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Aaj mere pass kisi ka aakhri paigaam aaya
Jisne mujhe apni jaan se bhi badkar chaha,

Par meri badkismati dekho, ki mai
Ushe kabhi chah kar bhi apna na bana paya,

Intzaar bahut kiya usne mujhe paane ka
Par kismat ne mauka hi nahi diya kabhi mujhe apna pyar jaitane ka,

Aaj woh jaa rahi hai toh yeh aankh bhi num hai
Par dil mein daba pyar kya kisi ki chahat se kum hai,

Haal mat poocho abh tum is deewane ka
Kaam nahi rah gaya hai abh uski galiyon mein is Parwane ka......
 
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Kya baat hai yash ji,, kaun chood ke chali gayi....Bade senti ho rahe ho!!!

Its nice.

yashbeniwal said:
Aaj mere pass kisi ka aakhri paigaam aaya
Jisne mujhe apni jaan se bhi badkar chaha,

Par meri badkismati dekho, ki mai
Ushe kabhi chah kar bhi apna na bana paya,

Intzaar bahut kiya usne mujhe paane ka
Par kismat ne mauka hi nahi diya kabhi mujhe apna pyar jaitane ka,

Aaj woh jaa rahi hai toh yeh aankh bhi num hai
Par dil mein daba pyar kya kisi ki chahat se kum hai,

Haal mat poocho abh tum is deewane ka
Kaam nahi rah gaya hai abh uski galiyon mein is deewane ka......
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Thanks Seema,,,

ere aisa kuch nahi hai,,, yeh bas ek imaginary poem hai,,, khaali baitha tha likh li thi Ramganga(Nanital) mein,,, when I was there on adventure trip with my office,,, just on last friday,,,

skadian said:
Kya baat hai yash ji,, kaun chood ke chali gayi....Bade senti ho rahe ho!!!

Its nice.
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yashbeniwal said:
Thanks Seema,,,

ere aisa kuch nahi hai,,, yeh bas ek imaginary poem hai,,, khaali baitha tha likh li thi Ramganga(Nanital) mein,,, when I was there on adventure trip with my office,,, just on last friday,,,
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Bhai Yash ... ek ek baat soch ke dekhi ... jama challa hogya iss chore gelyan to ... eee mere yaar nue bhi ke tha ... man ki baat kahe deni thi ... porri hoti na hoti ... bahut pain hai aapki kalam mein ... likhte raho ... aap bhi jama andy ho ... adventure pe jake ...dard bhari kavita likh di ... er je thoda dard ka mausam bana ke likhoge to NAASS tha dyoge ... karo kosshish si madi Beniwal saab ...
 
Wah Wah

Yesh Bhai
aapka likha hua bhot accha hai, Its nice to read and feel it.

But Plz Do not mind, aapne Gurgaon ko Gurgoan likha hua hai

Ho sake to splling theek kar lo.

Aapka Chota Bhai Gurgaon Se

Bhupendra Anjna
 
hahhahahah aur aapne to spelling ki hi spelling galat likh di.:p
bhupendra said:
Yesh Bhai
aapka likha hua bhot accha hai, Its nice to read and feel it.

But Plz Do not mind, aapne Gurgaon ko Gurgoan likha hua hai

Ho sake to splling theek kar lo.

Aapka Chota Bhai Gurgaon Se

Bhupendra Anjna
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dam good

quite a senti one and sound serious .............so office work was really bugging that you happen to write such a touch thought .
 
thanks All,

for ur inspiring words,,

No, not at all,,, my office is really very cool,,, work never bugs me it is something else.



mamtadg said:
quite a senti one and sound serious .............so office work was really bugging that you happen to write such a touch thought .
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Love is eternal

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प्यार ही तो असली दौलत है मेरे दोस्त, बाकी तो है जैसे बुलबुला -
घर से तो कोई निकाल भी सकता है पर दिल में है गर आशियाना ।
यार को दिल से कोई निकाल न पाये चाहे लगा दो हजारों जंजीरें -
तारीख तो याद रखेगी इसको, दुनियां चाहे दास्ताँ कहे या अफसाना ॥
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Chala toh jau usshe dur
Par uski yaadon se dur kaise jaun,
Bhula toh dun usko mai,
Par uske dil se apni tasveer kaise mitau,

Thak chuki hai abh uski aankhein bhi kisika intejar karke,
Chain se naa soo paayi hogi woh kabhi apni aankhen chaar karke,
Toot chuki hai abh uski aas bhi
Saath chodne ko hai abh aakri saans bhi,

Shayad rukshat hone k baad is jahan se woh chain paaye
Khuda kabhi kisi ki mohabat mein aisa mukaam naa laaye,
Kush hai zamana abh ek aur pyar ki chita jalakar,
Par kya mai zinda rah paungaa ushe bhulakar.........
 
