Wafa aur mohabbat

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vijay said:
Good Dev sir,

Lekin hum ghuttne tekne walo main nahi...



Dil gaya tumne liya hum kya katen
Jaane wali cheez kla gum kya karen
Mamla aaj hai hushno-ishq ka
Dekhjye woh kya karen hum kya karen
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Unko jo karna tha wo kar gujre bahut pehle
Unn ki bewaffai ke baare mei bolo koi kya keh le
Wo jo karein unko barkat dena ei khudda
Barbadiyaan mujhe bhanne jo lagi hein
 
devdahiya said:
Unko jo karna tha wo kar gujre bahut pehle
Unn ki bewaffai ke baare mei bolo koi kya keh le
Wo jo karein unko barkat dena ei khudda
Barbadiyaan mujhe bhanne jo lagi hein
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Chehra jo kisi shakhsh ka dikhata hai sabhi ko
Aksar wo usi shakhsh ka chehra nahi hota
koi to sunega jise hum apna gum suna de
Duniya main har ek shskhsh bahara to nahi hota
 
vijay said:
Chehra jo kisi shakhsh ka dikhata hai sabhi ko
Aksar wo usi shakhsh ka chehra nahi hota
koi to sunega jise hum apna gum suna de
Duniya main har ek shskhsh bahara to nahi hota
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Behre aggar na hote,to ye haal kyun banaya
Wo to chale gaye hein par hei saath unka saya
Chaha tha humne unko gehraiyon se dil ki
Lekin galle se usne kissi aur ko lagaya.
 
devdahiya said:
Behre aggar na hote,to ye haal kyun banaya
Wo to chale gaye hein par hei saath unka saya
Chaha tha humne unko gehraiyon se dil ki
Lekin galle se usne kissi aur ko lagaya.
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Dard jab tak sawalat karte rahe
Hum tanhaiyo se baat karte rahe
Hum jhuke to nahin yah tamanna magar
Ek jamane se halaat jarte rahe
 
vijay said:
Dard jab tak sawalat karte rahe
Hum tanhaiyo se baat karte rahe
Hum jhuke to nahin yah tamanna magar
Ek jamane se halaat jarte rahe
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Ye manjoor ke wo hamein thhukrayein
Ye bhi manjoor ke wo beshak na aayein
Lekin mujhe nahin manjoor ei khudda ke wo fissal jayein
Aur meri jagah kissi aur ko apna banayin.
 
devdahiya said:
Ye manjoor ke wo hamein thhukrayein
Ye bhi manjoor ke wo beshak na aayein
Lekin mujhe nahin manjoor ei khudda ke wo fissal jayein
Aur meri jagah kissi aur ko apna banayin.
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Lootne wala khud lut gaya khud bhi
Uske daaman main kya rah aaakhir
Dushmano dushmano main mel hua
Jahar main jahar mil gaya aakhir
 
vijay said:
Lootne wala khud lut gaya khud bhi
Uske daaman main kya rah aaakhir
Dushmano dushmano main mel hua
Jahar main jahar mil gaya aakhir
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Humein loota apno nei,to dosh kis ko dein
Jab basti hi behosh hei to hosh kisko dein
 
vijay said:
Dev sir,

Hum nikkamme nahi the na woh khuda the yeh to humari bhool thi ki.......


Hum kisi dar par na rooke na kahin dastak di
Bahut se dar the meri jaan tere dar se pahle
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Hum apne dard-e-dil ko leke, tere dar pe aa baithe!
Suna hai teri basti mein, sukoon-o-chain bikta hai!!

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poonam said:
Tumko dekha to ye khayaal ayaa,
Khuda ne ye ‘hatelaa’ piece kaise banaya..:D :D
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Neechi nazar mein qayamat ka asar hota hai,
husn aur nikhar jata hai, sharma jaane se!:) :)

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devdahiya said:
Humein loota apno nei,to dosh kis ko dein
Jab basti hi behosh hei to hosh kisko dein
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Aaj us ne dard bhi apne alag kar liye........!
Aaj main roya toh, mere saath woh roya na tha!!
 
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stokas said:
Aaj us ne dard bhi apne alag kar liye........!
Aaj main roya toh, mere saath woh roya na tha!!
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Tumko meri khabar kahan hogi
Mujh pe aisi najar kahan hogi
Dard ko dil se lab pe la na sake
Bebasi is kadar kahan hogi

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stokas said:
Hum apne dard-e-dil ko leke, tere dar pe aa baithe!
Suna hai teri basti mein, sukoon-o-chain bikta hai!!
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Ghar se nikle to ho shocha hai kidhar jaoge
Har taraf tej hawayen hai bikhar jaoge
Har naye shahar main kuch raaten kadi hoti hai
Chhat se deewaren juda hongi to dar jaoge
 
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Well Done

Dear Vijay,
Its a good effort by you write such nice poetry, i really liked it and feels as if the words are coming from my heart.Keep it up!

