Mushairaa (All Shayars Invited)

akdabas · Jun 25, 2003

Ha..Ha..Ha.....

Aap ne to kamal kar diya Dudee Ji & Gaawar Bhai

YagyaVir Singh Gaawar (Jun 23, 2003 02:20 p.m.):

Dharmpal Singh Dudee (Jun 23, 2003 12:55 p.m.):
Yagyavir bhai- hama ko Bahut bahut
Achha lagata hae-Aap ka shayrana andaj

#Dudee ji Bhatijey ko Bhai tou na boliye.
Mai hoon 30 ka aur app 60+ ke ho liye.

Parntu yah jiskay liye likha gaya hae
KASAM RAM KI VAH BAHUT2 ROYAGI AAJ

# Royegi tou uski jisney likha hai"
maine tou kisi aur ka cut/paste kiya hai"

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uday · Jun 25, 2003

bahut umda...

YagyaVir Singh Gaawar (Jun 23, 2003 09:48 a.m.):
Kisi Aur Ka:

tere ashkon se bheege khat mai jalaata kaise
teri yaado se bhare khat mai jalaata kaise
tere khat ajj mai GANGA mai baha aaya hoon
AGG bahte hue paani mai laga aaya hoon

yvsgaawar · Jun 25, 2003

Thanks Uday and Ashok bhai.
Infect mine is third class TUKBANDI, compare to Dudee ji, Rajender ji and Uday bhai. Dudee ji has natural talent. I have gone through Dudee ji's "POET CORNER -A MEMORIAL IN HONOUR OF ALL INDIAN MARTYRS &SHAHEEDS ON MARTYRDOM DAY AND ALWAYS FOR EVER"(Current Affairs Section) and they are wonderful.

rkumar · Jun 29, 2003

Uday Dahiya (Jun 19, 2003 05:04 a.m.):
Bhai Rajendra,
Dil Jale nahi hai kati bhee. Dil to pura Garden garden hai kabhi kabhi likhney ka shok hai..

Bhai mushairaa to bula liya... er do - teen din se khood gayab hai....Mushairaa ayojen ka kharcha panni koun dega eeeb

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Uday Bhai kyaa kroon kaam bhi karna padta hai beech beech mai. Japan gaya thaa. Aaj hi lauta hoon. Musaira has to continune come what may....Yah kisi ne kisi ka aana jana to laga rahega...

Rajendra

uday · Jul 1, 2003

Aapni Nazroon ki chahat ka ek deedar de do;
A khuda mujhe Baksh! Tum mujhe azaad kar do !!

amar0974 · Jul 1, 2003

Other's:-

Jindgi na bulaya to Chale Aaye,
Maut Aayegey to Chale Jaayengey,
Magar Zindgi Kuch iss Tarha Se Jee Jaayengey,
Key Markar Bhey Duniya Waalon Ko Yaad Aayengey.

rkumar · Jul 1, 2003

1. Kis kaam ka wo dil, jo ne ho saka kisi ka
Kab chal basen, kia bharosa Zindgi ka

2. jale kabab ki boo aati hai, jab gujarte hain wo kareeb se
Lagta hai hai sareek hone lage hain wo bhi, dil jalon ki mahfil mai.

3. lita dena hume kabr me, sahare karwat ke
kamjor hai dil ub, kisi aur wajan ke liye

4. kahte hain sharab faidemand hai, dil ki shehat ke liye
Nikal jaate hain dil se sab mal, mai peene ke baad

Rajendra

yvsgaawar · Jul 1, 2003

Badhiya Amardeep bhai,
Ek Kabir ka Doha yaad aa gaya:
"KABIRA JAB HUM PAIDA HUE, JAG HANSE HUM ROYE"
AISI KARNI KAR CHALO, HUM HANSE JAG ROYE"

Amardeep Bazaad (Jul 01, 2003 03:14 a.m.):
Other's:-

Jindgi na bulaya to Chale Aaye,
Maut Aayegey to Chale Jaayengey,
Magar Zindgi Kuch iss Tarha Se Jee Jaayengey,
Key Markar Bhey Duniya Waalon Ko Yaad Aayengey.

yvsgaawar · Jul 1, 2003

1. Kis kaam ka wo dil, jo ne ho saka kisi ka
Kab chal basen, kia bharosa Zindgi ka

Wah Wah Rajender Ji..

rinu · Jul 1, 2003

VeRy NiCe......

RiNu

Amardeep Bazaad (Jul 01, 2003 03:14 a.m.):
Other's:-

Jindgi na bulaya to Chale Aaye,
Maut Aayegey to Chale Jaayengey,
Magar Zindgi Kuch iss Tarha Se Jee Jaayengey,
Key Markar Bhey Duniya Waalon Ko Yaad Aayengey.

akdabas · Jul 1, 2003

Bhai Wah ! Wah !

Kya sama bandh rakha hei aap logon nei !

Mazza aa gaya !

rkumar · Jul 1, 2003

Ek Gazal:

AA jana dekh kar, jalta huaa diya tu meri majar par..

tujhse milneki kee lakh nakaam koshisen
Chora fir jahan thaa, tera intzaar kar.....AA jana...

Jab nikla mera janaja, tere dur ke saamne se
Dekha udhar thaa humne, kafan utaar kar...AA jana....

Ho sake to aa jana, tu padhne faatiyaa
chale jana fir, phool do chaar daalkar...AA jana dekh kar......

