Wafa aur mohabbat

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Nice Shamsher !

shamshermalik said:
Vo nazaron kaa teer tha yaa uske dil ki baaten
Vo kamp-kpate lab the yaa labon par aati baaten
kabhi usse nazaren milii to kabhi vo hilte lab dekhe
uthkar vo chale gaye esse pahle ki hum sambhal paate
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Woh sanam jo dil chura kar ke le gaya hamaara
Ab unke chehre ki baat karen ya unki adaaon ki
Kyun jalte hain log mohabbat karne waalon se
Jamana kuchh bhi kare aakhir hogi jeet wafaaon ki
 
ritu said:
apni aklal ka h sabo andaza
kisme kum h ya kisme jyada
hmmm fir bhi kahte h ki akl apni aur dhan dusro ka jyada lagta h:)
himyati ban ke yu jo talwar leke khade ho
dil paane ki ye ada nirali h
hmm par kahte h na mohbbat aur jang me sab jyaz h:)
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Dear Ritu

I think it's a poetry section and we are doing poetry here but what you are posting here doesn't seems poetry by any means so pls keep posting that stuff and i am not going to reply such kind of poetry.

I really afraid that what you are posting is poetry:rolleyes: :p :p :p :D

Regards
Neelam
 
hi

Kahan koi aisa mila jispar duniya luta dete,
Har ek ne dhokha diya kis kisko bhula dete...
Apne dil ka dard dil main hi daba kar rakha hai-2,
Agar karte bayan to mehfil ko rulaa dete... :(
 
really!!! what about ur poetry???.give it a second look u will know it.
hmm dusro ko sikh dene se pahle apne gireban me jakh liyo karo mohtarma!!!
choudharyneelam said:
Dear Ritu

I think it's a poetry section and we are doing poetry here but what you are posting here doesn't seems poetry by any means so pls keep posting that stuff and i am not going to reply such kind of poetry.

I really afraid that what you are posting is poetry:rolleyes: :p :p :p :D

Regards
Neelam
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sacrohal said:
Kahan koi aisa mila jispar duniya luta dete,
Har ek ne dhokha diya kis kisko bhula dete...
Apne dil ka dard dil main hi daba kar rakha hai-2,
Agar karte bayan to mehfil ko rulaa dete... :(
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Abhi bhi mohabbat zinda hai is duniyaan mein yaaro
Lekin ye bhi maana khi dhokha yahaan bahut milta hai
Dil ki baaten ye bedarad jamaaana kya shamjhega yahan
Jahan logon ko auron to tadpaane mein sukooun milta hai
 
For the great shaayar



Woh bhi kya shaayari karte hain lafzon mein
Pahle woh apni pahli line ko dusri line se milaaye
Kya dusron ko dosh dena hi shaayari hai yahan
Khuda maaf kare aisi shaayari se humko bachaaye
 
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Dear Neelam and Ritu,

Please donot fight and if you have to then use private message...kam se kam log to nahin hansege. Hope you donot mind my suggestion.

Regards,
Shamsher
 
I can understand ur concern shamsher but it was not me who started it .I did not say anything to her.
and vj for u also if ur a jat act like a jat do not use indirect words.if u consider ur self a great shyar i do not have any problem but that does not mean u can point at other peoples talent.tu raji rah apne wafa er moh bbat gel .me t aage t isme jakhan bhi na ayu.continue crying with ur rotdu team.:mad: :mad: :mad: .merte eb jo kahna ho na direct direct khiyo .fer me bhi direct direct
juwab dugi line t line mila ke .sabne bera t pata yo wafa er mohbbat ka rola k h.U know what i am saying
shamshermalik said:
Dear Neelam and Ritu,

Please donot fight and if you have to then use private message...kam se kam log to nahin hansege. Hope you donot mind my suggestion.

Regards,
Shamsher
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Pahla lafz mohabbat hai jo humne yahan seekha hai
Dusre lafz ka naam izzat hai jo humne di hai aur pai hai
Jo apne aap ko khuda maante hai unko kya kahen aab
Humne to bus apnepan aur sachhaai ki daulat pai hai
 
Kisi chhalaawe ko humne mohabbat samajh liya
Kya is tarah ki nadaani hum bar bar karenge
Jo dusron ki salaah par zindagi lootaate hain
Woh to apni khushiyan barbaad har bar karenge
 
Hey Vijay,

Dusron ki ladaayee kyon udhar leta hai...nibatne de un dono ko apas me.

