Wafa aur mohabbat

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choudharyneelam said:
it was just a fun dear but you also do good shayari...keep it continuing...but i know you can't beat mr. dev and vijay...they are superb!!
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Thanks again Neelam,

Itni tareef mat karo ki koi khuda ho jaye
Yahan koi insaan insaano se juda ho jaye
Tammana kaun kiski karta hai zindagi mein
Lekin na jaane kab kaun kis par fida ho jaye
 
vijay said:
Thanks again Neelam,

Itni tareef mat karo ki koi khuda ho jaye
Yahan koi insaan insaano se juda ho jaye
Tammana kaun kiski karta hai zindagi mein
Lekin na jaane kab kaun kis par fida ho jaye
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this is the truth...no exaggeration here...you know i really enjoy all these shayaris and gazals...i too wish if i could create some but couldn't do that..so enjoy reading all the good compositions shared here.
 
choudharyneelam said:
this is the truth...no exaggeration here...you know i really enjoy all these shayaris and gazals...i too wish if i could create some but couldn't do that..so enjoy reading all the good compositions shared here.
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Well,

Everybody has creativity more or less but some tries to recognize onself others never try. Nothing is immpossible here. You should have to make up your mind and half the job done and other half is the learning that's more easy than you think. Taste defines a person's nature and action leads to his/her destiny.

Destiny favours the brave.

Cheers !
 
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Ree bavli kyo jato mein ladai ke beej bo rahi sai ..dev or vijay bhai achi sayari kerte hai koi doubt nahi hai ....ibb comparison metna ker bas nuu hi sher padh orr tareef ker ........


choudharyneelam said:
this is the truth...no exaggeration here...you know i really enjoy all these shayaris and gazals...i too wish if i could create some but couldn't do that..so enjoy reading all the good compositions shared here.
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sandeepsomu said:
Ree bavli kyo jato mein ladai ke beej bo rahi sai ..dev or vijay bhai achi sayari kerte hai koi doubt nahi hai ....ibb comparison metna ker bas nuu hi sher padh orr tareef ker ........
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Sandeep Bhai,

Please don't use such language yaar. Nobody can distract us from our aim, but if someone is appreciating that's the real reward for a writer. Isme ladai kahan se aa gai yaar.

At least she is better than some people who tried to ruin this thread but its still rocking at Jatland.

You know man this is the longest thread at the jatland so far.

The appreciation from such persons like Neelam and some others is still motivating us to move ahead.

Calm down dear.
 
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Mohobbat ka matlab opposite Sex nahi
Pyar karne se lagta koi tax nahin
Pyar har insaan se karta chal ei dost
Bina dil ko chenn aaye hota koi relax nahin.
 
prashantacmet said:
yeh kis tarah e yaad aa rahe ho.......
aankhien band hi phir bhi nazar aa rahe ho...........
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Ye unki yaad bhi kaisi jalim hai
Jo chain se jeene bhi nahin deti
Din bhar woh chehra dikhta hai
Aur raat ko soone bhi nahin deti
 
vijay said:
Well,

Everybody has creativity more or less but some tries to recognize onself others never try. Nothing is immpossible here. You should have to make up your mind and half the job done and other half is the learning that's more easy than you think. Taste defines a person's nature and action leads to his/her destiny.

Destiny favours the brave.

Cheers !
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good thoughts...but still i can't create on my own, so decided i'll enjoy it by reading all the compositions here...just keep posting
 
sandeepsomu said:
Ree bavli kyo jato mein ladai ke beej bo rahi sai ..dev or vijay bhai achi sayari kerte hai koi doubt nahi hai ....ibb comparison metna ker bas nuu hi sher padh orr tareef ker ........
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:eek: i'm not that kind girl and can never think even in dreams, anyway just start writing whatever strikes your mind as i like to read such beautiful shayaris or shers
 
Dekh tarane pyar ke,dil khush ho jata hei
Ultta-sultta sab kuchh dil ko beshak bhatta hei
Prem ki shakti koi na janne,ye chhezz nirali jo
Panap jayega beshak chahe jebb bhi khali ho.
 
