Shayad aaj raat ki shaadi hai..........

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Few original lines by me............:)

"Aaj sunehri shaam dhali hai abhi...........

Raat ne doobte suraj ko chua hai muskura ke..........

Sooraj ki thandi raakh se chand banaakar............

Usne sajaya hai maathe par apne...............

Aur uski jalti kirano ki surkh roshini ko............

Chitak kar taare bana saja liya hai ghaghre pe apne........

Shayad aaj raat ki shaadi hai..........."
 
shwetadhaka said:
Few original lines by me............:)

"Aaj sunehri shaam dhali hai abhi...........

Raat ne doobte suraj ko chua hai muskura ke..........

Sooraj ki thandi raakh se chand banaakar............

Usne sajaya hai maathe par apne...............

Aur uski jalti kirano ki surkh roshini ko............

Chitak kar taare bana saja liya hai ghaghre pe apne........

Shayad aaj raat ki shaadi hai..........."
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Bahut badhiya Shweta .... halke aur aache shabd prayog karke aacha likha hai ... :)
 
to Shweta ji kaviyatri bhi hain aap :p hidden talent pata chal rahe hain aapke :D
 
शायद आज रात की शादी........?

आपकी ज्यादातर बातें औरत को कैसे खुश रखना है या शादी ब्याह पे आकर अट्क जाती है...:confused:....आखिर चक्कर क्या है शवेता जी....:D:D...?
 
virendernarwal said:
आपकी ज्यादातर बातें औरत को कैसे खुश रखना है या शादी ब्याह पे आकर अट्क जाती है...:confused:....आखिर चक्कर क्या है शवेता जी....:D:D...?
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सीधी सी बात है जी - जैसे टी.वी. चैनल वालों को मसालेदार खबरों से मजा मिलता है, उसी तरह इस जाटलैंड पर कोई धागा चलाना हो तो कड़ाकेदार मसाला होना चाहिये । और इससे बढ़िया topic और क्या हो सकता है लोगों का ध्यान खींचने के लिए ? मैं भी श्वेता के धागों को चुस्की ले ले कर पढ़ता रहता हूं, बेशक सब में जवाब नहीं लिखता । Keep up Shweta !
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virendernarwal said:
आपकी ज्यादातर बातें औरत को कैसे खुश रखना है या शादी ब्याह पे आकर अट्क जाती है...:confused:....आखिर चक्कर क्या है शवेता जी....:D:D...?
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Hain:confused:................ aisa hai kya!

Well, being a female my topics revolve around the women subjects many a times ! :) Its just that! & ........... shaadi ...........hahaaa pachhta rahi hu kyonki ibbi ye laadoo chakkha na hai ji............... hahahaaaaa,

Anyways its just a coincidence may be! I had talked on many other subjects too!.............& this thread is not just about shaadi.......i guess..........its just a laymen shayari! I dont write 'shayaris' as such but some lines just came to my head & I pened them! I would be pleased Sir ji if u give me a topic to talk on............. hahaaaaaa please............
 
nahi sir ji..........

dndeswal said:
सीधी सी बात है जी - जैसे टी.वी. चैनल वालों को मसालेदार खबरों से मजा मिलता है, उसी तरह इस जाटलैंड पर कोई धागा चलाना हो तो कड़ाकेदार मसाला होना चाहिये । और इससे बढ़िया topic और क्या हो सकता है लोगों का ध्यान खींचने के लिए ? मैं भी श्वेता के धागों को चुस्की ले ले कर पढ़ता रहता हूं, बेशक सब में जवाब नहीं लिखता । Keep up Shweta !
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Maasaaledaar..............:) Is it called masala............? Okkkkkk.......... that means I atleast know how to put proper masala:p .......... par Sir ji dhyan khichne ke liye nahi likhti mai........... its just I write when I feel like writing, at times serious, at times funny too! I had written much on serious topics before, so I just wanted to try being a bit lighter in my words!Dhyan khinch ke kya manne ibbe president ke election ladne hain aade..............:p
 
shwetadhaka said:
Maasaaledaar..............:) Is it called masala............? Okkkkkk.......... that means I atleast know how to put proper masala:p .......... par Sir ji dhyan khichne ke liye nahi likhti mai........... its just I write when I feel like writing, at times serious, at times funny too! I had written much on serious topics before, so I just wanted to try being a bit lighter in my words!Dhyan khinch ke kya manne ibbe president ke election ladne hain aade..............:p
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:) hahaha - Shweta, please do not be serious, I am also passing time in Time Pass forum. Actually, it is not the content of a thread but the title of a thread which attracts readers. It is human psychology. For example, see the following threads which had attracted most readers, sheerly due to their attractive titles:

malika sehrawat....shud we fell feel proud or embarassed?

Your Say: To kiss or not to kiss

Bachao, Bachao...Sonali ko Bachao

How Jat girls think of Jat Boys?

do..intelligent women intimidate guys..?