Shamsher




vijay said:
For the great shaayar



Woh bhi kya shaayari karte hain lafzon mein
Pahle woh apni pahli line ko dusri line se milaaye
Kya dusron ko dosh dena hi shaayari hai yahan
Khuda maaf kare aisi shaayari se humko bachaaye
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Dear Neelam,

I think when someone was copy pasting here we objected and advised to write whatever he can. So honestly speaking you are wrong here. It's a person's style to write and if you donot like then better ignore it.

One morething. have you heard the song

Mera kuch saman tumahre pass pada hai,mera saman lota do.

This songs looks like a paper cutting and so was told by R D Burman when he was asked to compose a tune for it.

I think rather than discouraging someone, praise him/her.

Shamsher


choudharyneelam said:
Dear Ritu

I think it's a poetry section and we are doing poetry here but what you are posting here doesn't seems poetry by any means so pls keep posting that stuff and i am not going to reply such kind of poetry.

I really afraid that what you are posting is poetry:rolleyes: :p :p :p :D

Regards
Neelam
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Ye raaste hain mohabbat ke manzil ko paayenge ek din
Hamaare dil mein kya hai woh unko bataayenge ek din
Lakh kosheesh kar le chahe ye mohabbat ke dushman
Jisko chaha hai usko apna bana kar dhikhayenge ek din
 
sacrohal said:
Kahan koi aisa mila jispar duniya luta dete,
Har ek ne dhokha diya kis kisko bhula dete...
Apne dil ka dard dil main hi daba kar rakha hai-2,
Agar karte bayan to mehfil ko rulaa dete... :(
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Yun dhokhe kha ke haar na maano dost
Abhi mohabbat kahin tumse chhupi hui hai
Zara ek baar dil ki aankhen khol ke use pahchano
Vo tumhara liye kahin palken bichha baithi hui hai
 
vijay said:
Ye raaste hain mohabbat ke manzil ko paayenge ek din
Hamaare dil mein kya hai woh unko bataayenge ek din
Lakh kosheesh kar le chahe ye mohabbat ke dushman
Jisko chaha hai usko apna bana kar dhikhayenge ek din
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Mushkil raahein hon kitni hum na kabhi ghabrayenge
Haath thaamegi zindagi ek din duniya ko dikhlayenge
Roke kisi dushman ke hum na kabhi rukenge
Saathi pe hai itna bharosa ki aage badhte chale jaayenge
 
Es duniyan ke kahne se jo badal jaaye waade se
Unse bhi kya koi umeed kare saath nibhaane ki
'Wafa aur mohabbat' nibhaane ka zazba ho jinme
Woh hi jurrat kare hamaare dil ke paas aane ki
 
shamshermalik said:
Dear Neelam,

I think when someone was copy pasting here we objected and advised to write whatever he can. So honestly speaking you are wrong here. It's a person's style to write and if you donot like then better ignore it.

One morething. have you heard the song

Mera kuch saman tumahre pass pada hai,mera saman lota do.

This songs looks like a paper cutting and so was told by R D Burman when he was asked to compose a tune for it.

I think rather than discouraging someone, praise him/her.

Shamsher
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Hello Shamsher

I agree with you...and accept that i'm wrong here to reply like that at that moment....i also like to encourage everyone as even i also don't write that good like you all but just enjoying the happy environment....ok now no more rude replies to anyone from my side...and dear thanks for nice advice....i'll take care of that...sorry for disturbing the enjoyable mood of everyone....from next time whatever i don't like i'll just ignore it....now pls you get back to your mood and post some more good poetries here...:)

Regards
Neelam
 
Kal ek chorahe se gujarate waqt kuch aisa khyal aaya....

Naa kuchh khone ka darr na kuch paane ki tamanna,
Phir es chorahe par mere kadam kaise thithak gaye,
tera ghar peechhe chhoda, yaadon se naata toda
Aaj lagta hai mujhe, tujhse bahut door nikal gaye
 
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