Wafa aur mohabbat

[sunitahooda]

Vijay Ji i wish to say something on this quote....Thats talent is always in-built and especially if it is Poetry as it comes from within....if it is grasped then its not poetry or talent....its modification or manipulation also Vijay Ji ka to jajba hai....taste to hamara hai ki humne pasand kiya ya na-pasand....Do you agree Vijay?

simply fabulous...its amazing ...u really have a goot taste and an in built talent..keep writing such wonderful gazals..

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Thanks Vijay....

Good composition Sunita,

Ab tak door bahaaren bata mausam mere
Is chaman main tere patjhar ki seeam kya hai
Main chup hoon kismat se kya shikva karoon
Saans lena hi apradh to is haar ki seeam kya hai

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NO Nikita....dont get upset with one comment....the under mentioned is a good tukbandi...i quite liked it actually....

prashant itna bura likhtee hoon kya?....

mana aap hai shayar poorane
hum nadaan, aap bade sayane
aap ko aate hain mehfil mein rang jamane
hum hai abhi naye naye, naye naye hamare andaaz
par woh din door nahin jab hoga GALIB SAHIB ko hum pe naz

 

[devdahiya]

Dhaddi-2 ke morr kukka ke marge
Arr tum inn maskryan tei dargge
Shayar ke khakh banogge
Jib tahin naye-2 sher nahi jannogge.


MOTTI KILLKKI@ KUKKA KEI

 

[vijay]

I agree Sunita !

Vijay Ji i wish to say something on this quote....Thats talent is always in-built and especially if it is Poetry as it comes from within....if it is grasped then its not poetry or talent....its modification or manipulation also Vijay Ji ka to jajba hai....taste to hamara hai ki humne pasand kiya ya na-pasand....Do you agree Vijay?

Well Sunita,

It's depends on your way of thinking and your approach towards one's writing. Haw far and deep you try to understands the meaning and feelings in the writing, because everybody try to write his\her best possible thoughts in best possible word selection. Some people think that playing with words is a piece of cake while other find it very creative and inspiring.

You are right in the way that everybody have in-built talent and feelings. Some people can play with words to make it more impressive while others maybe not that expert but at last what counts is the message and feelings of the writing.

For people who try to understand the feelings its a good composition while for others these may be a few lines.

Concluding, I agree that it depends on the readers how they try to recognize that talent and the feelings of the writing.

Vijay

 

[devdahiya]

Hum bhatak gaye thhe raste se,gaaddi pattri se thi uttar gai
Abb phoonk-2 kar chalte hein,kari shurru jindaggi nai-2
Ghav puranne kaffi hein ab dard aur na tum dena
Baat puranni bhool chukka,jo kahi gai aur sunni gai.

 

[vijay]

Hum bhatak gaye thhe raste se,gaaddi pattri se thi uttar gai
Abb phoonk-2 kar chalte hein,kari shurru jindaggi nai-2
Ghav puranne kaffi hein ab dard aur na tum dena
Baat puranni bhool chukka,jo kahi gai aur sunni gai.

Bhatke huo ko humen raasta dikhaana hai
Puraani yaadon ko dil se bhoolaana hai
Mandiron main to koi bhi deepak jala dega
Aandhiyon ke dar pe hamen deepak jalaana hai

 

[devdahiya]

Bhatke huo ko humen raasta dikhaana hai
Puraani yaadon ko dil se bhoolaana hai
Mandiron main to koi bhi deepak jala dega
Aandhiyon ke dar pe hamen deepak jalaana hai

bohot khoob bhai Vijay.


Wo deepak bhi kya jo bujhh jaye,alak pawan ke jhonkke se
Wo ashiq kya jo rukk jaye,yahan falak kissi ke rokke se.

 

[vijay]

bohot khoob bhai Vijay.


Wo deepak bhi kya jo bujhh jaye,alak pawan ke jhonkke se
Wo ashiq kya jo rukk jaye,yahan falak kissi ke rokke se.