Yahs bhai....bahut khoob

Aise hi to nahi like hai sarkaar...kuch to baat hai dil main...nahi to shabd to ham bhi bolte - likhte hain...par itna asar nahi hota.....aane do kuch or....


"Na socho ki kuch pana hi jindgi hai, Utar jaao samandar ki gaherai main!"
"Hoga to mil jaayega tumko, ki har kisi ki kismat main moti nahi hota......!!"
"Kuch to baat rahi hogi ki kabhi kuch to kaha hota!"
"Aise to bina baat ke koi bewafa nahi hot............!!":)
 
Thanks Arvind,

Ur composition is also very gd,,, keep writing dear,,,,

arvindsinghrot said:
Aise hi to nahi like hai sarkaar...kuch to baat hai dil main...nahi to shabd to ham bhi bolte - likhte hain...par itna asar nahi hota.....aane do kuch or....


"Na socho ki kuch pana hi jindgi hai, Utar jaao samandar ki gaherai main!"
"Hoga to mil jaayega tumko, ki har kisi ki kismat main moti nahi hota......!!"
"Kuch to baat rahi hogi ki kabhi kuch to kaha hota!"
"Aise to bina baat ke koi bewafa nahi hot............!!":)
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Kaya Yash bhai Hum kaya or hamare shabd kaya..Aapne pad le itna hi kaafi hai

Jo chaho baarish main bheegna to meri aankhon main bas jaaooo….!
Ki VO to barsoon main barasta hai or ye barsoon se barasti hain…..!!
 
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Mein tujhe yaad karte huye bhi darta hoon
aur apni kahani sunate huye bhi darta hoon

pehle to gham bujhane ko pi leta tha jaam
aajkal khud ko pilate huye bhi darta hoon

tu paas aye to kahin bhadhak na uthe gham mera
ab to tujhe paas bulate huye bhi darta hoon

ankhon ke kone se kahin tu na beh jaaye
aajkal khud ko rulate huye bhi darta hoon....
 
Mera Hi Naam Likh Bhejja

Mein Ne Us Ko Salam Likh Bhejja
Haal-e-Dil Tamaam Likh Bhejja

Mein Ne Poocha Tere Hont Kaisey Hain.
Us Ne Ik Lafz Jaam Likh Bhejja

Mein Ne Poocha Tere Baal Kaisey Hain.
Us Ne Qudrat Ka Inaam Likh Bhejja.

Mein Ne Poocha Kab Ho Gi Mulaqaat.
Us Ne QAYAMAT Ki SHAM Likh Bhejja.

Mein Ne Poocha Itna Tarpaati Kyon Ho.
Us Ne Jawani Ka Intiqaam Likh Bhejja

Mein Ne Poocha Tere Khad-o-Khaal Kaisey Hain.
Us Ne Husn Tamaam Likh Bhejja.

Mein Ne Poocha Tujhey nafrat Kiss Se Hai.
Us Ne MERA HI NAAM Likh Bhejja.
 
skadian said:
Kya baat hai yash ji,, kaun chood ke chali gayi....Bade senti ho rahe ho!!!

Its nice.
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Isske BHIRRADD ladd gi......jib gaddadd ki maut aawei jib shayari krya krei......yo phanssei ga.....just wait and watch........Tatahiya kha ge issnei.....Bawalla ho liya....temm aa gya isske naathh ghalan ka.
 
er mai tere HAU ladaungaa,,,:D:D kilkiiiiiiiiiiiiiii@ hau

devdahiya said:
Isske BHIRRADD ladd gi......jib gaddadd ki maut aawei jib shayari krya krei......yo phanssei ga.....just wait and watch........Tatahiya kha ge issnei.....Bawalla ho liya....temm aa gya isske naathh ghalan ka.
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