्हारी जुदाई में बहते अश्कों को छुपाने की जगह ढूंढते हैं
हर तरफ तेरी यादों का मेला हो, ऐसा जहाँ ढूंढते हैं,
मैने तो मोहब्बत की शक्ल मे इबादत की है तुम्हारी
इल्तजा-ऐ-गम-ऐ-मोहब्बत सुने जो ऐसा खुदा ढूंढते हैं,
किसी शाय़र ने कहा है मोहब्बत के बदले गम ही मिलते हैं
हम तो किसी को प्यार देकर थोङी-सी वफा ढूंढते हैं,
दिल नही लगता तेरे बिना वक्त मेरा गुजरता नही
जज्बात-ऐ-मोहब्बत के जुनूं मे ‘साहिल’ हर वक्त तेरा पता ढूंढते हैं ।
 
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