...and many more. A long list can be made ! Nevertheless, keep on with your hard work.
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dndeswal said:
:) hahaha - Shweta, please do not be serious, I am also passing time in Time Pass forum. Actually, it is not the content of a thread but the title of a thread which attracts readers. It is human psychology. For example, see the following threads which had attracted most readers, sheerly due to their attractive titles:

malika sehrawat....shud we fell feel proud or embarassed?

Your Say: To kiss or not to kiss

Bachao, Bachao...Sonali ko Bachao

How Jat girls think of Jat Boys?

do..intelligent women intimidate guys..?

...and many more. A long list can be made ! Nevertheless, keep on with your hard work.
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Ohhh its fine Sir!:)

I agree completely ...........attractive masaala in threads do has its impact, it prompts us to peep in! :)But it cant prompt us to write too!
 
I do have a mind to mind but I dont like to mind coz it pays nothing to mind, moreover its not good for mind to mind............hahaaaaaaaaaaa vaise Sir ji........ye saare topics ke link to aapne "mindly" likhe dikhe hai........... ek baar fir sab inko dekhe.......... aur dekh bi rahe hai sab! hahaaaaaaa free publicity!:):rolleyes:
 
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shwetadhaka said:
Hain:confused:................ aisa hai kya!

:) Its just that! & ........... shaadi ...........hahaaa pachhta rahi hu kyonki ibbi ye laadoo chakkha na hai ji............... hahahaaaaa,
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ज्यादा दिन ना पच्छताणा पडै जी....:confused:....आप ते बस न्यूं फ़ैसला कर ल्यो...:)....के आप ने कौन से लाडू खाणे सैं....:p....कम मिठ्ठे के ज्यादा मिठ्ठे...;)...या मोतिचूर के ही खाओगी..:o..?
आप के मन के लाडू मन में ना फ़ुटण देवें जी.......समझ लयो लाग लिया आपका नम्बर.....:D:D...?
अब दिल्ली दूर न है जी...:p...?
 
virendernarwal said:
ज्यादा दिन ना पच्छताणा पडै जी....:confused:....आप ते बस न्यूं फ़ैसला कर ल्यो...:)....के आप ने कौन से लाडू खाणे सैं....:p....कम मिठ्ठे के ज्यादा मिठ्ठे...;)...या मोतिचूर के ही खाओगी..:o..?
आप के मन के लाडू मन में ना फ़ुटण देवें जी.......समझ लयो लाग लिया आपका नम्बर........?
अब दिल्ली दूर न है जी...:p...?
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Haaahahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa :p:Dkisi ko diabeties hove to aaj jatland ke dhore ko bi na nikle naahi to kal ka doctor ka mukh darshan pakka............. areeeeeeee itne laadoo hi laadooo hore sain............ ki aaj hi aaj me motaape ka khatara sa banta dikkhe hai manne to:confused: itne laadoo ar va bi dhar diye thok me chunan ko ak ki ya bi le sako ho ya bi........ aur wa bhi.............. aur to aur mera number bi laa diya:eek: dikke laage sain aaj ghara bi baat karni padegi manne............ unka bhojh tarta sa dikkhhe hai ........... hahhahaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
 
ghanni ghatiya shayri thii.hahahahaha
katti bhi ek dhele ki na thii ya poem si.kitt te chep di padh ke ne.......
issi kaviytri toh na dikhti shweta.lolz




shwetadhaka said:
I do have a mind to mind but I dont like to mind coz it pays nothing to mind, moreover its not good for mind to mind............hahaaaaaaaaaaa vaise Sir ji........ye saare topics ke link to aapne "mindly" likhe dikhe hai........... ek baar fir sab inko dekhe.......... aur dekh bi rahe hai sab! hahaaaaaaa free publicity!:):rolleyes:
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achaaaaa

malang said:
ghanni ghatiya shayri thii.hahahahaha
katti bhi ek dhele ki na thii ya poem si.kitt te chep di padh ke ne.......
issi kaviytri toh na dikhti shweta.lolz
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naa ji mai to issi hi kavyitri soon.......... haath tang sai mhaara kavita likhan me par fir bhi likha karu hu jib mann me aawe hai to nahi to thaare yo sohne comment kaha te sunne ko milteeeee:rolleyes: ............ chepi to na hai ji chepni jo hoti to ke yo hi chepti:confused: ......... hahaaaaaaaaa:p:D

thare pe ghani kavita analysis aawe hai.. yun laage sai manne....... :cool:ek aadh jatland waalo ne bhi suna do mhaara bhi janam sa tarr jaaga!;)
 
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Aaj sunehri shaam dhali hai abhi...........

Raat ne doobte suraj ko chua hai muskura ke..........

Sooraj ki thandi raakh se chand banaakar............

Usne sajaya hai maathe par apne...............

Aur uski jalti kirano ki surkh roshini ko............

Chitak kar taare bana saja liya hai ghaghre pe apne........

Shayad aaj raat ki shaadi hai..........."
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kya baat hai ,bahut badiya shweta :)
 
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