Mushairaa (All Shayars Invited)

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One More, kisis aur ka:

Usne jab meri taraf Pyar se Dekha hoga.
Mere baare mai, bade gaur se socha hoga.
 
Rajendra ji,

Wah wah wah wah wah wah wah wah......

Rajendra Kumar Kalkhunde (Jul 08, 2003 09:49 a.m.):
1. Kyoon butt bane baithe ho, buttkhaane mai
Butt kabhi butt ke liye asq nahi bahate

2. Kya loge jaakar yoon roj ibadatkhaane
Kyyon sune khudaa tumhaari, jab tum hi kisi ki nahi sunte

3. Maja aane laga hai hume aajkal, sikast khaane mai
Achaa lagta hai unhe rahna hamara, iss haal mai.

4. Rone ko aaye hain aaj ji bhar ke teri mahfil mai
Kahin dil ne baith jaye tera, hume hansta dekh kar

5. Bhatak rahe hain hum, andheron ki talash mai
farak ne mahsoosh ho jahan, chehron ke beech.

Rajendra
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Gaawar bhai,

wah wah wah.................Bahut badhiya sub chalta hai bassssssss layae jaao. :)

YagyaVir Singh Gaawar (Jul 16, 2003 01:46 p.m.):
One More, kisis aur ka:

Usne jab meri taraf Pyar se Dekha hoga.
Mere baare mai, bade gaur se socha hoga.
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Nawjawan Aaj Kal Kam he Dikhtey Hain,
Ab to Langoti se Jayada Kafan Biktey Hain.

Dil Ke Chaale Jal Uthey Seenay Ke Daag Se,
Or Ghar ko Aag Lag Gaye Ghar ke Charaag Se.
 
Here is one of my favorite Song/Poem:


swapna jhare phool se
meet chubhe shool se
loot gaye singar sabhi,baag ke babool se.
aur hum khaxde-khade bahar dekhate rahe.
karvan gujar gaya gubaar dekhate rahe.


nend bhi khuli na thi ki haaye dhoop dhal gayee,
pav jab talak uthe thi jindagi fisal gayee,
paat paat jhar gaye ki sakh-sakh jal gayee,
chaah tou nikal saki na, par umar nikal gayee,
geet ask ban gaye,
chand ho dafan gaye,
sath ke sabhi deeye dhua dhua pahan gaye,
aur hum jhuke-jhuke ,
mod par ruke ruke,
umer ke chadav ka utar dekhate rahe,
karvan gujar gaya gubar dekhate rahe;


kya sabab tha ki phool-phool pyar kar uthaa,
kya sarup thaa ki dekh aina sihar utha,
iss taraf jameen aur aasman udhar utha,
thaam kar jigar utha ki jou mila najar uthaa,
ek din magar yaha,
aisi kuch hawa chali,
lut gayee kali kali ke ghut gaye gali gali,
aur hum lute lute,
wakt se pite-pite,
sans ki sarab ka khumar dekhate rahe,
karvan gujar gaya gubar dekhate rahe;

hath the mile ki julf chand ki sanwar doon,
hot the khule ke har bahaar kou pukar doon,
dard thaa diya gaya ki har dukhi kou pyar doon,
aur saans yoon ki swarg bhoomi par utaar doon,
ho saka naa kuch magar,
saanjh ban gaye sahar,
wah uthi lahat ke dah gaye kile bikhar-bikhar,
aur hum dare-dare,
neer nain mai bhare,
odah kar kafan pade, majaar dekhate rahe,
karvan gujar gaya gubar dekhate rahe;


maang bhar chali ke ek jab nayee - nayee kiran,
dholake dhumuk uthi, thumuk uthe charan-charan,
shor mach gaya ke lo chali dulhan chali dulhan,
gam sab umad pada, bahak uthe nayan nayan,
par tabhi jahar bhari,
gaaj ek wah giri,
punch gaya sindoor taar taar hue choonari,
aur hum ajaan se,
door ke makaan se,
paalki liye hue, kahaar dekhate rahe.
karvan gujar gaya gubaar dekhate rahe.



