Wafa aur mohabbat

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Agar sach mein kahin baitha hai tu khuda
Aur hai agar dum meri duaon mein
To de de har khushi unn aansuon ko aur
Rang de sabki duniya ko lal, peele, hare, rangon mein
Main to ismein hi khush ho jaaungi
Jo dikh jaaye mujhe hansi kisi ke jeevan mein

:) :) :) :) :)
 
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Rang hain chaaye.....

Rang hain chaaye har kadam pe sada,
Pyar main bhi chalakte ye aansu sada,
Khushi hai khuda ka ek ahle karam,
Gamon ko kaun paalta yahan apne sang,
Na rang hon zindgi mai to bhi kya,
Aakash ko dekho ya suraj ko yahan,
Har rang hain unmain chipe huye,
Ek thandak aur shola bane huay!
 
heard a long time back

want to shre sm lines

in 1857 revolution,sm soldiers asked bhadurshah jafar to become their leader.... itna sunn karr bhadurshah jafar aapney thakey huyey shayraana andaaz mein booley

damdamey mein abb damm nahi khair manao jaan ki ey zafar
thandi huii shaamsheer hindustaan ki

itna sunn kar ek sipaahi ney jawaab diya

ghaajiyoon mein jab talak boo rahegi imaan ki
takht-ey-london tak chalegi teg hindustaan ki

(shamsheer >> swords,,,ghaaji >> warrior,,,,teg >> sword )
 
Oh Thanks, Neelam!

Thanks, if you liked my poem.
In fact, it was in response to Neelam's poetry.
If Neelam writes, or anybody else and I could response,
I will try my luck:)
Take care All!:)
 
wohi usuul jo muhkam the sard saye mein
zara sii dhuup mein nikle to jhuul jhuul gaaye

na jaane kaunse hotoon ka aasra paa kar
tumhare lab meri taShnah_labii ko bhuul gaaye


(mir taqi mir)
 
utarney de badan ka lahoo pearo tak ey bandey
hoga tu karwaan sey aagey aakhri din

kar himmat na darr gamm-ey-haar sey ey bandey
rukhsat ho jayegi hasti-ey -haar aakhri din :)
 
downtoearth said:
utarney de badan ka lahoo pearo tak ey bandey
hoga tu karwaan sey aagey aakhri din

kar himmat na darr gamm-ey-haar sey ey bandey
rukhsat ho jayegi hasti-ey -haar aakhri din :)
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too good ...ab baar baar sabki posts ki tareefein karne lagi to aadha thread to inse hi bhar jaayega...issliye aap sab bas likhte raho aur main har post of poem shayari padhti rahti hun...ek bhi miss nahin karti....so you all just keep writing......while reading these poems/ghazals/shayaris it brings a good feeling in me and the sad one reflects the same in the manner it is written...main itna accha likhna nahin jaanti lekin padh ke inki gahraee samajhna jaanti hun...that's why i always request everyone to write happy one...but still sad waali bhi acchi hoti hain....so no matter jaisa accha lage bas likhte raho sab

:)
 
rgsverma said:
Rang hain chaaye har kadam pe sada,
Pyar main bhi chalakte ye aansu sada,
Khushi hai khuda ka ek ahle karam,
Gamon ko kaun paalta yahan apne sang,
Na rang hon zindgi mai to bhi kya,
Aakash ko dekho ya suraj ko yahan,
Har rang hain unmain chipe huye,
Ek thandak aur shola bane huay!
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Har aur faila hai koi na koi rang
Laal peela nahi to safed hi sahi
Ek matlab juda har rang sang
Phir bhi laal peele jaise hi
Rang dekhne ki hai jeevan mein umang
Safed aur kala na mile mujhe kabhi
Inmein na kuch dikhayi de, andhera hi hai inn sang
 
choudharyneelam said:
...Safed aur kala na mile mujhe kabhi
Inmein na kuch dikhayi de, andhera hi hai inn sang
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Arrey madam aankon ke saame ek prism rakh lijiye aur fir derkhiye safed rang ke under chipa indra dhanush.... balck is nothing but absence of all colours.. so why blame poor fellow...hihiihihi

RK^2
 
Nice response RK ji!

rkumar said:
Arrey madam aankon ke saame ek prism rakh lijiye aur fir derkhiye safed rang ke under chipa indra dhanush.... balck is nothing but absence of all colours.. so why blame poor fellow...hihiihihi

RK^2
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choudharyneelam said:
Har aur faila hai koi na koi rang
Laal peela nahi to safed hi sahi
Ek matlab juda har rang sang

Safed aur kala na mile mujhe kabhi
Inmein na kuch dikhayi de, andhera hi hai inn sang
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:) That was exactly what I wanted to convey Neelam
in my poem, responding one of her earlier expressions..

