Wafa aur mohabbat

[devdahiya]

Good one Shobhit,

Is deewangi ke aage ye samandar kya hai
Mauj ke rokne se hum nahin rookne waale
Dil mein ek pyar ka shola jalaaya hai humne
Jaalim zamaane ke aage ab nahin jhukne waale

Ek teess uthhi,jab dekha unko,Ho gaya dil bekabbu
Iss ko samjhanne walli na koi nasihatt abb takk banni hei aur na banna koi jaddu.

 

[shobhitdeshwal]

Ek teess uthhi,jab dekha unko,Ho gaya dil bekabbu
Iss ko samjhanne walli na koi nasihatt abb takk banni hei aur na banna koi jaddu.

Samjhane se samjh jata to deevanapan na hota....
hum dil ko aur dil humko... aise toofan me na khota....
Dekh hi kyun liya tha... ab askh ro ro kar poocha karte hain???
Aankho ka samndar kehta hai.. kaash main kabhi na rota.....
Hum to ab khud ki nazaron me gir se gaye hain.....
phir bhi rote hain raton ko... jab voh chain se hai sota!!!!!

 

[vijay]

Samjhane se samjh jata to deevanapan na hota....
hum dil ko aur dil humko... aise toofan me na khota....
Dekh hi kyun liya tha... ab askh ro ro kar poocha karte hain???
Aankho ka samndar kehta hai.. kaash main kabhi na rota.....
Hum to ab khud ki nazaron me gir se gaye hain.....
phir bhi rote hain raton ko... jab voh chain se hai sota!!!!!

Hum shayad nahin samajh paaye aaj tak unko
Ke unke dil mein jo pal rahi hai woh chahat kya hai
Jise woh mohabbat kahte hai agar wahi mohabbat hai
Shayad hum nahin samajh payenge ki mohabbat kya hai

 

[shobhitdeshwal]

Hum shayad nahin samajh paaye aaj tak unko
Ke unke dil mein jo pal rahi hai woh chahat kya hai
Jise woh mohabbat kahte hai agar wahi mohabbat hai
Shayad hum nahin samajh payenge ki mohabbat kya hai

Unke dil me jo hai.. usko muhabbat keh ke muhabbat ko iljaam na do.....
Pyar ke naam ko to zinda rehne do.... aise gande naam na do....
voh muhabbat jo hoti to hum aise barbad na hue hote.....
gar kuch aur nahi... to aankon ko aur rone ka kaam na do!!!!!

 

[vijay]

Unke dil me jo hai.. usko muhabbat keh ke muhabbat ko iljaam na do.....
Pyar ke naam ko to zinda rehne do.... aise gande naam na do....
voh muhabbat jo hoti to hum aise barbad na hue hote.....
gar kuch aur nahi... to aankon ko aur rone ka kaam na do!!!!!

Right Shobhit, word to word......

Woh kya jan payenge kabhi mohabbat kya hai
Jinhe zamane mein roz mohabbat ho jaati hai
Ye to woh ehsaah hai jo dilwale hi samajh paaye
Isme dil jalta hai aur ankhen num ho jaati hai

 

[shobhitdeshwal]

Right Shobhit, word to word......

Woh kya jan payenge kabhi mohabbat kya hai
Jinhe zamane mein roz mohabbat ho jaati hai
Ye to woh ehsaah hai jo dilwale hi samajh paaye
Isme dil jalta hai aur ankhen num ho jaati hai

Gazab bhai!!!!

Muhabbat hi jo na samjhe.. voh zaalim pyar kya jaane??
nikalti dil ke taaron se jo hai jhankar kya jaane???

Use to katal karna aur tadpana hi aata hai..
gala kiska kata, kyun kar kata.. talwar kya jaane???

Dava se faayeda hoga.. ki hoga zeher zaalim se,
maraz ki kya dava hai koi beemar kya jaane???

Muhabbat hi jo na samjhe.. voh zaalim pyar kya jaane??????????????????

