Mushairaa (All Shayars Invited)

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Dear All,
Please mention original ya kisi or ki...



Rajendra Kumar Kalkhunde (Jun 15, 2003 04:51 a.m.):

...Please mention jaroor kar dena jo aapke upne original hon aur jo kisi aur ke hon.

Rajendra
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kisi or ka i.e. Copied one....

Reshmee Salwar Kudta kharad ka,
Roop sha nahi jaye is bawlitred ka !!

:-) :-) :-) :-)
 
Kya Meri Nagmey: Kya meri Hasti

Self Written ( Below small creativity comes out while attending an 4 hr long... boring.... official meeting )

Chupke se aakar, gar tu 'mujhe' mil jaye;
Chakoor ko yun jaise chaand mil jaye!
Rasmain wfa ki gur tu puri nibha jaye;
Baki na koi kashish zindgi mai reh jaye!!

Stay Tuned !!
 
Dahiya O.P. (Jun 16, 2003 12:50 a.m.):
MOHAABTOON MEIN HABAAB JAISA|
WO EK CHEHRA GULAAB JAISA|

ABHI TO GUJRA HAI SAAMNE SE|
ABHI TO DEKHA HAI KHWAAB JAISA|

HUM APNI DUNIYA NISAAR KAR DEIN|
MILE TO KOI ZANAAB JAISA|
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aapke mushaire ko padhke ek sher humein bhi yaad aa gaya "ab yeh kiska yeh nahi pata".
" bahut kam nikle mere armaan,phir bhi khub nikle,
ek ek armaan aisa ki jis pe dum nikle."


















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trying my hand see how it goes.
Pyaar hamnee bhi kiya Pyaar tumne bhi kiya
Pyaar hamnee bhi kiya Pyaar tumne bhi kiya
Khambakht zamnee ne hamee milnee na diya
Kya saachi muuchi woh pyaar tha ya woh khyal tha
Pyaar tha to waqt ne use bhoola diya aur
Khyal tha to suhana tha ku ki khyal to sari umaar atta hi raha
well my friends i tried hope it jives .
 
BALJIT BHAI bah 22222222222 khub lika han
2 line ready made for u
PAYAR to karaty ho
Batana bhul jatay ho
PAYAR ka vayada to karty ho
Nibhana bhul jatay ho !!!!
 
Anil Bhai,
Ye hai Mirza Galib ka sher, Aur kuch aisa hai:

Hajaron khwahisse aisi ki har khwahish par dam nikle,
Bahut nikle mere armaan lekin phirbhi kam nikle.


ANIL MALIK (Sep 20, 2003 03:23 a.m.):
Dahiya O.P. (Jun 16, 2003 12:50 a.m.):
MOHAABTOON MEIN HABAAB JAISA|
WO EK CHEHRA GULAAB JAISA|

ABHI TO GUJRA HAI SAAMNE SE|
ABHI TO DEKHA HAI KHWAAB JAISA|

HUM APNI DUNIYA NISAAR KAR DEIN|
MILE TO KOI ZANAAB JAISA|
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aapke mushaire ko padhke ek sher humein bhi yaad aa gaya "ab yeh kiska yeh nahi pata".
" bahut kam nikle mere armaan,phir bhi khub nikle,
ek ek armaan aisa ki jis pe dum nikle."


















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Kya Meri Nagmey: Kya meri Hasti

Bahut Badhiya Uday bhai.

Uday Dahiya (Sep 12, 2003 10:27 a.m.):
Self Written ( Below small creativity comes out while attending an 4 hr long... boring.... official meeting )

Chupke se aakar, gar tu 'mujhe' mil jaye;
Chakoor ko yun jaise chaand mil jaye!
Rasmain wfa ki gur tu puri nibha jaye;
Baki na koi kashish zindgi mai reh jaye!!

Stay Tuned !!
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Kya saachi muuchi woh pyaar tha ya woh khyal tha
Pyaar tha to waqt ne use bhoola diya aur
Khyal tha to suhana tha ku ki khyal to sari umaar atta hi raha


Bahut badhiya .......
 
