Wafa aur mohabbat

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vijay said:
Ye phalsafe jo een sunahare panno pe likhe hai
Waqt ne jo likhi hai kismat usko mita nahin sakte
Kaun jaane kiske maathe par kya likha hai yaaro
Har saath chalne wale ko humsafar bata nahin sakte
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Good one....keep it up!!:)

Wo sunahare panno ki kitaab ek din khul jaayegi
Kaun hai kismat mein tumhe usse milwayegi
Saath tumhara bahaut denge raah mein aie musaafir
Jiska naam likha hai mukaddar mein wahi asli saath nibhayegi
 
downtoearth said:
na koi raund ke nikley mujhe fir se anjaani manjil ke liyey
badi mushkil sey baitha hu gard-ey-karwaan ki tarah
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Woh kya kabhi samajhange ki ye dil ki lagi kya hai
Pyar mein agar wafa na ho to ye bandagi kya hai
Jinke aitbaar mein lutaa di humne ye zindagi apni
Woh humen na sahajh paaye to ye zindagi kya hai
 
Jinhe humne aaj tak apna samajha parwaane nikle
Jinse mohabbat ki woh kisi aur ke deewaane nikle
Kuchh aur bhi rishtey they ess mohabbat ke shivaa
Jin par zindagi luta di humne aaj woh begaane nikle
 
vijay said:
Hi all,

This is my personal gazal written by me. Please contribute here your thoughts.


Wafa aur mohabbat ki tawwako ki unse
Hum hasino ki fitrat se kitne anjaan the.

Kinara kiya sabse sirf unki chahat main
Warna duniya main hamare kitne kadardaan the

Ek suhana safar bhi gujra hai is zindagi ka
Us daur main hum par wo kitne meharbaan the

Begano ki bheed main apne se dikhne wale
Ab samajh mein aaya wo kitne be-imaan the

Kisi se kabhi shikwa kiya bhi to kya
Hamare shabd bhi to kitne bejubaan the

Jamana bura hai aur kitne masoom hai woh
Ye sochkar hum khamkhan kitne pareshaan the

Kisi ki hifazat karte hue khud lut gaye
'Vijay' har daur main kitne nadaan the
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AS ALWAYS .....................
BAHUT ACHAA LIKHA AAPNE VIJAY JI
AAPKO TO APNI GAZALON KO PUBLISH KARAANA CHAHIYE REALLY:)
PAR EK COPY MUJHE BHEJNA MAT BHULIYEGA
 
Chiragon se kyon chahte ho.......

Chiragon se kyon chahate ho ki vo sahara bane,
Charrag ban kar kuch tum bhi to roshan karo,

Chiraag to jalte hi hain bujhne ke liye yahan,
Gulzar rahe raat, rahe sahar har taraf yahan,

Ujalon pe itna bhi bharosa na tum karo ab to,
Andheron ki tehzeeb ka hume kuch pata to hai...
 
Jalta chiraag aur khilta phool,aasha ki pribhasha hhote hein
Jo na pehchan paye ummanggon ko,wo jindaggi bhar rotte hein
Jindaggi banni hei chhotti-2 khushiyon se ai dilbar
Jo bhar-2 pyale isse nahin peete,wo kammai daulatt ko bin kharch kiye khotte hein.
 
devdahiya said:
Jalta chiraag aur khilta phool,aasha ki pribhasha hhote hein
Jo na pehchan paye ummanggon ko,wo jindaggi bhar rotte hein
Jindaggi banni hei chhotti-2 khushiyon se ai dilbar
Jo bhar-2 pyale isse nahin peete,wo kammai daulatt ko bin kharch kiye khotte hein.
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Very nice Sir :) ....i was waiting for you to be here as you always make the environment very happy and positive by your great shayaris....thanks for your presense again :) ...and i really liked this one

With Regards
Neelam
 
...Khwaab naa ban jaana.

Paribhashaon ko hamne garha hain yahan,
Andheron ko bhi ujalon sa jiya hai yahan,
Har lamha jeene mai vishwas hai hame,
Tinke-tinke se bhi bahut aas hai hame,
Ansuon mai bhi khushi dhoond lete hain,
Pyala naa sahi, katraon pe bhi jee lete hain,
Pyala itna na bharna ki bahak jaana yahan,
Khone ko kya laaye thay jo jaayega vahan,
Kal mera zamana tha aaj unka hai bahanaa,
Umangon main itna bhi na kho jaayain kabhi,
Umang dene vaale ko na bhul jaayain kahin,
Baantne se badhti hai har khushi yahan,
Aasthaon ke naye aayaam le aana yahan,
Muskurahtain bikherna tum jaroor yahan,
Yaad itna bhi naa aana ki khwab ban jaana!:) :)

:) It is a nice experience to see a lot of good poetic post here by our able jat bhais. Thanks to Neelam for encouraging people and working as moderator..I just wish to get feedback, does'nt matter if its against my writings! Happy (belated) Deepawali...:)]
 
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Nice poetry...

It was a mix of wonderful feelings...
Nice to know ppl have so much to tell in the forums.
Rather, its a pleasant surprise to find some talent in poetry from Mr. Verma (I know him very much:) :) :) . )Keep it up!!
 
rgsverma said:
:) It is a nice experience to see a lot of good poetic post here by our able jat bhais. Thanks to Neelam for encouraging people and working as moderator..I just wish to get feedback, does'nt matter if its against my writings! Happy (belated) Deepawali...:)]
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Hello Sir

One thing i didn't get in your message whether you are thinking me a moderator or talking about someone else....but if you are taking me as a moderator then sir i would like to correct you here...i'm also a member enjoying here like you and other members:) ....i'm not any moderator....and just keep sharing Sir, you too are writing very nice poetries....i really like this section that's why i never miss even a single poetry by anyone whether sad or happy.....but feel more good when one writes something on happiness, love, togetherness :)....offcourse there are many many great talents here.

Lots of sweet wishes to you also on Diwali occassion :)

Keep writing!!
With Regards
Neelam
:) :) :) :) :)
 
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..as good as a moderator

Hi Neelam,
Of course, I know that u r not a moderator, I meant that u r so active as a moderator itself...:) In fact, it was a compliment to you.!:D

Thanks for encouraging new people...

With best wishes....:) :)
 
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