Wafa aur mohabbat

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vijay said:
Tumhi ho woh jise kahati hai "khuda" duniya
Bacha sako to bacha lo doob raha hoon mein
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Julffon ke saye mei reh kar tumhari
Har aashyana bhool gaya
Parwadiggar nei tumko banaya hi aissa
Ke ye deewana Mandir jana bhool gaya
 
ooooooooooooohhh!!! you both(Vijay and Dev Sir) are extremely great...how such interesting stuff comes in your mind....do you both really compose it all on your own or take help from somewhere...anyway i must believe that you are really talented....touchwood! Wish it never comes to an end...but dear why don't you both write some book on it, so that others also enjoy this chain of creation....though i haven't read it whole but will take out some spare time to enjoy reading all this.
 
choudharyneelam said:
ooooooooooooohhh!!! you both(Vijay and Dev Sir) are extremely great...how such interesting stuff comes in your mind....do you both really compose it all on your own or take help from somewhere...anyway i must believe that you are really talented....touchwood! Wish it never comes to an end...but dear why don't you both write some book on it, so that others also enjoy this chain of creation....though i haven't read it whole but will take out some spare time to enjoy reading all this.
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Thanks a lot Neelam for the appreciation.

Regarding composition, well a few sher's i posted here are not mine otherwise more than 90% are my own composition.

Somehow trying to manage the momentum with Dev Sir.
 
Jab kabhi bhi dil kisi par meharbaan hota hai
To apne aap kisi ke liye duayeen nikalti hain
Ye woh sabse pyaara ahsaas hai is zindagi ka
Jise paane ke liye har ek jaan machalti hai
 
choudharyneelam said:
EXCELLENT!!
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Thanks for the appreciation Neelam

Vijay

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Chandni raat mein woh chhat pe aai hogi
Ek halki si teesh dil mein machal rahi hogi

Makhmali chandani mein woh chand sa chehra
Usko dekhkar to chandni bhi bahal rahi hogi

Ek chand aasmaan pe aur ek yahan jameen par
Kaun jyada pyara hai ye bhahas chal rahi hogi

Mera khayaal jab aaya hoga uske jehan mein
Uski mohabbat burf ki tarah pighal rahi hogi

Woh mere samne baithe hain par kya karen
Har tamanaa ansoo ke raste nikal rahi hogi

Kya woh mere pyar ko samajh payenge kabi
Meri har aarzoo jo ashkon mein bahi hogi

Woh kya samjhenge mohabbat kya hai kabhi
Unki bewafaaon se hi hurdum dosti rahi hogi

Wo meri zindagi mein aaye aur chale bhi gaye
Ye haseen zindagi aab "Vijay" ko zahar lag rahi hogi

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dats great...

good work!
vijay said:
Chandni raat mein woh chhat pe aai hogi
Ek halki si teesh dil mein machal rahi hogi

Makhmali chandani mein woh chand sa chehra
Usko dekhkar to chandni bhi bahal rahi hogi

Ek chand aasmaan pe aur ek yahan jameen par
Kaun jyada pyara hai ye bhahas chal rahi hogi

Mera khayaal jab aaya hoga uske jehan mein
Uski mohabbat burf ki tarah pighal rahi hogi

Woh mere samne baithe hain par kya karen
Har tamanaa ansoo ke raste nikal rahi hogi

Kya woh mere pyar ko samajh payenge kabi
Meri har aarzoo jo ashkon mein bahi hogi

Woh kya samjhenge mohabbat kya hai kabhi
Unki bewafaaon se hi hurdum dosti rahi hogi

Wo meri zindagi mein aaye aur chale bhi gaye
Ye haseen zindagi aab "Vijay" ko zahar lag rahi hogi
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dats great...

good work!

vijay said:
Chandni raat mein woh chhat pe aai hogi
Ek halki si teesh dil mein machal rahi hogi

Makhmali chandani mein woh chand sa chehra
Usko dekhkar to chandni bhi bahal rahi hogi

Ek chand aasmaan pe aur ek yahan jameen par
Kaun jyada pyara hai ye bhahas chal rahi hogi

Mera khayaal jab aaya hoga uske jehan mein
Uski mohabbat burf ki tarah pighal rahi hogi

Woh mere samne baithe hain par kya karen
Har tamanaa ansoo ke raste nikal rahi hogi

Kya woh mere pyar ko samajh payenge kabi
Meri har aarzoo jo ashkon mein bahi hogi

Woh kya samjhenge mohabbat kya hai kabhi
Unki bewafaaon se hi hurdum dosti rahi hogi

Wo meri zindagi mein aaye aur chale bhi gaye
Ye haseen zindagi aab "Vijay" ko zahar lag rahi hogi
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Thanks

Thanks Deepshika and Keshu for the appreciation,


Ye apne log hi hammari himmat hai
Yahan dushmano ka kya yakeen karen
Jo kahte kuchh hai aur karte kuchh aur
Kyon ye sochkar zindagi gamgeen karen


Thanks again Keshu and Pinky.