In toofano se aaj humne kah diya sare aam
Lakh kosish karo ye deepak yun hi jalta rahega
Jo tadap is dil main jagi hai mohabbat ki
Ek sapna hamesha nigahon main palta rahega

 

[devdahiya]

In toofano se aaj humne kah diya sare aam
Lakh kosish karo ye deepak yun hi jalta rahega
Jo tadap is dil main jagi hai mohabbat ki
Ek sapna hamesha nigahon main palta rahega

Jab hum royye to dil roya
Wo pucchh raha tha kuchh mujhse;batta deewane kya khoya
Paggal mann ko samjhana hum kab se dekho bhul gaye
Kya jajbaton ki baat krein,jab hrdum darde-teer sahe.

 

[vijay]

Jab hum royye to dil roya
Wo pucchh raha tha kuchh mujhse;batta deewane kya khoya
Paggal mann ko samjhana hum kab se dekho bhul gaye
Kya jajbaton ki baat krein,jab hrdum darde-teer sahe.

Rona to kab ka chhhod diya is dile ne
Har haal main ab hansna ho hoga
Jab pyar kiya hai to kya parwah hai
Ye darde-teer to sahna hi hoga

 

[devdahiya]

Rona to kab ka chhhod diya is dile ne
Har haal main ab hansna ho hoga
Jab pyar kiya hai to kya parwah hai
Ye darde-teer to sahna hi hoga

Thee laggi jarra si unki thee yahan teer jiggar ke paar gaya
Sabh kuchh dil mei chhupa gaye,tha shauk hamara naya-2

 

[vijay]

Thee laggi jarra si unki thee yahan teer jiggar ke paar gaya
Sabh kuchh dil mei chhupa gaye,tha shauk hamara naya-2

Dil ki baat dil main rakhne ka kya faida
Izhaar-e-mohabbt karna jaroori hai
Yakeen rakhoge to pyar bhi milega
Apne aap par aitebaar karna jaroori hai


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Aaj hum dekh rahe hain unki taraf
Woh dekh rahen hai kisi aur ki taraf

Waqt yahan kisi ka intezaar nahi karta
Kya maloom zindagi le jaye kiski taraf

Unke waham ka koi ilaz nahi duniya main
Ki saara jamana jhukta hai unki taraf

Beeta hua kal aaj kabhi nahi aayega
Jab zindagi dekhati thi hamari taraf

Ikraar karte to shayad naaz bhi uthate
Bekraar hoke chalte tumhari taraf

Kya soch liya ki is berukhi ke karan
Zindagi andheri ho jayegi har taraf

Koi aaya koi gaya yahan kisko khabar
Yahan roshni ki umeeden hain har taraf

Koi pachhtayega apni nadaniyon pe
Kisi ki zindagi jagmagayegi charo taraf

Ye haseen jalwe apne pas hi rakhiye
"Vijay" ke chaahne wale hain sab taraf

 

[devdahiya]

Chahat jab hoti hei to seena cheer deti hei
Har rangg feeka lagta hei,na koi jageer leti hei
Ye wo paudhha hei jo fuut-ta hei,dil ke kissi konne se
Ye nahin ugg sakta iss dhrra[dharti] pe bonne se.

* * *

Takdeer likhne se pehle ek baar puchh leta mujhe bi ai khudda
Kya tumhare wahan slah lene ka rewaaj nhin hei?

* * *

Mujhe nanjoor hoti uski marji,gar wafa ke badle wafa mil sakti
Wafa karne ki sajja mili bewafai se,na kar paye hum uss khuda ki bi bhaktti.
Wo bhi maluum hei mujhko ke wo likhta hei naseeb har ek ka nyara-nyara
Par ye batta ei mere dost,ussne kyun likh diya ye gamme muhobat mere naseeb mei sarre ka saara.

* * *

Wo aaye aur chale gaye,jaisse kuchh hua hi nahin
Dillon ko toddne ka aissa mela nahin lagta aur kahin
Shukkar hei ei parwardiggar ke wo challe gaye
warna hum dhhundhhte rehte unko yahin kahin.