Sunita

vijay said:
Hi all,

This is my personal gazal written by me. Please contribute here your thoughts.


Wafa aur mohabbat ki tawwako ki unse
Hum hasino ki fitrat se kitne anjaan the.

Kinara kiya sabse sirf unki chahat main
Warna duniya main hamare kitne kadardaan the

Ek suhana safar bhi gujra hai is zindagi ka
Us daur main hum par wo kitne meharbaan the

Begano ki bheed main apne se dikhne wale
Ab samajh mein aaya wo kitne be-imaan the

Kisi se kabhi shikwa kiya bhi to kya
Hamare shabd bhi to kitne bejubaan the

Jamana bura hai aur kitne masoom hai woh
Ye sochkar hum khamkhan kitne pareshaan the

Kisi ki hifazat karte hue khud lut gaye
'Vijay' har daur main kitne nadaan the
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sunitahooda said:
Dear Vijay,
Its a good effort by you write such nice poetry, i really liked it and feels as if the words are coming from my heart.Keep it up!

Sunita
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Thanks a lot for appreciation.

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Jaane kis waqt shaam ho jaaye
Ye kahani tamam ho jaaye
Pyar ki baat kar sako na agar
Dostaana kalaam ho jaaye
 
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hehehe, Vijay bhai to yaaron apne Sahi Jat Shayar ho gaya! mubarak ho!
Mirza Bijay.....very good stuff.....subhaan allah!

Ameen ??? for what u know ;)

rock on
Jit
 
GOOD CREATIVITY


"Wafa aur mohabbat ki tawwako ki unse
Hum hasino ki fitrat se kitne anjaan the.

Kinara kiya sabse sirf unki chahat main
Warna duniya main hamare kitne kadardaan the

Ek suhana safar bhi gujra hai is zindagi ka
Us daur main hum par wo kitne meharbaan the

Begano ki bheed main apne se dikhne wale
Ab samajh mein aaya wo kitne be-imaan the

Kisi se kabhi shikwa kiya bhi to kya
Hamare shabd bhi to kitne bejubaan the

Jamana bura hai aur kitne masoom hai woh
Ye sochkar hum khamkhan kitne pareshaan the

Kisi ki hifazat karte hue khud lut gaye
'Vijay' har daur main kitne nadaan the"
 
vijay said:
Hi all,

This is my personal gazal written by me. Please contribute here your thoughts.


Wafa aur mohabbat ki tawwako ki unse
Hum hasino ki fitrat se kitne anjaan the.

Kinara kiya sabse sirf unki chahat main
Warna duniya main hamare kitne kadardaan the

Ek suhana safar bhi gujra hai is zindagi ka
Us daur main hum par wo kitne meharbaan the

Begano ki bheed main apne se dikhne wale
Ab samajh mein aaya wo kitne be-imaan the

Kisi se kabhi shikwa kiya bhi to kya
Hamare shabd bhi to kitne bejubaan the

Jamana bura hai aur kitne masoom hai woh
Ye sochkar hum khamkhan kitne pareshaan the

Kisi ki hifazat karte hue khud lut gaye
'Vijay' har daur main kitne nadaan the
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simply fabulous...its amazing ...u really have a goot taste and an in built talent..keep writing such wonderful gazals..
 
bhai Vijay so much apprication....kudos to u yaar
but I'm a bit jealous :( but yaar its not my cup of tea so enjoy ur success!
waise yaar tu bollywood mein try, with Jatlanders good wishes u'll surely give a run for money to Akhtar, sammer, gujral etc ;)

keep up this original creation bro :)

rock on
Jit
 
Bahut door se un kadamo ki aahat jan lete hain
Tijhe ae zindagi hum door se pehchaan lete hain
Khud apna faisla bhi ishq main kaafi nahi hota
Usse bhi kaise kar gujre jo dil main than lete hain


Jiyunga jab talak tere phasaane yaad aayenge
Kasak bankar mohabbat ke tarane yaad aayenge
Mujhe to zindagi bhar teri yaadon pe jeena hai
Tujhe bhi kya kabhi gujre jamane yaad aayenge
 
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vijay said:
Jiyunga jab talak tere phasaane yaad aayenge
Kasak bankar mohabbat ke tarane yaad aayenge
Mujhe to zindagi bhar teri yaadon pe jeena hai
Tujhe bhi kya kabhi gujre jamane yaad aayenge
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Wo kya kreingge yaad gujre jammane ko
Unhein to shauk hei sab kuchh bhool jane ka
Ye to hum hein ki lagga baithhe dil apna
Ye jante huwe bhi ki ke unhein nahin hei shokk kissi ko apnane ka.
 
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