 

[choudharyneelam]

wah!! wah!! ati sunder! aur chalte raho aise hi......tum log bhi nahin jaante what exactly love is....hope that you get to realise it soon

 

[shobhitdeshwal]

wah!! wah!! ati sunder! aur chalte raho aise hi......tum log bhi nahin jaante what exactly love is....hope that you get to realise it soon

Sahi kaha Neelam.. shayad nahi hi jaan paaye.. as shayad janvaya nahi kisi ne aaj tak!!!!!! but... agar yeh pyar hai.. jo chal raha hai... to aisa to pyar nahi hi hpta hoga I am sure..... aisa nahi ho sakta dear... ki hum unhe chahe.. voh na chahein!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! aur agar aisa hai to........ pyar kuch nahi!!!!!
Par nahi.. hai pyar hai...... yahan to hai... jisne sab kuch khatam karva diya.. jisne.. itna majboot kar diya tha ki.. sab karne ko tayaar ho gaye the... to.........
But.... I wish all of my frieds do get their love!!!!!

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Aaj bahut unmann hun.. mujhko aisa lagta hai...
shayad sapno me tumne mujhko pyar kiya hoga!!!

Atit ki jhalak si milti hai.... main soch raha hun...
jaise tumne mera shringar kiya hoga!!!

Uth chal pada main us ansuni aahat ki taraf...
jahan se laga mujhe tumne yaad kiya hoga!!!

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Tumhari kabr pe main fatha padhne nahi aaya......
Kyunki.. mujhe maalom tha... tum mar nahi sakte....
tum abhi zinda ho.... mere khayalon me... mere jasbaton me...

Tumhari kabr pe jo fatha padha gaya tha....
voh fatha meri maut ka fatha tha...... tum mar nahi sakte...
tum abhi zinda ho... meri aankhon me... meri sab baaton me...

Tum mar nahi sakte... tum mar nahi sakte.... tum mar nahi sakte.....
tumhari kabr me main dafan hun.. tum mujhme zinda ho...
mere haathon ki ungliyan.... mere dil ki dhadkan... mere chere ki roshni....
sab tum hi to ho.. sab tum ho.. tum hi ho...... tum mar nahi sakte..

isiliye.. tumhari kabr pe main fatha padhne nahi aaya..........
tum mera fatha pad do.... main tumhari kabr me dafan jo hun!!!

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Raaste pe mil gaya, mud gaye hum raasta...
pehchan liya tha maine usko... tha dil tod ke jana vala!!!

Usko ruksat to kiya tha.. mujhe maaloom na tha....
saara ghar le gaya.. ghar chhod ke jaane vala....

kisko kahun ki bahut gham seene me kaid kiye hain maine....
door mujhse ho gaya...... mujhko samjhane vala.......

roz apne hi askhon ke samandar ko dekha karta hun main....
khain tair ka aa na jaaye kishti ko bachane vala........

Ib sun liyo bhai ghazal... arr koi line milti ho to bata diyoi!!!
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[rkumar]

wah!! wah!! ati sunder! aur chalte raho aise hi......tum log bhi nahin jaante what exactly love is....hope that you get to realise it soon

Volumes have been written on what is love and still not many understand what its all about. Love means different thing to different people and there is no universal definition. May be someone opens a new thread where we might share our own versions of this great human feelings and all its illusive colours.

RK^2

Ab khushi hai na koi dard rulane vala....
humne apna liya har rang zamane vala....

Usko ruksat to kiya tha.. mujhe maaloom na tha....
saara ghar le gaya.. ghar chhod ke jaane vala....

kisko kahun ki bahut gham seene me kaid kiye hain maine....
door mujhse ho gaya...... mujhko samjhane vala.......

roz apne hi askhon ke samandar ko dekha karta hun main....
khain tair ka aa na jaaye kishti ko bachane vala........

umm...your poetry is getting deeper and deeper Shobhit...I can see it evolving right in front of my eyes..

RK^2

 

[choudharyneelam]

Volumes have been written on what is love and still not many understand what its all about. Love means different thing to different people and there is no universal definition. May be someone opens a new thread where we might share our own versions of this great human feelings and all its illusive colours.

RK^2

yes sir, i agree with you

 

[shobhitdeshwal]

umm...your poetry is getting deeper and deeper Shobhit...I can see it evolving right in front of my eyes..

RK^2

Thanks for the compliment Rajendra ji. My endeavour is to get deeper in life.. and potray it on the paper with pen....... And poem is the best way one can get things out in!!!!!