http://www.anubhuti-hindi.org/gauravgram/neeraj/karva.htm
 
1. AAsmaan me chiraag jalte hain raat bhar
Kahin chaand kho ne jaye, bhatkar aasmaan me

2. mere makan ki neev jo maine khodnee ki shuroo
Yakayak kisi ke chillane ki aawaj aayee
Maine dekha charon taraf ghoom kar
Magar koi bhi nazar nahi aayaa
kisi ne fir mera paon pakdaa
aur kaha ki neeche bhi dekh lo
Zameen ke oopar to nahi rahne diya
Kam se kam zameen ke neeche to so lene do


Rajendra
 
Rajendra Kumar Kalkhunde (Jul 20, 2003 12:09 p.m.):

kisi ne fir mera paon pakdaa
aur kaha ki neeche bhi dekh lo
Zameen ke oopar to nahi rahne diya
Kam se kam zameen ke neeche to so lene do

Rajendra
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Superb!
 
Wah Rajender Je, Excellent

2. mere makan ki neev jo maine khodnee ki shuroo
Yakayak kisi ke chillane ki aawaj aayee
Maine dekha charon taraf ghoom kar
Magar koi bhi nazar nahi aayaa
kisi ne fir mera paon pakdaa
aur kaha ki neeche bhi dekh lo
Zameen ke oopar to nahi rahne diya
Kam se kam zameen ke neeche to so lene do
 
SELF:-
(Kya mere Nagmey.. Kya meri hasti # 4 )

Manziloon ke daur main ek Zajba chaltey chaltey kahin kuch yun thehra ;
Har Chot pukar kar kahe, main hoon jeeti per tu kyon hara!
Shakh per udas baithi insaniyaat mili, Zurrat ne jabse khola apna chehra;
KHAYALI nihare kabse khidki, kash FIR se suru ho vo SAVERA !!


KHAYALI--> Each Indian who wants to see INDIA as a Super Power...
 
KHAYALI nihare kabse khidki, kash FIR se suru ho vo SAVERA !!


bahut accha, Uday Bhai.
 
really a nice one...:-)


Uday Dahiya (Jul 28, 2003 09:48 a.m.):
SELF:-
(Kya mere Nagmey.. Kya meri hasti # 4 )

Manziloon ke daur main ek Zajba chaltey chaltey kahin kuch yun thehra ;
Har Chot pukar kar kahe, main hoon jeeti per tu kyon hara!
Shakh per udas baithi insaniyaat mili, Zurrat ne jabse khola apna chehra;
KHAYALI nihare kabse khidki, kash FIR se suru ho vo SAVERA !!


KHAYALI--> Each Indian who wants to see INDIA as a Super Power...
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AtI UtTaM....






RiNu


Uday Dahiya (Jul 28, 2003 09:48 a.m.):
SELF:-
(Kya mere Nagmey.. Kya meri hasti # 4 )

Manziloon ke daur main ek Zajba chaltey chaltey kahin kuch yun thehra ;
Har Chot pukar kar kahe, main hoon jeeti per tu kyon hara!
Shakh per udas baithi insaniyaat mili, Zurrat ne jabse khola apna chehra;
KHAYALI nihare kabse khidki, kash FIR se suru ho vo SAVERA !!


KHAYALI--> Each Indian who wants to see INDIA as a Super Power...
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Arz Kiya Hai!!

Aey Chand Teri Khoobsoorti Main Kya Rakha Hai
Ek Daag Jo Tune Apne Seene Main Chhupa Rakha Hai
Aise Kai Daag Mere Seene Main Bhi Hain
Maine Har Daag Main Ek Chaand Chhupa Rakha Hai
 
WoW... BeAuTiFuL.......




RiNu


Sunil Chaudhary (Aug 06, 2003 12:02 p.m.):
Arz Kiya Hai!!

Aey Chand Teri Khoobsoorti Main Kya Rakha Hai
Ek Daag Jo Tune Apne Seene Main Chhupa Rakha Hai
Aise Kai Daag Mere Seene Main Bhi Hain
Maine Har Daag Main Ek Chaand Chhupa Rakha Hai
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Nice One..

Sunil Chaudhary (Aug 06, 2003 12:02 p.m.):
Arz Kiya Hai!!

Aey Chand Teri Khoobsoorti Main Kya Rakha Hai
Ek Daag Jo Tune Apne Seene Main Chhupa Rakha Hai
Aise Kai Daag Mere Seene Main Bhi Hain
Maine Har Daag Main Ek Chaand Chhupa Rakha Hai
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