Thanks!:)
 
rkumar said:
Arrey madam aankon ke saame ek prism rakh lijiye aur fir derkhiye safed rang ke under chipa indra dhanush.... balck is nothing but absence of all colours.. so why blame poor fellow...hihiihihi

RK^2
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Sir i also know that looking through a prism we can see all beautiful colours...but you use white and black colour on a paper....can you see what was written or drawn on that page....or just write anything here at any thread and just choose this white colour then i think nobody will be able to see what is written over there...will your prism be of any use here...i'm just taking it as general...in the sense a drawing teacher tells the use of colours....and the thing you said here doesn't match with my life....i'm not blaming any fellow here and if i ever had anyone in my life i'll never blame that person but will be there always to appreciate in every step of life...and this would be better explained by one such. :) :)
 
Ye zindagi ke rang hain har pal badalate rahenge
Hum ess zindagi ko umar bhar samajhate rahenge
Duniyan humen khushi aur gum ke alawa kya degi
Zindagi ke har ek mod par hum nikharate rahenge
 
Zindagi ke har pal par....

vijay said:
Ye zindagi ke rang hain har pal badalate rahenge
Hum ess zindagi ko umar bhar samajhate rahenge
Duniyan humen khushi aur gum ke alawa kya degi
Zindagi ke har ek mod par hum nikharate rahenge
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:) :)

Rangon ko suhana banane ka irada rakhte hain,
Zindagi ko naya afsana banane ki aas rakhte hain,
Khushiyon main gam ko chhupane ka vaada karte hain,
Zindagi ke har pal pe muskan ka vaayda karte hain!

:) :)
 
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rgsverma said:
:) :)

Rangon ko suhana banane ka irada rakhte hain,
Zindagi ko naya afsana banane ki aas rakhte hain,
Khushiyon main gam ko chhupane ka vaada karte hain,
Zindagi ke har pal pe muskan ka vaayda karte hain!

:) :)
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Raj Sir your reply to Vijay's post is very nice and i think now you will really enjoy writing here more as he too is in habit of writing great shayaris...so both of you continue ahead.

Regards
Neelam :)
 
Thanks.....Wafa aur Mohabbat

:) :) Its due to Neelam and a few other members that I am prompted to go to Jatland forum often. There are some thread which I think should always be live. Its one of them...


Wafa ka mohabbat se rishta sada hai,
Kaun jane unka iraada aaj kya hai,
Wafai main unki anthar bhala kya hai,
Nazarain jo ghumi to ba-wafa kahan hai!

Keep the tread alive..
:) :)
 
rgsverma said:
:) :)

Rangon ko suhana banane ka irada rakhte hain,
Zindagi ko naya afsana banane ki aas rakhte hain,
Khushiyon main gam ko chhupane ka vaada karte hain,
Zindagi ke har pal pe muskan ka vaayda karte hain!

:) :)
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Zindagi ke rang hai ye jo waqt ke saath hai badalte
Inhi rangon se banti ye zindagi har pal ek afsana hai
Jo apne gum ko chhupa lete hain khushiyon mein
Unke sar pe ye asmaan aur kadmon tale zamana hai
 
vijay said:
Zindagi ke rang hai ye jo waqt ke saath hai badalte
Inhi rangon se banti ye zindagi har pal ek afsana hai
Jo apne gum ko chhupa lete hain khushiyon mein
Unke sar pe ye asmaan aur kadmon tale zamana hai
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Harr saksh karta hai pyar khushali se ai dilbar
Dildaar wo hein jo Gamm ke pyalon se muhobbat kartte hein.
 
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