Vijay
 
unn unn unn unn..................

vijay said:
Thanks Deepshika and Keshu for the appreciation,
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vijay bhaii.........apne mera naam nahi likhaa........merii koii galtii bhaii,,,,,,????:confused:

le aapan te roos ge bhaaiii...........:(:(
 
dekh le e pinki..............

deepshika said:
isse e rahiyo katii sadaa
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eeeee pinkyy........ke paak rii saii tuu...........ARR SUNN TANNEY MAIN HAI NA DEKH LYUNGAA.............:mad::mad:

hahahhahahah...............killkii........[e............kiillkii.................ohhhoooohhh hhahahahahhaa .............marrrr geeeeeeeeeeeee ree mere raamm..............hahahahahahaha...............thaa leeeeeeee.........hahahahhahahahahahahahh..................arre manne nahii ISS MAJAK KARANN AALI MERII AATMAA NEY:D:D:D:D

...............hahahahahahhaahaha
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qxzvmoqy8neoqw8icfjheqwogf4ye2yhe2q'94[qyhf21
gf249yh438qyh1'fyh4oe'w2q4yo8mndgqym'ogxem'yegq..............u fislyaa haath...........hahhaha.........maare ree raam.........:D:D:D
 
ratheetheraist said:
vijay bhaii.........apne mera naam nahi likhaa........merii koii galtii bhaii,,,,,,????:confused:

le aapan te roos ge bhaaiii...........:(:(
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Yo Rupi sahi kah rahya hai Vikas bhai............

Ye pyar dil ka rishta hai Vikas bhai
Sirf kuchh shabdon ka khel nahi hai
Dil Milaaya hai to saath bhi nibhaana
Ye hamari dosti yahan koi khel nahi hain



Sorry Rathi Bhai i just came to know about your post after replying keshav and Deepshiks's comment brother.


How can i forget you Vikas. Yun naaraz thodi hoya kare mere bhai !!!!

Vijay
 
deepshika said:
isse e rahiyo katii sadaa :o
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pinky,,,,tu bhi inkey masteraan ki dhaall ho rahi sey,,,,,,,,, jukar woo inkey maarteyy haani darya kartey aur bss ,,,,nu kehya kartey ,,,,, " issey hi rehiyoo sadaa" hahahahahah khi khi khi:D :D :D :D :D
 
bhikki

bhikkdey!!!!
tu mer te hadey e lardnaa chaave se k?:confused:
naa bataa dey:rolleyes: :mad:
ratheetheraist said:
eeeee pinkyy........ke paak rii saii tuu...........ARR SUNN TANNEY MAIN HAI NA DEKH LYUNGAA.............:mad::mad:

hahahhahahah...............killkii........[e............kiillkii.................ohhhoooohhh hhahahahahhaa .............marrrr geeeeeeeeeeeee ree mere raamm..............hahahahahahaha...............thaa leeeeeeee.........hahahahhahahahahahahahh..................arre manne nahii ISS MAJAK KARANN AALI MERII AATMAA NEY:D

...............hahahahahahhaahaha
hahahahahhahaynoxrqwenxyfoewqxiuf'emqxzet'qxz
qxzvmoqy8neoqw8icfjheqwogf4ye2yhe2q'94[qyhf21
gf249yh438qyh1'fyh4oe'w2q4yo8mndgqym'ogxem'yegq..............u fislyaa haath...........hahhaha.........maare ree raam.........:D:D:D
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downtoearth said:
pinky,,,,tu bhi inkey masteraan ki dhaall ho rahi sey,,,,,,,,, jukar woo inkey maarteyy haani darya kartey aur bss ,,,,nu kehya kartey ,,,,, " issey hi rehiyoo sadaa" hahahahahah khi khi khi
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wah bhaii rupi.........maja aagyaa...........kati bhittar kii kukkarr jaane saii tu mere bhaaiii...........laagey tu mera lachle janam main SAGYA BHAII THAA..............................:rolleyes::rolleyes:

hahahahhahahahhahaen;n
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wcnyocetn.ecgwny;egcmuecgum:D:D:D

main marunga aaj.........koi bachana chahta ho te bacha liyoooo.......arrr kisee ke selak padti ho te maar dyoo;);):D:D
 
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