Cheers!!

Shobhit Deshwal

 

[ritu]

Ab khushi hai na koi dard rulane vala....
humne apna liya har rang zamane vala....

shobit i know these r not ur creation because i have heard this gazal long time back sung by jagjit singh.writer is nida fazli here not shobit deshwal .name of the album is hope

 

[ritu]

sir this was someone else poetry and if shobit is claiming its his then i feel sorry 4 him.i can get u this gazal in one of jagjit singh album hope.lyrics wrtten by nida fazli

umm...your poetry is getting deeper and deeper Shobhit...I can see it evolving right in front of my eyes..

RK^2

 

[fool4love]

take it easy guys.....

thumko dekhya.. to nyu khayaal aaya
kaal saanjh ne.. itna daliya kyu khaya

aap mere dil me ...nyu baas rahiii sooo..
jukar baajre ke khet me mehins bad rahii ho

 

[ritu]

hahahhahahahahahahhahahh

thumko dekhya.. to nyu khayaal aaya
kaal saanjh ne.. itna daliya kyu khaya

aap mere dil me ...nyu baas rahiii sooo..
jukar baajre ke khet me mehins bad rahii ho

 

[sjakhars]

Ritu is absolutely right.
I have Jagjitsingh's this album named "HOPE".
If anybody want, let me know.

Ab khushi hai na koi dard rulane vala....
humne apna liya har rang zamane vala....

shobit i know these r not ur creation because i have heard this gazal long time back sung by jagjit singh.writer is nida fazli here not shobit deshwal .name of the album is hope

 

[vijay]

hahahahahahahaahahahhah....Kamal.......good yaar !

thumko dekhya.. to nyu khayaal aaya
kaal saanjh ne.. itna daliya kyu khaya

aap mere dil me ...nyu baas rahiii sooo..
jukar baajre ke khet me mehins bad rahii ho

Absolutely right Ritu,

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I know about this gazal too.

shobit i know these r not ur creation because i have heard this gazal long time back sung by jagjit singh.writer is nida fazli here not shobit deshwal .name of the album is hope

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Dilwaalon ki basti mein kya bataayen
Har insaan ne dil pe jakhm khaya hai
Nadaan hain woh jo ab bhi na samajhe
Yahan kaun apna aur kaun paraaya hai
.

 

[monikadahiya]

ree shobhit... tere te yo umeed na thi manne.. jaldi te edit kar de naa te vee aaye copyright aale.. bera sai ne kaavya vishwanathan ka ke haal hua sai?? pehle te doosro ke kaam chori kar ke sara shreya le liya arr fer pakde jaan paache lhukhi chuppe sai chortii...


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shobhit bhai, that was nice of you that you paid heed to my advice... just take care from next time onwards... .. take care

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[shobhitdeshwal]

Ab khushi hai na koi dard rulane vala....
humne apna liya har rang zamane vala....


shobit i know these r not ur creation because i have heard this gazal long time back sung by jagjit singh.writer is nida fazli here not shobit deshwal .name of the album is hope

You are right Ritu, the first two lines are from the same ghazal, by Jagjit and Chitra Singh and i have this in album, best of Jagjit and Chitra Singh, the following lines are my creation, and I claim it to be mine!!!! The starter you see..... was taken!!

Re bata di ib te.. pehli do line thayi thi ude te..... pachhe ki te saari meri sai......
Copyrigt aale, Monika bebbe... aaunge te do line edit kar dun sun main datt kerak.....

shobhit bhai, that was nice of you that you paid heed to my advice... just take care from next time onwards... .. take care

This is to testify keeping all Gods of jatland as witness that the testimony below is that of a namesake and matches my opinion only in the positive aspects it so piercingly points out. I, Shobhit D hereby declare that the above is true to the best of my knowledge and carries the weight of all Jatland Gods' integrity.

This is for me, I am here to learn and to explore, and all elders are always welcome..... I would pay heed to all advices....

Cheers!!!

Shobhit Deshwal

 

[downtoearth]

yey chand khayalat hain jo ek arsey sey iss jehan mein poshida hain,,,, aaj khud-bakhud lafzoon ki shakal mein ubhar aayey hain..........



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