 

[vijay]

Dil ko jahan bhar ke mohabbat mein gum mile
Magar phir bhi soch raha hai ki kam mile
Jitni thi mere waste khushiyan mujhe mili
Jitne mere naseeb main likhe thy gum mile

* * *

Agar khuda humse salah lene lagega
To kisko tanhai aur gum pyara hai
Woh khudaa apni marji se likhta hai
Jo bhi is duniya main naseeb hamara hai

* * *

Gum-e-muhabbat Kismat walon ko milata hai
Har insaan ki kimat main khudda ne ye nahi likha
Ye dil ki daulat hai jo badi mushkil se milti hai
Pyar ko sub kuchh samjhe aisa koi insaan nahi dikha

* * *

Khawabon ki duniya se nikal kar dekho
Woh aaye hi kab thy jo chale gaye
Ek chhalawa hai ye mohabbat bhi
Jaane kitne diwane isme chhale gaye

Is inkaar main bhi ikraar hai kahin
Dil lagaane main bus yahi maja hai
Nahin samjh payenge woh hamari deewangi ko
Unke liye to ek bus yahi saaja hai

* * *

Your's feeling

A sad day of sad feelings
Your's feelings
You were in my thoughts all the day
Eyes filled with oceans of tears
Were the unvaluable pearls i know that
Providinfg me to remember
The unforgottable days of my glorious past
Just like sweet dreams
Producing a river of pain in my heart
Which overflows with sadness
Changing into an emotional flood
My sweet dreams flew in it
Damaging walls of my heart
But my ruined heart is waiting still
To welcome you again
Can't you come back
For a ruined heart's beseech
To bring me a bliss of life
I am waiting for you
You will come back one day
To bring me the happiness again, my Regina
Of course, i know that

 

[dhayal]

vijay

jawaab teri shayari ka.... denge hum shayari mein....
naam tera likh baithe hain.... apne diary mein....


Tere pyaar ki roshni aisi hai ki, har taraf ujaala nazar aata hai,
sochta hu ki ghar ki bijli katwa du , kambaqt bill bohat aata hai

 

[vijay]

Bahut Kaali raat thi ye rango ke mausam ki
Qayamat hone tak bhi subah nahi hui
Umar beet gai bahaar ke intezaar mein
Phir bhi kismat se sulah nahi hui

* * *

Unka kaam hai bewafai unse kya umeed kare
En pattharon se sirf dard-e-dil hi milega
Jhuthi baharen hain ye is gulistan mein
Har phool yahan bina mahak ka hi niklega

 

[dhayal]

Aapki is Bevafai Par Toe Fida Hai Jaan Apni,
Khuda Jane Agar Tujme Vafa Hoti Toe Kya Hota

 

[devdahiya]

Gammon ko galle lagana seekh liya meinne
Jinddagi ko kuchh thheek kiya meinne
Ei khudda ab mujhe dil nahin laggana
Apna karjj uttar diya meinne.

 

[vijay]

Gammon ko galle lagana seekh liya meinne
Jinddagi ko kuchh thheek kiya meinne
Ei khudda ab mujhe dil nahin laggana
Apna karjj uttar diya meinne.

Ye gum hi hain jo hamara pata poochhte hain
Warna unko to hamari khabar hi nahi hoti
Saari raat jag kar kati subah ke intezaar mein
Neend aati bhi to woh gum ke saath hi soti

 

[devdahiya]

Ye gum hi hain jo hamara pata poochhte hain
Warna unko to hamari khabar hi nahi hoti
Saari raat jag kar kati subah ke intezaar mein
Neend aati bhi to woh gum ke saath hi soti

Abb hamein gumm aur khussi brabar lagte hein
Hum jagte huwe sotte hein aur jagtte huwe sotte hein
Parchhai bhi asli insaan lagti hei
Aur assli insaan bhi parchhai dikhti hei.

 

[vijay]

Abb hamein gumm aur khussi brabar lagte hein
Hum jagte huwe sotte hein aur jagtte huwe sotte hein
Parchhai bhi asli insaan lagti hei
Aur assli insaan bhi parchhai dikhti hei.

Is chhat aur deewaron ko kaun dekha hai
Unke siva aur kuchh bhi nahin dikhta humen
Unke lambe lambe khat khatm hone main nahi aate they
Aajkal to pyar ko do shabd bhi nahin likhta humen