devdahiya said:
Dekh tarane pyar ke,dil khush ho jata hei
Ultta-sultta sab kuchh dil ko beshak bhatta hei
Prem ki shakti koi na janne,ye chhezz nirali jo
Panap jayega beshak chahe jebb bhi khali ho.
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Welcome back Dev Sir,


Ye pyar ke taraane gunjege in fizaaon mein
Mausam rangeen aur khushgawar ho jaayegaa
Kab tak koi bachega is mohabbat ke ehsaas se
Lakh koshish karen woh fir bhi pyar ho jaayegaa
 
vijay said:
Welcome back Dev Sir,


Ye pyar ke taraane gunjege in fizaaon mein
Mausam rangeen aur khushgawar ho jaayegaa
Kab tak koi bachega is mohabbat ke ehsaas se
Lakh koshish karen woh fir bhi pyar ho jaayegaa
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Pyar wo ehssass hei,jo rukhh modd de nadiyon ka
Ye aaj ki baat nahi hei,fassana hei sadiyon ka
Bachna chaho to bhi na bach paoge pyar ke majmuun se
kyunki pyar ka rista hei dil ke dukkdde aur kholltte khoon se.
 
devdahiya said:
Pyar wo ehssass hei,jo rukhh modd de nadiyon ka
Ye aaj ki baat nahi hei,fassana hei sadiyon ka
Bachna chaho to bhi na bach paoge pyar ke majmuun se
kyunki pyar ka rista hei dil ke dukkdde aur kholltte khoon se.
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Ye aag pyar ki dil mein jab jab jali hai
Zindagi tab maut ke saaye mein pali hai
Ek shola humne bhi jala liya hai dil mein ab
Hamari zindagi bhi ab maut se milne chali hai
 
vijay said:
Ye aag pyar ki dil mein jab jab jali hai
Zindagi tab maut ke saaye mein pali hai
Ek shola humne bhi jala liya hai dil mein ab
Hamari zindagi bhi ab maut se milne chali hai
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Seerat nahi hei jismei,wo surat fijjul hei
Jis gul mei khushbu nahin wo bass kagajj ka phool hei
 
devdahiya said:
Seerat nahi hei jismei,wo surat fijjul hei
Jis gul mei khushbu nahin wo bass kagajj ka phool hei
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Woh to bus ek murat hai hamaari zindagi mein ab
Kya dil mein hai kya seerat aur imaan woh jaane
Humne to apna dil nikaal kar rakh diya unke saamne
Zindagi denge ya zindagi lenge ye anjaam woh jaane
 
vijay said:
Woh to bus ek murat hai hamaari zindagi mein ab
Kya dil mein hai kya seerat aur imaan woh jaane
Humne to apna dil nikaal kar rakh diya unke saamne
Zindagi denge ya zindagi lenge ye anjaam woh jaane
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Aurat se jyada 'NEK' aur aurat se jyada 'BUDD' nahin
Iss ki naffrat aur mohobbat,donno ki hudd nahin
Ye chahe to haivaan ko karde sajjde
Aur chahe to pehchane aashiq ki quarbani ka dardd nahin.
 
devdahiya said:
Aurat se jyada 'NEK' aur aurat se jyada 'BUDD' nahin
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umm... aadmi bechara, bojh ka mara. Neki aur baddi dono me peeche rah gaya.......jor ki kilki........... yen shayar log bhala kiya jane aadmi ki neki aur baddi ki bulandiyan...hahahaha

RK^2
 
devdahiya said:
Aurat se jyada 'NEK' aur aurat se jyada 'BUDD' nahin
Iss ki naffrat aur mohobbat,donno ki hudd nahin
Ye chahe to haivaan ko karde sajjde
Aur chahe to pehchane aashiq ki quarbani ka dardd nahin.
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Kya nek aur kya bura kisko hai parwah yahan
Kaun yahan par anjaame-mohabbat se darta hai
Woh aur honge jo dar gaye ye afsaane sun kar
"Vijay" ka dil to unki har ek ada par marta hai
 
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