panward said:Good job. Let me try to take it further....
Unke aakhri deedar ko saanse chalti rahi,
Maut bhi thi ke aa aa ke talti rahee.
Vijay Bhai thoda aur zor lagaao. Ise puri Ghazal banate hain. Agla sher aap do. Aakhiri sher main try karunga.
Ok Daksh, sorry for delay as i was away. just read ur reply.
Waqt ki dhoop mein pighal jayenge woh ek din
Yahi sochkar har roz ye hamaari sham dhalti rahi
Ye zindagi ka karvan rukega nahin kahin bhi
Unki yaad thi jo "Vijay" ke saath hardam chalti rahi
rana1979 said:Kismet se apni sabko shikayat kyu hai,
Jo nahi mil sakta usi se mohabbat kyu hai,
Kitne khade hai raho pe,
Phir bhi dil ko usi ki chahat kyu hai.
Kaise hum apni mohabbat ko bhulaa de
Ye pyar bhara dil kaise kisi aur pe vaar de
Woh humen nahin mil sakta to ye unki kismat
Kya unhe koi humsa milega jo unpe jaan nisaar de
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