Rajendra

amar0974 · Jul 2, 2003

Wah Rajendra Ji Wah!

Ershad Hai:

Kafan Na Dalo Mere Chehrey Pe,
Mujhey Aadat Hai Muskuraney Ke!
Abhey Na Dafnao Merey Maiyat,
Khabar Miley Hai Unkey Aaney Ke!

Yahi Dua Hai Khuda se,
Teri har Khushi ma Mera Haath Rahey!
Ye Jahan to Kaya
Us Jahan Mey Bhey Tumhara Saath Rahey!

Rajendra Kumar Kalkhunde (Jul 01, 2003 01:36 p.m.):
Ek Gazal:

AA jana dekh kar, jalta huaa diya tu meri majar par..

tujhse milneki kee lakh nakaam koshisen
Chora fir jahan thaa, tera intzaar kar.....AA jana...

Jab nikla mera janaja, tere dur ke saamne se
Dekha udhar thaa humne, kafan utaar kar...AA jana....

Ho sake to aa jana, tu padhne faatiyaa
chale jana fir, phool do chaar daalkar...AA jana dekh kar......

Rajendra

jaatni · Jul 3, 2003

wah ji wah...yahan to sab pahunche hue shayar hain...
hmm...
ek jagjit singh ki gai hui ghazal hai...
aah ko chahiye ik umar asar hone tak,kaun jeeta hai teri zulf ke sar hone tak...
can nebody plz lemme know the meaning of this particular sentence...
-
simran

yvsgaawar · Jul 3, 2003

Kisi Aur kaa:

Gazal kaho ke ye haal ab Gazal ke qaabil hai.
pakaa pakaa hai kalejaa dukhaa dukhaa dil hai.

rinu · Jul 7, 2003

ChOrI Ka:

Unki har baat dil lubhaati hai,
Har adaa , har khataa bhi bhati hai.

Dil mai.n mere khayaal aaye to,
Baat unki zubaa.n pe aati hai .

Paas baithe.n to aisa lagataa hai,
Jaise woh har janam ki saathi hai.n

Sab Mere haal par pareshaan hai.n
Ek woh hain ki muskuraati hai.n .

Geet meraa likhaa hi hai shaayad,
Woh jo haule se gun gunaati hai.n ,

Hai agar sakht woh usulo.n ki,
To meri neend kyo.n churaati hai.n .

Mere rabba mujhe bataa to zara,
Ishq karake bhi kyo.n chupaati hai.n .

RiNu

jaatni · Jul 7, 2003

hmm...
good one rinu ji...

Rinu Singh (Jul 07, 2003 11:13 a.m.):
ChOrI Ka:

Unki har baat dil lubhaati hai,
Har adaa , har khataa bhi bhati hai.

Dil mai.n mere khayaal aaye to,
Baat unki zubaa.n pe aati hai .

Paas baithe.n to aisa lagataa hai,
Jaise woh har janam ki saathi hai.n

Sab Mere haal par pareshaan hai.n
Ek woh hain ki muskuraati hai.n .

Geet meraa likhaa hi hai shaayad,
Woh jo haule se gun gunaati hai.n ,

Hai agar sakht woh usulo.n ki,
To meri neend kyo.n churaati hai.n .

Mere rabba mujhe bataa to zara,
Ishq karake bhi kyo.n chupaati hai.n .

RiNu

yvsgaawar · Jul 8, 2003

Kisi Aur ka:

Ye kah-kah ke hum dil kou bahla rahe hai.
Ye kah-kah ke hum dil kou bahla rahe hai......
Woh ab chal chuke hai, Woh ab aa rahe hai.

rkumar · Jul 8, 2003

1. Kyoon butt bane baithe ho, buttkhaane mai
Butt kabhi butt ke liye asq nahi bahate

2. Kya loge jaakar yoon roj ibadatkhaane
Kyyon sune khudaa tumhaari, jab tum hi kisi ki nahi sunte

3. Maja aane laga hai hume aajkal, sikast khaane mai
Achaa lagta hai unhe rahna hamara, iss haal mai.

4. Rone ko aaye hain aaj ji bhar ke teri mahfil mai
Kahin dil ne baith jaye tera, hume hansta dekh kar

5. Bhatak rahe hain hum, andheron ki talash mai
farak ne mahsoosh ho jahan, chehron ke beech.

Rajendra

rkumar · Jul 16, 2003

1. Kyoon jaa rahee ho chorkar hume, ess undheri raat mai
Padh lene do khat isq ke, upne chehre ki roshnee mai.

2. Socha thaa kante nikalwayenge unse upne per ke.
Magar wo muskura diye, hume upnee nazuk ungliyaan dikhakar

3. tum muskuraati ho to duniya mere kadmo tale hoti hai
Tum preshaan hoti ho to hum duniya tale hote hain.

4. Khaali kiye baithe hain kabse hum upne dimaag ko.
Kardo aabad isko tum, shaitaan bankar

5. Mulkon ko jeet kar jab hum ghar laute
loot liya sab kuch hamara unkee ek nazar ne

6. meri kasmat bhi hai kitnee be-aabroo
laakh usko dutkara humne, magar wo nahi bhaagi door humse.

7. Tum saut ho mere dil ki dhadkanon ki
Jab tum aati ho to wo chali jaati hain

8. mera dil masjid hai, aur tera dil maikhana
Tum khuda ke kareeb raho, aur hum shaarb ke.

Rajendra

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