Rajendra Kumar Kalkhunde (Jun 15, 2003 12:51 a.m.):
Doston, Khwateen, Buzurgon, Naujawanon sabse pahle Nitin bhai ka bahut bahut Shukriya ki hum dil jalon ke liye Time pass me Shairee ko jagah dee...Poora bharosa hai mujhe ki Sabhi Shayar bhaiyon ko upna upna hunar dikhaane ka mauka milega...Sabse gujarish hai ki wo upnee Shairee sirf yaheen post karre. Jab yahan par bahut sare sher ho jayenge to ho sakta hai usko Jatland ke banner tale publish krwa saken...Please mention jaroor kar dena jo aapke upne original hon aur jo kisi aur ke hon.
Rajendra
1. 4 L I N E S...OR MORE (Rinu Singh)
last updated at Jun 14, 2003 06:31 a.m. (1 times)
Toot Jaate Hain Sabhi Rishte Magar
Dil Se Dil Ka Raabta Apni Jagah
Dil Ko Hai Tujh Se Na Milne Ka Yaqeen
Tujh Se Milne Ki Dua Apni Jagah
Mast Nazron se dekh lenaa tha
Agar tamanna thi aazmane ki
Hum to behust youn hi ho jaate
Kya zaroorat thi muskurane ki
Chehrey Per Banawat Ka Gussa,
Aankhon Say Chalakta Pyar Bhi Hai,
Is Shauq-E-Ada Ko Kya Kahiye
Inkar Bhi Hai Iqraar Bhi Hai.
Mere Dil Main Koi Aawaz Ubhar Aati hai
Tere Hi Baal Bikhar Jaata Hain Diwaron Pe
Teri Hi Shakal Kitabon Main Nazar Aati Hai
Faasle Jism Ko To Dour Le Jaate Hain
Par Dilon Ke Shahar To Ujarte Nahi
Aankhon Se Aankhon Ka Rishta Tut Jaye Bhi To
Saath Dekhe Hue Khwab To Mit Te nahi
Apne Aagaaz Se Aaaj tak Zindagi
Teri Hi Yaad Main Gum Rahi
Phir Bhi Jaane Kyon Yeh Ihsaas Hai
Jaise Chaahat Meri Kam Rahi
Ek Musafir Ne Raat Pichlay Pahar
Apne Mehboob Ke Na Aane Par
Kar Diya Taj Mahal Ke Tukre
Aab-E-Jamuna Main Phaik Kar Pathar
Kal Mila Waqt To Zufain Teri Suljha Doonga
Aaaj Uljha Hoon Zara Waqt Ke Sulajhne Main
Yoon To Sulajh Jatee hain Uljhee Zulfain
Umar Kat Jati Hai Waqt Ke Sulajhne Main
Dil Ko Manana Gar Hota Aaasaaan
Na Karta Kisi Ko Yoon Ye Pareshaan
Tanha Na Rahta Bhari Mehfil Main
Na Hoti Woh Halat Jo Ho Na Bayaan
Sookh Jaate Hain Lub, Lufz Milte Nahi
Hota Nahi Humse Ishq Bayaan
Unhe Kaise Bataoon Dil Ki Lagi
Kaise Sikhaoon Aankhon Ki Zubaan
Hum Bewafa Har Giz Na Thay
Par Hum Wafa Kar Na Sakay
Humain Mili Us Ki Saza
Jo Khata Hum Kar Na Sakay
Khudaa jab husn deta hai
nazaakat aaa hi jati hai
Kadam chun chun kar rakhti ho
kamar balkha hi jaati hai
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Rajendra Kumar...
Masha-allah Rinu Ji...Bahut hi khoob likhaa...
1.Isq ke samunddar me dil ki kashti utaar tu dee
dekho ub yah lahren hume kahan le jaate hain
2. bahut aankhen khol kar safar kiya humne
bas ek baar aanken band kia kee, dil ko luta baithe
3. Ajeeb si khushboo hai, yahan ki aabo hawa me
Lagta hai hum, koonch-e-yaar me aa gaye
4. Socha thaa mere marne par aaogee tum, mujhse milne
Magar Zalim jamane ne marte hi meri aankhen band karde
5. Jhatoko ne yoon Zulfen, jaljala aa jayegaa
Girega kisi gareeb ka aasiyan, tera kia jayega
6. Gore se dekh lo hamari surat ko aaj,
kahin jal na rahee ho shama aakhri baar.
barkarar rahenge tere hushn ke jalwe,
Hum rahen na rahen, karne ko tera intzaar
Khuda Mahfooz rakhe hushn walon ko....hahahaa ...aur hum yoon hi likhte rahen...LOL
Rajendra
Date: Jun 14, 2003 on 10:48 a.m.
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Rinu Ji:
Padh kar aapki 4 line
khushi mele dil ko mine
bas aur kya kahun
aapki ye line padhta hi rahu
Very good job, Rinu, I am most impressed !
Budh
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When your means are honest and your conscience is clean, all good things in life come your way!
Budh Nashier, M.Sc.(Hons.), Ph.D.
Date: Jun 14, 2003 on 11:21 a.m.