Apni Kaum ke liye:

Gazab ae Malik
Gazab to yeh hai
Makaan wale
Makaan kay bheetar
Bhatak rahein hain


Watan kay dushmanon kay liye:

Jab kaafir kay sabr ka baandh tootay ga
uskay dushman uskay aagay bhaagay ge
Uskay lohay par ek nayee aur chamaktee
huee dhaar unsay teekhay aur katt tae huay sawaal karay gi
unkay bachhon ki badduaon say kaafir ki aankh say khoon kay ansoon bahay ge

Angoor ki beti ko maarnay walon kay liye:

Nashaa sharaab mein nahi man may hota hai
Bootal ko kyune nahin hota jo sharaabi ko hota hai
Botalon ko mat todo us rastay par jidhar say khud ko bhi guzarna pad sakta hai

Sharabi se rishta mat todo duniya ko badalnay walon
kal aayeenay ko jodnaa bhi pad sakta hai.

Adaab arz hai....
 
Haseenon ki nazar me bada asar hai yaaro
unkee ek nazar se, mera sanam toot gaya
umar bhar saath nibhane ka jinse kiya thaa waida
dekhte dekhte haathon se unka daman choot gaya

Rajendra
 
rkumar said:
Haseenon ki nazar me bada asar hai yaaro
unkee ek nazar se, mera sanam toot gaya
umar bhar saath nibhane ka jinse kiya thaa waida
dekhte dekhte haathon se unka daman choot gaya

Rajendra
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Dear Rajendra Ji,

Apni Jat Biradari Dhanya ho Gayi Aap Jaisa Shayar Pakar.
Mein Bhi arz karta hoo (not an original)

Mariz-e-ishq ka kya hai jiya, jiya na jiya
Hai ek sans ka jhagda liya, liya na liya........
 
sumnendu said:
Mariz-e-ishq ka kya hai jiya, jiya na jiya
Hai ek sans ka jhagda liya, liya na liya........
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wah janab..bahut khoob...Marz-e-Isq or Mariz-e Isq ka kiya kahna...Kismat walon ko hota hai yeh marz...hahhahaa here is one on the same from my side;

Mat lagao hume tum, upnee harkaton ke nashtar
karha lene do kuch aur, hume marz-e isq mai

Rajendra
 
Wah.. Wah.. Rajendraji kya baat hai ! Aap to achhe khase shayar hain. Kabhi hum bhi chaar laina kah liya karte, par phir ghar walon ne shaadi kar di, shayari bechari dar ke bhag gayi. Yahin baithe-2 arj kiya hai :

Pukara to tha tumne, magar hum ruk nahi paye
Ki badnaseebi ke chheente, tere daman pe na aaye.
Par, tu ye na samajhna ki ham phir mil na payenge
Abhee chhe janam baki hain, hum phir aa jayene.
 
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wah wah wah wah.....aap to chha gaye Sehrawat ji..bahut khoob.. achha likha hai :)
wiase ye wala kaun se no. ka janam hai.. :)
ramksehrawat said:
Wah.. Wah.. Rajendraji kya baat hai ! Aap to achhe khase shayar hain. Kabhi hum bhi chaar laina kah liya karte, par phir ghar walon ne shaadi kar di, shayari bechari dar ke bhag gayi. Yahin baithe-2 arj kiya hai :

Pukara to tha tumne, magar hum ruk nahi paye
Ki badnaseebi ke chheente, tere daman pe na aaye.
Par, tu ye na samajhna ki ham phir mil na payenge
Abhee chhe janam baki hain, hum phir aa jayene.
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Dr. Sahiba, Honsla afjai ke liye shukriya. Jaise ladkiyon ki umar solah se oopar nahin jaati, ussi tarah hamara bhi har janam pehla hi hota hai. Thanks once again.
 
Humne Zindgi me marke dekha hai
doston ko bhi muh ferte dekha hai
jo jalate the mere ghar me roz chirag
unko chiragon ka tel churate dekha hai

RK^2
 
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