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Rinu very nice -keep up
Araj kiya hae
Gumm suda jasan yad karata hae
Aak tuta huwa glass rasatay mae
Ham to uus rah ko karay sajjdda
JIS RAHH SY ROJ RINU GUJARATI HAE !!!!!!
USS RAH KO BHI KARAY SAJJDDA
JIS RAH SY SAEYAR GUJARATAY HAN !!!!!!
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Jay Jawan Jay Kisan Jay Jat Shaheed
Date: Jun 14, 2003 on 11:46 a.m.
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Rinu Ji,
Bhot Badhiya !
Hum Bewafa Har Giz Na Thay
Par Hum Wafa Kar Na Sakay
Humain Mili Us Ki Saza
Jo Khata Hum Kar Na Sakay
Shalimar film kee yaad dila dee
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Everyone thinks of changing the world, but no one thinks of changing himself.
Date: Jun 14, 2003 on 12:55 p.m.
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wah wah dudee uncle, rinu ji, rajendra uncle...ekdum mehfil see jama dee...
shayad shayad kehte kehte sahyad ne shayar ko mara,
ek din woh aayegee yahin sochta raha bechara,
shayad aur shayar ka koi rishta juda hua hai,
tabhi shayar kee kabar par shayad shayad khuda hua hai....
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JATS DO IT !!!
Date: Jun 14, 2003 on 03:07 p.m.
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Mandeep Bamal (Jun 14, 2003 11:07 a.m.):
wah wah dudee uncle, rinu ji, rajendra uncle...ekdum mehfil see jama dee...
shayad shayad kehte kehte sahyad ne shayar ko mara,
ek din woh aayegee yahin sochta raha bechara,
shayad aur shayar ka koi rishta juda hua hai,
tabhi shayar kee kabar par shayad shayad khuda hua hai....
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Haan mandeep theek kahte ho...intzaar me zindgi kat jaati hai...Shayad Shayad kahte...
1.Hamare paas thaa bhi kiya, ek sabr ke sivai
Wo bhi aaj luta baithe hain, teri intzaar mai
2. Le liya hai humne makan, raaste par unke
Ne kar sake wo bahana jis se, waqat milne ka
3. Jab se liya hai humne makan, raaste par unke
Nikalne lage hain wo humse, nazren bacha bacha kar..
4. Aa jana dekh kar, jalta hua diya tu meri mazar par
Chale jana fir, phool do chaar daal kar..
hahaha...Shayad wo kabhi aayengee...Shayad... hahahahahahhaha
Rajendra
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Dimag se hindu hoon, aur dil ka hoon musalmaan
Hum hain es jahan ke, aur hamara hai sara jahan....
Date: Jun 14, 2003 on 03:18 p.m.
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hmmmmmmm....rinu ji....badiya hai
Date: Jun 14, 2003 on 04:07 p.m.
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ShUkRiYa.........ShUkRiYa
Dudee uncle Ji, Nashier Uncle .Rajendra Mama ji, Mandeep Ji, Ashok Ji...........
ShUkRiYa EvErYoNe......
ReGaRdS,
RiNu
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Dharmpal Singh Dudee (Jun 14, 2003 07:46 a.m.):
Rinu very nice -keep up
Araj kiya hae
Gumm suda jasan yad karata hae
Aak tuta huwa glass rasatay mae
Ham to uus rah ko karay sajjdda
JIS RAHH SY ROJ RINU GUJARATI HAE !!!!!!
USS RAH KO BHI KARAY SAJJDDA
JIS RAH SY SAEYAR GUJARATAY HAN !!!!!!
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Date: Jun 14, 2003 on 04:22 p.m.
maine theek hi kaha tha rinu ji aap lajawab hein
verey very nice rinu ji keep it up !!!
Date: Jun 14, 2003 on 05:04 p.m.
Dharmpal Takhar
nice to see this quality shayari
meri taraf se bhi kuch (copied from 'Majaaz')
fir meri aankh ho gayi nam-naak
fir kisi ne mizaz poocha hai..
kuch tumhari nigah kaafir thi
kuch mujhe bhi kharaab hona tha
ye bhi koi aana hai ki bas rasman chale aaye
ye milna khaak milna hai ki dil se dil nahin milta
sabka to mudawa* kar daala
apna hi mudawa kar na sake,
sabke to gareban see daale
apna hi gareban bhool gaye.
vida..
Date: Jun 14, 2003 on 06:26 p.m.
Simran Malik
fabulous shayari...
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jaat ke thaath
Date: Jun 14, 2003 on 06:41 p.m.
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last updated at Jun 15, 2003 03:10 a.m. (1 times)
1. Ne jaane kyoon aa jatee hai roj yah kambakht raat
Hoke mazboor hatani padtee hain nigahen, tere raste se
2. Ek baar to utar aao goya tum hamari Zameen par
Kia umar bhar muskuraati rahogee baithkar
chaand par.
3. e hawaon tum aakar mere labon se chipak jao
Suna hai tum unke rukhsaar ko chookar aayee ho.
4. Tere rukhsar yoon lagte hain, jaise bhadakte Shole
Aur zulfon ka dhuan utha raha hai aasman tak.
5. Es andheri raat me kyoon jati ho hume yoon chor kar
Isq ke khat padh lene do upne chehre ki roshnee mai.
Rajendra
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Date: Jun 15, 2003 on 02:49 a.m.
